questions here. i know, I know I'm gonna get squashed like a bug.
Karung vs Mighty Magneto Rematch OCC
That's true, I want to impress you, and carve my own name into the legends of the vine. INstead of being a newbie or a noob
This F 22 Raptor, is fullly loaded with plenty of firepower and arms to spare (just in case you didn't know, the F 22 is a military plane and the best plae in military history
I want you try add a little more detail about your surrounding in your posts helps people visualize whats going on easier
Mighty Magneto says:
"I want you try add a little more detail about your surrounding in your posts helps people visualize whats going on easier"
Enlighten me
Alright your last post
Karung then quickly jumped and was about to land on his side when his arm oustretched he used his arm to keep him in the air while doing a total 360 kick trying to knock out all sentinels sorrounding him. He then jumped again propeled by his arm instead of his legs. In midair he corrected himself then landed on his two feet. He then attacked some sentinels, it would be hard for the untrained eye to keep track of his movements.
Doesn't really give me any idea as a reader where you are.
Perhaps something more like this
Karung then quickly jumped into the air but before he hit the ground he outstretched his arm and grabbed onto a pillar swinging around it. As he swung he tried kicking down the sentinels that had surrounded him.
Just a start but get what i mean
I hope so could add a degree to your RPG skills
Description of the environment around you and how you interact with it adds alot to your posts
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