#1 Edited by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio

Let me tell you about a woman whose story is the bees knees.  Born and raised up in Boston Massachusetts, the so called redheaded mystery has had quite thee exhilarating life span.  From the age of three she knew exactly what type of woman she'd be. And here she is in the modern days getting paid to do what she's always been good at....fibbing.  My oh my isn't that just superb? The lying game is a game that not just anyone can play.  You gotta have the right type of credentials if you catch my drift.  She's got beauty, brains, and powers that often drives the boys bananas.  She's a woman of conviction so don't you dare underestimate this lovely lass for a second.  She'll tear your heart out...literally. 

Tick Tock

She walked down these steep stairs as if cameras were violently flashing.  Murderess on the loose!  A headline sure to sell some substantial amount of paper.  And by the grace of heaven her presence remained unnoticed or everything would have unravel prematurely.  As daylight reflected off golden cream sunglasses the violet eyed enigma carelessly applied vanilla balm onto her succulent honeybee lips.  She smiled an honest smile as small children playfully strolled by.  "Missy?", whispered a gawky young boy, his hand hesitantly tugging on her mink fur coat.  She didn't like interruptions, especially so when it interfered with daily activities.  However, his innocence couldn't go along ignored. 
 
"Yes?", she smiled from ear to ear, "What can I do for you?" In the vicinity of children her snobbish persona fades almost entirely.  Some might say she's criminally insane, but everyone should know the lying game has no ending.  Her facade knows no bounds.  Nevertheless the quintessential bombshell caresses the shoulder of an awkward young man.  "Don't be shy", she whispered quite flirtatiously, her unusual methods certainly withholding no moral code.  Whilst calmly sliding her beauty enhancements into a rather exquisite purse, she noticed the lumbering boy nervously shaking.  "Are you okay?", her voice carried an ounce of genuine concern.   
 
"...Clarice?", the seemingly frazzled boy murmured her name as clear as morning sky, "...Are you Clarice Michelle?" He stood upright, his round brown eyes easily pierced through her well thought out visage.  And for a second she considered vanishing.  She could easily disappear without a trace, but that'd mean shafting society from her peculiar capabilities.  What fun would life become if she went into reclusive hiding?  Her existence would no doubt become meaningless if she didn't do something productive.  "Yes...I am", she shakily pulled off Ralph Lauren sunglasses while hesitantly replying.  Was this some intricate hoax or was this the fella she searched for since five in the morning?  She supposes it must be the former instead of the latter.  Thankfully, she is correct.
 
"I have the information you want...", he bluntly retorted, pressing his school notebook against her beating chest.  "Is this everything?", she instinctively questioned, her apparent need for information evident.  She licked her lips enticingly as she carefully flipped open the handwritten notepad.  Her current life's objective cozily lay atop her glove covered palms.  Everything she wished for had come true.  A sinister smile stitched onto a face so flawless.  "T-This w-was every bit of data we obtained on the Knightfall family", his voice uttered like a rehearsed monologue.  For the first time in a while she felt a sense of euphoria.  It was plain to see her malicious motivations.  Her dreams on the cusp of becoming tangible reality.  "Thank you!", she happily exclaimed, and though she was primed to depart this boy still tugged.   
 
"May I ask why you went through so many troubles...", he swallowed his own saliva worryingly, "...for this book?" She liked his growing bravado.  It was something to wholeheartedly admire.  In time he'd make a strong man with an even stronger backbone.  Maybe in the future she'd have the pleasure of working by his side.  Until than she'll willingly converse.  "I'm going to ruin the Knightfalls", she giggly responded.  Too all appearances she is a gorgeous gal whose intentions seem misplaced.  However, no one really knows the horrors she's faced because of Jayden Knightfall.  And for his transgressions those children will pay dearly.  In time she'll obtain that sweet revenge, but for now she'll have to leave this boy to his own devices.  And so she slid on her crispy clean sunglasses, licked her vanilla flavored lips, and attached headphones to her reddened ears.  Her name is Clarice Michelle and her story has only just begun. 
  
#2 Posted by Urban_Ronin (9935 posts) - - Show Bio

hahaha listening to the soundtrack while reading it was easy to see how you captured the mood in the opening. The dialog helped too. Nice job.

#3 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Quintus_Knightfall: Thank you kind sir. 
 
Looks like your family has an antagonist ;)
#4 Posted by Mr. Mercury (19260 posts) - - Show Bio

It was dope. Had a strong atmosphere. And I like the conflict your building with the Knightfalls.

#5 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Mr. Mercury: Objective succeeded! 
#6 Posted by Urban_Ronin (9935 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass said:

@Quintus_Knightfall: Thank you kind sir.
Looks like your family has an antagonist ;)

I'll be waiting

(luv AHS)

#7 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Quintus_Knightfall : It's gonna be a ball 
  
(Yo the finale was just wowtastic...)
#8 Posted by Urban_Ronin (9935 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: I still dont get the Alien stuff though....

