Armistice Vs Maya Lopez Battle

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Under construction

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#2  Edited By shanana

HAHAHA under construction. Sweet. When you make the actual rpg. Make sure you put RPG in the title since you didn't label this one as the OOC kay

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#3  Edited By Mr. Mercury

GO MAYA

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#5  Edited By Mr. Mercury

Ha, shocked for what?

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@Mr. Mercury: That you cheered for Maya lol

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#7  Edited By Mr. Mercury

@Maya Lopez: Oh, yeah. No reason to hate. It's all good

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@Mr. Mercury: ^_^

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@WarMachineMarkV: Very nice opener you've been doing your homework lol

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#10  Edited By Daywing

Good luck guys!
 
@WarMachineMarkV
Excellent first post (:

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#11  Edited By Mercy_

Ooooooooooooooooh me gusta!

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- Be gentle...its my first time...

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#13  Edited By FALLENprophet

@WarMachineMarkV said:

- Be gentle...its my first time...

Who wants to say it? :D

Good Luck Guys

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#14  Edited By SkybornLord
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Someone already said good luck.@Daywing said:
Good luck guys!
 
@WarMachineMarkV: Excellent first post (:


 
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#15  Edited By FALLENprophet

@SkybornLord: Your point is?

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#16  Edited By SkybornLord
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. . .Nufthing.
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@WarMachineMarkV: Her attacking you like that is really OUT of character for her, but I really want to see your battle detail.

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- I understand, but do you get what I'm trying to convey in italics?

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@WarMachineMarkV: Why do you keep talking to me in there? that's what this is for. I understand nothing in that scene was touched by you, but you already stated previously that this was a deal made Five years in the making. Maya isn't one of those bimbos who don't check there sources; she's going to make sure everything is legit, you said you made sure Seminole Internatinal or whatever looked legit, and she saw through that. but I'll edit, I don't understand what difference it's going to make though.

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@WarMachineMarkV: And what exactly did you do in your post???

I mean as far as the mounting systems?

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- I was not aware that discussion regarding the action on the other thread for you and me went in here, I thought it was for comments by others, again, this is my first rodeo online.

- The 5 years is the amount of time the character has been observing the Vine universe in general, I stated in the first paragraph of the first post that this was something set up over the past few weeks. I agree this part really does not matter much, more of just a clarification.

- The setup for the meeting would pass a background check, but once you got in the door as you can see I did not argue your ability to see through the deception.

- I stress the identity part as it is pretty much the central aspect to the character at this point, he managed to keep it for 5 years and then its out the window at his first meeting?

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@Maya Lopez said:

@WarMachineMarkV: And what exactly did you do in your post???

I mean as far as the mounting systems?

- It just means the targeting system scanned for the load bearing sections to bring down the ceiling above you

- While the roof is coming down on you I'm planning my next move

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@WarMachineMarkV: Well let's look at this from a practical standpoint. Your character is new to this vine-verse and your proposing to meet with the leader of a country; who knows nothing of your existence. She runs a background check and figures out your name; I never said she knew who you were. This was comfirmed by her asking "Who are you?" Because your character is sitting in the chair wearing his armor. What I tried to do was keep the intellectual integrity of Maya intact without compromising your characters true identity. I told ya I can edit, and I see what your saying which is why I will otherwise I would've said oh well lol.

But I'm in the process of posting and Editing now

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- It's my first time...I SAID BE GENTLE....cries like a two year old boy who gets no cookie

- As stated I think we are on the same page now

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@WarMachineMarkV: Posting now

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@WarMachineMarkV:

Battle Mechanics : Yours is bad at all; I like the way you stick to your character, all your attacks and plans come from things your character naturally has with him; IT'd be interesting to see you engage an opponent where you have to use resources outside your characters abilities, such as nature and stuff.

Story Plot: Another thing that was great, you did your Homework on my character and you saw a way to have a fluent interaction; I jumped the gun on the attacking part only because I didn't want the RP's to take a sour turn. Since this is your character's first "move" in the CVU or Vine Prime as DH calls it; it'll be interesting to see how you build your character around this.

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@Maya Lopez:

Battle

- It's hard to give a properly detailed response when I'm constantly flipping between the battle and your bio and not take forever, I'm glad you like it, but I know I can do better

- Also our bios do not have scores next to most of their abilities so I am not sure if I am over or under selling things, I have not seen the RP's with them used to gauge with any accuracy

Story

- This was an easier one to fit something into, some of the others I have read will take some work

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#29  Edited By Crowman

Thats . . . The end? :[

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@Crowman: Yeah it is, Maya is no match for WMV

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#31  Edited By Crowman

@Maya Lopez: Hmm . . . Interesting wrings hands maniacally

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@Crowman:

- It really did not make sense for it to go too far anyways, neither character had any reason to think the other was going for the kill in the first place

- Now if Armistice keeps calling her Princess...the rematch might be a death match