#1 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

good luck.

#2 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Setting: NYC

Time: New moon and nighttime.

And also Yada yada yada. :)

Battle is only for me and Kraung.

#3 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - - Show Bio

Copy says:

"Setting: NYC Time: New moon and nighttime. And also Yada yada yada. :) Battle is only for me and Kraung. "

Hello, I hope you'lll be worth it... I've been waiting for you,

#4 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"good luck."

To whom? May I wish you good luck as well

#5 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

As much as I hate to admit it, Copy.

#6 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - - Show Bio

Alright so I'll make the thread how about that, Copy

#7 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

Karung The Conjourer says:

"zee crusher says:
"good luck."

To whom? May I wish you good luck as well"

I'm not fighting lol and i ment to you Copy is something to be reckoned with.

#8 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"Karung The Conjourer says:
"zee crusher says:
"good luck."
To whom? May I wish you good luck as well"
I'm not fighting lol and i ment to you Copy is something to be reckoned with."

Of course,

#9 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Karung The Conjourer says:

"Alright so I'll make the thread how about that, Copy"

I already made it.

And thanks Zee.

#10 Posted by Doctor Dare (789 posts) - - Show Bio

Hey Copy, Feel free to add you Copied my powers to your bio, if you want.

#11 Posted by Nighthunter (28580 posts) - - Show Bio

you bastart!!! :P

what happened to our fight? lol

#12 Posted by Nighthunter (28580 posts) - - Show Bio

Copy says:

"Nighthunter says:
"you bastart!!! :P what happened to **our** fight? lol"

I have no idea. I was waiting for you to make it. I mean your the one wanting to fight. Make a thread. I can fight two fights lol."

lol you are the one that wanted to remember?

Can you please fight me?

I wouldn't start it if we didn't agree to start lol

maybe it's better this way, since my fight against Andferne is quite important for my character

#13 Posted by Doctor Dare (789 posts) - - Show Bio

We still have it NH, I'm just telling copy he could add that to his Bio.

#14 Posted by Nighthunter (28580 posts) - - Show Bio

Doctor Dare says:

"Hey, You call me a Moron......Oh that is it."WAR TO SETTLE THE SCORE"Start the Thread."

it was a joke for god's sake lol

#15 Posted by Nighthunter (28580 posts) - - Show Bio

Doctor Dare says:

"We still have it NH, I'm just telling copy he could add that to his Bio."

I'm talking to copy you moron :P

#16 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Nighthunter says:

"you bastart!!! :P what happened to **our** fight? lol"

I have no idea. I was waiting for you to make it. I mean your the one wanting to fight. Make a thread. I can fight two fights lol.

#17 Posted by Doctor Dare (789 posts) - - Show Bio

Hey, You call me a Moron......Oh that is it.

"WAR TO SETTLE THE SCORE"

Start the Thread.

#18 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Doctor Dare says:

"Hey Copy, Feel free to add you Copied my powers to your bio, if you want."

Thanks, but making quick edited right when a fight started is cheating.

#19 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Doctor Dare says:

"Hey, You call me a Moron......Oh that is it. "WAR TO SETTLE THE SCORE" Start the Thread."

He was joking. When people do this :P they are usually joking.

#20 Posted by Nighthunter (28580 posts) - - Show Bio

Copy says:

"Nighthunter says:
"Copy says:
"Nighthunter says:
"you bastart!!! :P what happened to **our** fight? lol"
I have no idea. I was waiting for you to make it. I mean your the one wanting to fight. Make a thread. I can fight two fights lol."
lol you are the one that wanted to remember? *Can you please fight me?* I wouldn't start it if we didn't agree to start lol maybe it's better this way, since my fight against Andferne is quite important for my character"

Oh yea. My bad dude. I can make it now, if you want. I don't mind fighting two battles."

let's wait until my fight with Andferne ends, if you read it you can see that it is possibly the most important rpg for my character bio lol

#21 Posted by Nighthunter (28580 posts) - - Show Bio

Copy says:

"Hey Karung, try explaining your surroundings more. Your post was okay but if you want to be an experience rpger, try adding more to your post. Put your surroundings, what your wearing, or what your thinking in your post. It helps make an story and make the battle more believable."

wow copy is now a teacher lol

#22 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - - Show Bio

Okay, can't we all just get along? I posted also

#23 Posted by Doctor Dare (789 posts) - - Show Bio

Alright, Nh, Are we still gonna' fight?