#9 Edited by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Quintus_Knightfall: I think its better left off unexplained. Mad people in that era claimed they were abducted so it def kept in with the time period. And it leaves everything to the imagination.  I would of liked an explanation but ehh it was still gucci for what it's worth. 
 
^Does she remind you Lana Del Rey...I got some vibes during the episode lol
#10 Posted by Surkit (11112 posts) - - Show Bio

lol first line sounds like Mercy

Good story

#11 Posted by Urban_Ronin (9935 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: I never thought of it like that (the time period and people saying they had been abducted).

I like how they had the same cast but completely different roles. I'm already waiting for season 3

<_< >_> who?

#12 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Quintus_Knightfall: haha you don't know her? lol Besides that I'm def wondering how their gonna top this season. 
@Surkit: Oh really? Thank you :) 
#13 Posted by Surkit (11112 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: Redhead from Mass, instantly went to her in my head lol So you dropping Antonio?

#14 Posted by Jo_Harvelle (5 posts) - - Show Bio

@Surkit said:

@Clara Mass: Redhead from Mass

Synonymous with Cass :P

#15 Posted by Urban_Ronin (9935 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: Nope lol its all good though. Same here. And what time period will it be in. The old west? Maybe the 90's? Maybe another country....its like Grand Theft Auto

#16 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Surkit: She's always been a redhead! Among other things xD
 
No way. He's still got a story I plan on telling.  Maybe not as prominent but I made him for a reason *cue dramatic music
#17 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Quintus_Knightfall: It's so true. I think the only thing I disliked were the uselessness of Adam Levine and Jennifer Dewan Tatum.  I felt like anyone could of played those two.... 
#18 Posted by Jo_Harvelle (5 posts) - - Show Bio

If anybody spoils me on AHS, heads will roll.

#19 Posted by Surkit (11112 posts) - - Show Bio

@Jo_Harvelle said:

@Surkit said:

@Clara Mass: Redhead from Mass

Synonymous with Cass :P

lol exactly.

@Clara Mass:

Can't help it that sh!ts ingrained :P Nice though It draws a better pic of her for me when I post next. Should be tomorrow if I can get in the Max mindset, need to work more on that grail/Templar background it feels wasted.

You still doing Seven Psychos?

#20 Posted by Quintus_Knightfall (84653 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: Oh sh!t I forgot about those two. I didnt mind though. I like when stars play bit roles sometimes.

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#21 Posted by _Sojourn_ (19243 posts) - - Show Bio

I love Clara. I feel like she'd be the witch that everyone can't help but love

#22 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Surkit: Cool beans. If you need any help I'm a pm away.  Oh and most likely.  You still down? It won't a demanding story.... 
@Gambler: I kind of wanted to know more about them besides being foil for the villain. ehhh shit happens. 
@Jo_Harvelle: Is it a spoiler if I say it was the bees knees? hehe (I won't say another word) 
#23 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@_Sojourn_ : You always know how I perceive my own characters :)  
 
I likes you very mucho
#24 Posted by Surkit (11112 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: Most def. It's non-cannon right? Real or CV based?

#25 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Surkit: Non-cannon for sure. Allows more freedom
#26 Posted by Kamikaze_ (901 posts) - - Show Bio

Wow! Awesome stuff

#27 Posted by Surkit (11112 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: So reality?

#28 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Surkit: As in....anything goes? Yes.... 
@Kamikaze_: Thank you :)
#29 Posted by Kamikaze_ (901 posts) - - Show Bio

No problem

#30 Posted by Surkit (11112 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: Nah I'm saying is it superheroes and what not or is it rl grounded

#31 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Surkit: Oh reality grounded but being a ninja or merc is still possible lol
#32 Posted by Surkit (11112 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: Yeah I'm def down.

#33 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@Surkit: Awesome sauce
#34 Posted by The_Assassin_ (17436 posts) - - Show Bio

Yay! Crazy Clara's back! :D

Great Job ^_^

#35 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio
@The_Assassin_: Wouldn't be Clara if she didn't have some crazy :) 
 
Thank you!
#36 Posted by The_Assassin_ (17436 posts) - - Show Bio

@Clara Mass: True Dat ^_^

#37 Posted by _Sojourn_ (19243 posts) - - Show Bio
@Clara Mass it's a talent, among others. ; Q

I likes you too
#38 Posted by Cassius_Knightfall (7438 posts) - - Show Bio

awesome start , look forward to the inevitable conflict with you.

#39 Posted by Ishin (6830 posts) - - Show Bio

I would've been fool had I missed this :P

#40 Posted by Clara Mass (7833 posts) - - Show Bio

@Cassuis_Slay_Knightfall: Thank you. And of course...it's gonna be fun

@Impero: I'm assuming you liked?

Clara Mass has returned! :)