#1 Edited by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

Umm... i dunno what to say here lol. But this RPG is against Archer. Where should this be? I know the N.W.A hq, when i discover the underground layer?

#2 Posted by J1NX (2524 posts) - - Show Bio

You should make in my thunder dome. I'll throw down and let ya even use my weapons wink

#3 Posted by The Genesis Archer (1538 posts) - - Show Bio
Alexander said:
"Umm... i dunno what to say here lol. But this RPG is against Archer. Where should this be? I know the N.W.A hq, when i discover the underground layer?"
thats different,i like it, go  make the battle thread now
#4 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio
winks back

OK maybe i dunno
#5 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

OK

#6 Posted by The Genesis Archer (1538 posts) - - Show Bio

right as much as you can bro, show everyone how good of a writer you are, i saw your bio for drake red and i see you have potential, Now LEts Show It!

#7 Posted by J1NX (2524 posts) - - Show Bio

Is the thread for this up yet I'd like to watch?

I'm always interested in new talent.

#8 Posted by Landslide2121 (273 posts) - - Show Bio

should be interesting.

#9 Posted by The Genesis Archer (1538 posts) - - Show Bio
J1NX said:
"Is the thread for this up yet I'd like to watch?

I'm always interested in new talent."
well technically im  not new,  ive been on since jan
#10 Posted by J1NX (2524 posts) - - Show Bio
The Genesis Archer said:
"J1NX said:
"Is the thread for this up yet I'd like to watch?

I'm always interested in new talent."
well technically im  not new,  ive been on since jan"

Haven't been in any RP with you is really what I was meaning. No offence meant I assure you.
#11 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

i´m done posting but i don´t know?

#12 Posted by The Genesis Archer (1538 posts) - - Show Bio
J1NX said:
"The Genesis Archer said:
"J1NX said:
"Is the thread for this up yet I'd like to watch?

I'm always interested in new talent."
well technically im  not new,  ive been on since jan"

Haven't been in any RP with you is really what I was meaning. No offence meant I assure you."
n/p lolz, the only  teams ive done rpgs with was ice and Bladed angels thats why, we will cross paths one day
#13 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

OK so what ya think i know it´s short but i can´t make long writings i get bored and write anything

#14 Posted by G'bandit (13689 posts) - - Show Bio

O_O your beating up your own teammate? how rude! even if I do bug Mark a but is different I don't beat him up.. Not yet at least XD :P

#15 Posted by J1NX (2524 posts) - - Show Bio
Alexander said:
"OK so what ya think i know it´s short but i can´t make long writings i get bored and write anything"

It's pretty good man, but do you want some constructive criticism?
#16 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

We don´t fight well we do but this is before i am in N.W.A

J1NX: Thanks man and yeah i want constructive criticism.

#17 Posted by Odyssey_Dawn (84674 posts) - - Show Bio

Good luck u two

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#18 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

OK thanks Gambler

#19 Posted by The Genesis Archer (1538 posts) - - Show Bio

despite the length that post was awesome, the only thing that it lacks is  description of your setting, next time, describe the thing that are around you, and how you felt at that moment in time, those are the main keys for a good post.

#20 Posted by The Genesis Archer (1538 posts) - - Show Bio

despite the length that post was awesome, the only thing that it lacks is  description of your setting, next time, describe the thing that are around you, and how you felt at that moment in time, those are the main keys for a good post.

#21 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

oh ok man

#22 Posted by The Genesis Archer (1538 posts) - - Show Bio

Besides that You will probably make Rookie of the month if you join rpgs

but brb, imma eat real quick before posting

#23 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

OK

#24 Posted by J1NX (2524 posts) - - Show Bio

Also it is good to refer to yourself on more than just a "He" or "She" description. Instead of saying one pronoun all the time mix it up. Maybe refer to yourself by your name sometimes.

#25 Posted by Alexander (86 posts) - - Show Bio

OK thanks for the hint