you know what this is about
will start my post now
"Nighthunter says:"it was a good post, but rushing at top speed after receiving that many bullets can be counted as no-selling. That's just an advice for future reference will start my next post"
Whoops sorry didnt relize that.
now will start the post for real, stupid movie it keeps me distracted lol
one thing, you are doing no-selling again
you are getting the "I need to take some hits" very well, but that's only one part of receiving damage
if you are injured, you have to act as if you are injured, or at least describe how it hurted you and/or how that affected you
Post Edited:2008-05-22 18:59:21
pay atention to that post
wanted to give you a perfect example of acting after receiving damage
now, you don't have to go to those extremes, but you'll get the idea
and adapt your reactions depending on what the attack you suffer is
it ain't the same to be damaged by a bomb than a knife, neither do they have the same effects on you
"Okay thanks man: I tryed to use it by saying how i limped after the explosion and will probably learn use of it better.btw i posted if you havent already noticed"
sorry, was posting on another thread
will also do a post in a story rpg, those are the ones that take me more time to do, so it will take a while
if you are gone for when I come back we'll restart tomorrow or on saturday
"kk i posted too. What sorta details do you mean just whats around us or somthing more complicated"
sorry for the delay, lights went off
putting details is a hard thing to explain
I guess I would put it as a way to explain your atack, how every atack is after the other, how you react to the attacks like what has changed now, what part of you did it injure, what's the effect that the attack cause to you.
something like that
"I dunno if i log off it probably just because im restarting my comp or somthing i should be on for a few more hours. Although if you want to make one last post then do the rest later then feel free."
I was asking to know if you'll be here when I post, not feeling it right now but probably will in a few hours
Use your keyboard!
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