#1 Posted by Perezite (1432 posts) - - Show Bio

Hello. Recently, I have completed a Rough Draft version of a comic series I sometimes think about dubbed, "The Monkey King."

Below, you may fine a link to it in google docs.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13E2F43JO2NjKD2SUaRi_jcK51Mwpb_kwBJnpB1Bf8VU/edit

I was wondering what anyone though about it.

#2 Posted by Perezite (1432 posts) - - Show Bio

Come on? No one interested in a comic where, technically, Son Goku is involved?

#4 Posted by Perezite (1432 posts) - - Show Bio

Not me. Sorry.

Then why did you reply, except to be a jerk?

#6 Edited by Perezite (1432 posts) - - Show Bio

@perezite: I'm sorry. Did I hurt your feelings because I didn't get all excited about your stupid comic book? Jerk.

I'm not asking for anyone to be excited. I'm asking for some feedback because I'm more desperate for it than a dog in heat is for what she wants and desire to better myself.

#8 Posted by Perezite (1432 posts) - - Show Bio

@perezite: I gave you a reply. I'm not interested in your comic book. What's so hard to understand about it? And judging from the fact you got no other replies ( so far) either no one else has looked at your thread, or like me their not interested in your comic book.

Or, unlike you, they aren't jerks and have the decency not to reply like you did.

#9 Edited by Dabee (2399 posts) - - Show Bio

@perezite: I'm sorry. Did I hurt your feelings because I didn't get all excited about your stupid comic book? Jerk.

No need to be rude...

Anyway, I read it. It's definitely well-written, and has a good opening. If I were an artist, I don't think I'd have a problem drawing it from that script. So yeah, it looks great! :-D

#10 Posted by Perezite (1432 posts) - - Show Bio

@dabee said:

@catsnlynne said:

@perezite: I'm sorry. Did I hurt your feelings because I didn't get all excited about your stupid comic book? Jerk.

No need to be rude...

Anyway, I read it. It's definitely well-written, and has a good opening. If I were an artist, I don't think I'd have a problem drawing it from that script. So yeah, it looks great! :-D

Cool! Alright...what would you say would be the parts where I could speed things up a bit and what did you like and didn't like?

#11 Posted by Catsnlynne (1039 posts) - - Show Bio

@perezite:

I'm sorry that I was rude with the comments I made. I deleted them all. I wish you luck with your comic book.

#12 Posted by Perezite (1432 posts) - - Show Bio

@perezite:

I'm sorry that I was rude with the comments I made. I deleted them all. I wish you luck with your comic book.

Thank You. I accept your apology.

#13 Posted by Catsnlynne (1039 posts) - - Show Bio