Well even for the start you could have written some more. How does the arena look? Are there spectators? How are they acting? What are you guys thinking as you fight? How do the characters look? Etc etc.
Magneto walked through the tunnel towards the arena. He could hear the echo of his footsteps and suddenly the roar of the fans. He entered the arena while the way behind him slammed shut with adamantium bars. This was it, the battle was soon to begin. He looked at the faces of the fans waiting for their favorite team to win. Then he noticed his enemy, a man named Buckshot, he had waited long for the battle.
Magneto was ready to fight but a little afraid; he trembled as he said, "Time to Die Bucky."
Magneto walked threw the tunnel towards the arena. He could hear the echo of his foots steps and suddenly the roar of the fans. He enter the arena while the way behind him slammed shut with adamantium bars. This was it the battle was soon to begin he looked at the faces of the fans waiting for their favorite team to win. Then he noticed his enemy a man named Buckshot he had waited long for the battle.
cool on that note im a way to bed catch you villians later have a good one (by the way is the arena like the danger room you know can change it to what we want each battle)
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