Armistice Vs Maya Lopez Battle

#1 Posted by WarMachineMarkV (1211 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

Under construction

#2 Posted by Ziccarra_Liafador (49084 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

HAHAHA under construction. Sweet. When you make the actual rpg. Make sure you put RPG in the title since you didn't label this one as the OOC kay

#3 Posted by Mr. Mercury (18569 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

GO MAYA

#4 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Mr. Mercury:

#5 Posted by Mr. Mercury (18569 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

Ha, shocked for what?

#6 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Mr. Mercury: That you cheered for Maya lol

#7 Posted by Mr. Mercury (18569 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Maya Lopez: Oh, yeah. No reason to hate. It's all good

#8 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Mr. Mercury: ^_^

#9 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@WarMachineMarkV: Very nice opener you've been doing your homework lol

#10 Posted by Daywing (4319 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

Good luck guys!
 
@WarMachineMarkV: 
Excellent first post (:

#11 Posted by Mercy_ (85084 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

Ooooooooooooooooh me gusta!

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#12 Posted by WarMachineMarkV (1211 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

- Be gentle...its my first time...

#13 Posted by FALLENprophet (6173 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@WarMachineMarkV said:

- Be gentle...its my first time...

Who wants to say it? :D

Good Luck Guys

#14 Posted by SkybornLord (850 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio
@FALLENprophet: 
Someone already said good luck.@Daywing said:
Good luck guys!
 
@WarMachineMarkV: Excellent first post (:


 
   See?
#15 Posted by FALLENprophet (6173 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@SkybornLord: Your point is?

#16 Posted by SkybornLord (850 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio
@FALLENprophet: 
. . .Nufthing.
#17 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

Posted

#18 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@WarMachineMarkV: Her attacking you like that is really OUT of character for her, but I really want to see your battle detail.

#19 Posted by WarMachineMarkV (1211 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

- I understand, but do you get what I'm trying to convey in italics?

#20 Edited by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@WarMachineMarkV: Why do you keep talking to me in there? that's what this is for. I understand nothing in that scene was touched by you, but you already stated previously that this was a deal made Five years in the making. Maya isn't one of those bimbos who don't check there sources; she's going to make sure everything is legit, you said you made sure Seminole Internatinal or whatever looked legit, and she saw through that. but I'll edit, I don't understand what difference it's going to make though.

#21 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@WarMachineMarkV: And what exactly did you do in your post???

I mean as far as the mounting systems?

#22 Posted by WarMachineMarkV (1211 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

- I was not aware that discussion regarding the action on the other thread for you and me went in here, I thought it was for comments by others, again, this is my first rodeo online.

- The 5 years is the amount of time the character has been observing the Vine universe in general, I stated in the first paragraph of the first post that this was something set up over the past few weeks. I agree this part really does not matter much, more of just a clarification.

- The setup for the meeting would pass a background check, but once you got in the door as you can see I did not argue your ability to see through the deception.

- I stress the identity part as it is pretty much the central aspect to the character at this point, he managed to keep it for 5 years and then its out the window at his first meeting?

#23 Posted by WarMachineMarkV (1211 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Maya Lopez said:

@WarMachineMarkV: And what exactly did you do in your post???

I mean as far as the mounting systems?

- It just means the targeting system scanned for the load bearing sections to bring down the ceiling above you

- While the roof is coming down on you I'm planning my next move

#24 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@WarMachineMarkV: Well let's look at this from a practical standpoint. Your character is new to this vine-verse and your proposing to meet with the leader of a country; who knows nothing of your existence. She runs a background check and figures out your name; I never said she knew who you were. This was comfirmed by her asking "Who are you?" Because your character is sitting in the chair wearing his armor. What I tried to do was keep the intellectual integrity of Maya intact without compromising your characters true identity. I told ya I can edit, and I see what your saying which is why I will otherwise I would've said oh well lol.

But I'm in the process of posting and Editing now

#25 Posted by WarMachineMarkV (1211 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

- It's my first time...I SAID BE GENTLE....cries like a two year old boy who gets no cookie

- As stated I think we are on the same page now

#26 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@WarMachineMarkV: Posting now

#27 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@WarMachineMarkV:

Battle Mechanics : Yours is bad at all; I like the way you stick to your character, all your attacks and plans come from things your character naturally has with him; IT'd be interesting to see you engage an opponent where you have to use resources outside your characters abilities, such as nature and stuff.

Story Plot: Another thing that was great, you did your Homework on my character and you saw a way to have a fluent interaction; I jumped the gun on the attacking part only because I didn't want the RP's to take a sour turn. Since this is your character's first "move" in the CVU or Vine Prime as DH calls it; it'll be interesting to see how you build your character around this.

#28 Posted by WarMachineMarkV (1211 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Maya Lopez:

Battle

- It's hard to give a properly detailed response when I'm constantly flipping between the battle and your bio and not take forever, I'm glad you like it, but I know I can do better

- Also our bios do not have scores next to most of their abilities so I am not sure if I am over or under selling things, I have not seen the RP's with them used to gauge with any accuracy

Story

- This was an easier one to fit something into, some of the others I have read will take some work

#29 Posted by Crowman (391 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

Thats . . . The end? :[

#30 Posted by Serephena (4124 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Crowman: Yeah it is, Maya is no match for WMV

#31 Posted by Crowman (391 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Maya Lopez: Hmm . . . Interesting wrings hands maniacally

#32 Posted by WarMachineMarkV (1211 posts) - 1 year, 2 months ago - Show Bio

@Crowman:

- It really did not make sense for it to go too far anyways, neither character had any reason to think the other was going for the kill in the first place

- Now if Armistice keeps calling her Princess...the rematch might be a death match

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