Karung vs Mighty Magneto Rematch OCC - RPG

#1 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

questions here. i know, I know I'm gonna get squashed like a bug.

#2 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Alright man this should be a fun match

#3 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Why should it be fun? Because you like killiing heroes with ease?

#4 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Enjoy killing heros sure but I do hope you put up a fight won't be much fun otherwise

#5 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Hopefully, check your PM inbox please

#6 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

I like the setting should make for an interesting RPG battle good idea

#7 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

No wonder, it's your lair, it's your home turf

#8 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Ya but adds a little twist to it makes it more then just another Battle RPG

#9 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

That's true, I want to impress you, and carve my own name into the legends of the vine. INstead of being a newbie or a noob

#10 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Alright this might be a good start show that you can do better RPGs more story involved.

#11 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

This F 22 Raptor, is fullly loaded with plenty of firepower and arms to spare (just in case you didn't know, the F 22 is a military plane and the best plae in military history

#12 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

I did know what it was lets hope you can live up to it

#13 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

I want you try add a little more detail about your surrounding in your posts helps people visualize whats going on easier

#14 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Mighty Magneto says:

"I want you try add a little more detail about your surrounding in your posts helps people visualize whats going on easier"

Enlighten me

#15 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Alright your last post

Karung then quickly jumped and was about to land on his side when his arm oustretched he used his arm to keep him in the air while doing a total 360 kick trying to knock out all sentinels sorrounding him. He then jumped again propeled by his arm instead of his legs. In midair he corrected himself then landed on his two feet. He then attacked some sentinels, it would be hard for the untrained eye to keep track of his movements.

Doesn't really give me any idea as a reader where you are.

Perhaps something more like this

Karung then quickly jumped into the air but before he hit the ground he outstretched his arm and grabbed onto a pillar swinging around it. As he swung he tried kicking down the sentinels that had surrounded him.

Just a start but get what i mean

#16 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

Thank you, I'll someday use your advice

#17 Posted by Mighty Magneto (12987 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

I hope so could add a degree to your RPG skills

Description of the environment around you and how you interact with it adds alot to your posts

#18 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - 5 years, 3 months ago - Show Bio

I posted