I know this is long but id really appreciate if you read it and gave me some feedback
story starts with batman grappling to the top of the gcpd to meet with Gordon. Gordon is annoyed and agitated and starts to tell batman how crazy and ridiculous he is. he berates him and tells him that gotham doesn't need a maniac in a batsuit to protect it and that he himself is the cause of all the lunatics in the city. he then goes on to harshly critique bruce wayne and how "immature and petulant billionaires think they represent guys like me who give up everything! my wife! my daughter! my peace!" bruce then disappears stealthily as he always does. on his way back to the batcave he stops what he thinks is a thug about to rob a young girl when in reality he was her boyfriend getting ready to surprise her on her birthday. batman beats the guy to a bloody pulp and is then excoriated by the girl and a group of people in the area. they tell him that he's crazy and a 'maniac' and that he city is worse since he showed up. bruce then disappears again and returns to the batcave where his inner monologue reveals how he's hurt by the words of the people and how they have an impact on him. he also thinks that they are right and that joker, two face, kiler croc and other supervillains only showed up because of him. so bruce makes a decision and calls the bat family into the cave for an emergency meeting. he then abruptly tells them its over and that they need to give him back all the gadgets and uniforms. they resist but then bruce says "are you going to make me take them from you?" all except Dick comply. Dick says " come get it bruce" they then fight and surprisingly (or not surprisingly) bruce makes very quick work of him. so quick everyone looks shocked. he then takes back all the uniforms and gadgets and everyone leaves (theyre all pissed) bruce sits in his chair in front of the bat computer thinking and then Alfred says "sir, you know ill always support your efforts and be in your corner...you also know ill tell you when youre wrong. now im happy your going to start living a normal life and taking care of yourself--but what of all the scoundrel left in gotham? surely they will escape their prisons ad start their terror once again only now there will be no batman to stop them." bruce responds "initiate codename--eradicate Alfred" Alfred looks stunned but then says "I knew eventually this day would come. very well sir" batman then goes to a hidden batcave that only him and Alfred know about with a tube for every single supervillain with their respective names on each one. in this cave Alfred sets up shop behind a new bat computer and batman equips the "Batsuit-R" (the R stands for revelation...get it?) and then says as he exits the cave "after tonight its over Alfred. you can go back to England and live your own life free of a 'maniac' like me" Alfred looks shocked but by the time he turns around...bruce has again disappeared into the darkness. batman then goes to arkham and makes very quick work of everyone from joker to killer croc. and I mean so quick its apparent to them. so much so that riddler thinks to himself "my god! he's been holding back for all these years! I never had a chance!" batman then transports every single super villain to this cave with the stasis prisons and iforms them that they wont die but they will be submerged in a chemical that will effectively render them catatonic within 24 hours. he then says "before I end you--I want you to look into the eyes of the man who you could never break!" bruce then rips off the cowl and while everyone else is shocked and going insane(er) joker laughs histercally and says "{HA! all this time is was the rich boy without parents! hoo hoo the one guy who could have left this hell hole and never looked back is the one behind all the madness ahahahahaha!!!!!" bruce starts to get angry but then he says. I have a special treat for you joker. he then puts a picture of jokers true identity of him with his wife and kids in front of him(but this would be hidden from the reader) joker then starts screaming in terror as if he's seen all of his demons and all of his evil acts before his very eyes. batman then says in a low emotionless voice "I hope you all know that this is too good a fate for you" he then fills the tubes with the aforementioned fluid, effectively neutralizing anypossible threat anyof them could pose. and if that wasn't enough he sets up a series of booby traps should any of them manage to escape their tubes or anyone tries to break in they would all explode.....
if you all think its good so far let me know and I will add part 2
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