Bio: 10 (Has it all, origins, powers, and revelations)
Costume: 7,5 (Because you don't seem to have "one" but the ones you do have look neat
Name: 9 (same as above)
Originality: At first a 6, for a normal lantern, but as your bio engulfs i can spot a more diverse characteristic. making it up to the 8-9
Powers: hmm... you have LOTS of powers and attributes, but then again your weaknesses prevent you from overusing them, we go from lantern, to magic,all in all, you have too many powers, you can virtually control everything around you. 5-6
"when a person shining in blue light saved him by blowing him away with a strange patterned force field"
"Powers: Izaac is a junior master in the artform called Emblymian Naronya. (Can be translated into English as "Applied Symbol Magic".) Emblymian Naronya works in the way that Izaac can with his mind manipulate naronyan particles (the particle that most magic and unexplained powers in the Universe work through) to manifest as holographic projections of light, and by forming the light into 5 main symbol patterns, he can generate lots of various effects."
I forgot all about this thread and now reading back in it has made me laugh a number of times.
I'm going to try and throw up a list of some people, then possibly do others as they ask later tonight and this week. Except I won't be rating on writing as we have a thread dedicated to that already. I will rate Originality of the persons name. What I think their look ranks as. Their Bio (if they have one) then power set. Most likely don't expect anything tonight, unless it is really really late..
" I forgot all about this thread and now reading back in it has made me laugh a number of times. I'm going to try and throw up a list of some people, then possibly do others as they ask later tonight and this week. Except I won't be rating on writing as we have a thread dedicated to that already. I will rate Originality of the persons name. What I think their look ranks as. Their Bio (if they have one) then power set. Most likely don't expect anything tonight, unless it is really really late.. "
Could I impose on you to get your opinion on Espada when you do these up?
Name: 7 (Most likely was from Bleach, but I like it's more classical definition. Being a Spanish sword from the 15th century. One normally worn than used in battle. Look: 8 (Dark clad ninja type warrior is always a fan favorite) Bio: 7.5 (try staggering the 4 pictures you have at the top part, it will help fill out the wall of text more) Powers: 7 (warping speed part can be difficult to get across in how we rpg here, speedsters in general imo)
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Thanks :)
First, I didn't even know that there was an Espada in Bleach when I made this character. I was going with the original Spanish.
I actually meant to write out that part of his powers xD
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