#24 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Nighthunter says:

"Copy says:
"Nighthunter says:
"you bastart!!! :P what happened to **our** fight? lol"
I have no idea. I was waiting for you to make it. I mean your the one wanting to fight. Make a thread. I can fight two fights lol."
lol you are the one that wanted to remember? *Can you please fight me?* I wouldn't start it if we didn't agree to start lol maybe it's better this way, since my fight against Andferne is quite important for my character"

Oh yea. My bad dude. I can make it now, if you want. I don't mind fighting two battles.

#25 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Hey Karung, try explaining your surroundings more. Your post was okay but if you want to be an experience rpger, try adding more to your post. Put your surroundings, what your wearing, or what your thinking in your post. It helps make an story and make the battle more believable.

#26 Posted by acewasp23 (6087 posts) - - Show Bio

Doctor Dare says:

"Hey Copy, Feel free to add you Copied my powers to your bio, if you want."

Oh so many mean cryo-copy jokes are coming to mind. :P

#27 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

Copy says:

"Karung The Conjourer says:
"Alright so I'll make the thread how about that, Copy"

I already made it.

And thanks Zee."

NP.

#28 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Nighthunter says:

"Copy says:
"Hey Karung, try explaining your surroundings more. Your post was okay but if you want to be an experience rpger, try adding more to your post. Put your surroundings, what your wearing, or what your thinking in your post. It helps make an story and make the battle more believable."
wow copy is now a teacher lol"
Lol surprises me too. *Looks at my teacher desk* WHERE THE FCK IS MY APPLE!?!?! lol acewasp23 says:
"Doctor Dare says:
"Hey Copy, Feel free to add you Copied my powers to your bio, if you want."
Oh so many mean cryo-copy jokes are coming to mind. :P"
Lol, Jerk :P
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#29 Posted by Nighthunter (28580 posts) - - Show Bio

Doctor Dare says:

"Alright, Nh, Are we still gonna' fight?"

no, sorry but your character is too much

he is almost as powerfull as Doctor Fate and has no weakness, I can't fight that without making a no-selling post.

Also expect that response from other people, make your character weaker and add weakness that way you'll get more fights

#30 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

Nighthunter says:

"Doctor Dare says:
"Alright, Nh, Are we still gonna' fight?"

no, sorry but your character is too much

he is almost as powerfull as Doctor Fate and has no weakness, I can't fight that without making a no-selling post.

Also expect that response from other people, make your character weaker and add weakness that way you'll get more fights"

Lol you forgot to mention he doesn't come back to the fight and says he forgot.

#31 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Um, What an "blackbiter and/or red angel"? Are those people or weapons?

#32 Posted by Doctor Dare (789 posts) - - Show Bio

Is this a better Bio?

LIFE AT THE BEGINING

Mark Snerid was once a Very talented Magician, Who did many Act's in Las Vegas. His Tricks were so powerful nobody knew how he did them, Everyone loved him and he was respected and cheered on by many....But on the Night of his most important show, He died. Five Years After he died, He was resurected by a Strange old Wizard named "Azimao"in the Himalaya's. Azimao said he would grant Mark powers if Mark would be his trusted assistant.

Now, Mark has seperated from Azimao and is a Free Agent, He use's his Magic powers for good. However, He has been know to use his powers to meet Women.

VINE VILLAINS

Doctor Dare at one point was Confused, The Super-Hero teams would not take him because he was an "Inexperienced Hero". And so Dare resorted to his only other option. He came to "Magneto" and joined the Villains of the Vine.

But he quit after learning that the Vine Villains were Back Stabbing Criminals.

