Karung vs Mighty Magneto Rematch OCC

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questions here. i know, I know I'm gonna get squashed like a bug.

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#2  Edited By Mighty Magneto

Alright man this should be a fun match

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Why should it be fun? Because you like killiing heroes with ease?

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#4  Edited By Mighty Magneto

Enjoy killing heros sure but I do hope you put up a fight won't be much fun otherwise

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Hopefully, check your PM inbox please

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#6  Edited By Mighty Magneto

I like the setting should make for an interesting RPG battle good idea

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No wonder, it's your lair, it's your home turf

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#8  Edited By Mighty Magneto

Ya but adds a little twist to it makes it more then just another Battle RPG

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That's true, I want to impress you, and carve my own name into the legends of the vine. INstead of being a newbie or a noob

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#10  Edited By Mighty Magneto

Alright this might be a good start show that you can do better RPGs more story involved.

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This F 22 Raptor, is fullly loaded with plenty of firepower and arms to spare (just in case you didn't know, the F 22 is a military plane and the best plae in military history

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#12  Edited By Mighty Magneto

I did know what it was lets hope you can live up to it

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#13  Edited By Mighty Magneto

I want you try add a little more detail about your surrounding in your posts helps people visualize whats going on easier

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Mighty Magneto says:

"I want you try add a little more detail about your surrounding in your posts helps people visualize whats going on easier"

Enlighten me

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#15  Edited By Mighty Magneto

Alright your last post

Karung then quickly jumped and was about to land on his side when his arm oustretched he used his arm to keep him in the air while doing a total 360 kick trying to knock out all sentinels sorrounding him. He then jumped again propeled by his arm instead of his legs. In midair he corrected himself then landed on his two feet. He then attacked some sentinels, it would be hard for the untrained eye to keep track of his movements.

Doesn't really give me any idea as a reader where you are.

Perhaps something more like this

Karung then quickly jumped into the air but before he hit the ground he outstretched his arm and grabbed onto a pillar swinging around it. As he swung he tried kicking down the sentinels that had surrounded him.

Just a start but get what i mean

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Thank you, I'll someday use your advice

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#17  Edited By Mighty Magneto

I hope so could add a degree to your RPG skills

Description of the environment around you and how you interact with it adds alot to your posts

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I posted