@quintus_knightfall: YOU DON'T OWN ME! *casually worships* >_>
@cassius_knightfall: I don't buy into a post being able to be too much. Or at least not for this one. You had a story that you wanted to tell and you told it. With detail, but none of that felt superfluous. It kept my attention from beginning to end, which, to me is the mark of a truly captivating and excellent post. It had a lot of emotion and feeling to it, and it left me actively wanting to know what happens next for him.
@catriona_knightfall: Nice break down, and thanks for the compliments. Just felt maybe i tied to many different things into the one post. May have worked better as two more focussed posts. But since nobody has said they lost interest or skimmed it yet maybe its just me.
@quintus_knightfall: I have the first half of a post written out, set in the-future-but-not-quite-the-future-future, basically around the time the war begins. I'm just struggling to decide which direction to take when it comes to the time period when all the stuff is happening.
Posted, sorry for the length and abundance of pictures, lol
@quintus_knightfall: Figured your joining your floating colony was a good place to jump in, hope that's okay. Also, hope I did justice to SS, haha, lemme know if I got anything massively wrong about him.
@quintus_knightfall: Haha, I'm a huge Invincible fan, big believer that Superman-level-characters should be able to tear people apart. On that note, love the way you're writing SS.