TRAGEDY STRIKES

........And so, Dare was a Great Magic Man, But He found that his Mother died. Striken with Greif, He sowed together fine clothes, and use's this costume in memory of her (When he's not a "Ghost Rider".)

He also has inherited the Powers of the Ghost Rider.

More to Come.

#33 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

I could have sworn you said you left the VV??? Also he said powers and weaknesses.

#34 Posted by Doctor Dare (789 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"I could have sworn you said you left the VV??? Also he said powers and weaknesses."

Powers and Weakness's Edited.

#35 Posted by acewasp23 (6087 posts) - - Show Bio

so is your RPG still on your did Karung win with his fist attack? LoL

#36 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

acewasp23 says:

"so is your RPG still on your did Karung win with his fist attack? LoL "

I have no idea what he did. He said blackbiter and or/red angel. Idk what that is.

#37 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

Lol then grab then throw them kick them and where you been ace??

#38 Posted by acewasp23 (6087 posts) - - Show Bio

i think they are the names of his swords. in his bio he says he has 2 swords.

#39 Posted by acewasp23 (6087 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"Lol then grab then throw them kick them and where you been ace??"

Work. LoL they have me doing long shifts.

#40 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

acewasp23 says:

"zee crusher says:
"Lol then grab then throw them kick them and where you been ace??"

Work. LoL they have me doing long shifts. "

Lol i can see but hey your back now and i can make more mean comments behind your back lol.

#41 Posted by acewasp23 (6087 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"Lol i can see but hey your back now and i can make more mean comments behind your back lol."

LoL for a few hours, i have to work a 16 hour tomarrow. LoL

#42 Posted by acewasp23 (6087 posts) - - Show Bio

yeah i have a few days off after tomarrow so i should be on a bit more.

#43 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

Lol well seen you then i'm going to be lol Later days.

#44 Posted by Andferne (38808 posts) - - Show Bio

Ok Karung do not take this a bad way but try this. Here you said this;

Karung arrived with full summer gear. "Oh, is it winter already?" He then rushes home to get his winter gear on. He then said,"May the force be with you, Copy that. Karung out" Karung then tried to land an attack from blackbiter and/or red angel. The slashes were well aimed, well done, graceful and extermrly fast

Instead try something like this; (if the joke about the cloths is something your guy does thats fine, but I would leave that out)

Karung had arrived in his full combat gear. His blades Blackbiter and Red Angel at his sides. He approached Copy and remarked "May the force be with you, ...Copy that". Laughing at his opponets exspense.

Karung then lunged forward attacking Copy with his blades. Blackbiter slashed for his left arm, while Red Angel struck at his chest. The attacks were well aimed, and well done. They were graceful in thier speed.

#45 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - - Show Bio

Andferne says:

"Ok Karung do not take this a bad way but try this. Here you said this; Karung arrived with full summer gear. "Oh, is it winter already?" He then rushes home to get his winter gear on. He then said,"May the force be with you, Copy that. Karung out" Karung then tried to land an attack from blackbiter and/or red angel. The slashes were well aimed, well done, graceful and extermrly fast Instead try something like this; (if the joke about the cloths is something your guy does thats fine, but I would leave that out) Karung had arrived in his full combat gear. His blades *Blackbiter* and *Red Angel* at his sides. He approached Copy and remarked "May the force be with you, ...Copy that". Laughing at his opponets exspense. Karung then lunged forward attacking Copy with his blades. *Blackbiter* slashed for his left arm, while *Red Angel* struck at his chest. The attacks were well aimed, and well done. They were graceful in thier speed."

Thank you for your reccomendation

#46 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - - Show Bio

Copy says:

"Um, What an "blackbiter and/or red angel"? Are those people or weapons?"

My swords,

#47 Posted by Copy (8336 posts) - - Show Bio

Thanks dude. I won't be able make a lot of post today but I can make one right now.

#48 Posted by Karung The Conjourer (899 posts) - - Show Bio

Copy says:

"Thanks dude. I won't be able make a lot of post today but I can make one right now."

Go for it, Copy