Posted by Thelonedrow (5 posts) - - Show Bio

"Fast run, you goblins, the Ranger sets his bow,

To let ;your blood, to stain white snow

Arrow and arrow, the river of red

Fast fall the Evil, to the one is dead.

Hawkwing’s fury,

Goblins to bury

In worm’s cold domain."

#1 Posted by Renchamp (2390 posts) - - Show Bio

If you wrote this then it's not bad. I don't quite get the sequencing due to punctuation confusion but the imagery is very nice. I like that it is a warning coming from an unknown speaker.

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