#1 Posted by Tanako (5 posts) - - Show Bio

Hello everyone

I"M NEW HERE! :D

my name is Tanako and i am a comic artist/ writer/ student. currently i run a free online web comic called Boy with a secret which can be located here at WWW.BWASCOMIC.COM although it is more of Japanese/ American style based comic. i noticed here in comic vine its mostly marvel/ Dc style comic that is often talked about which i don't mind at all. i like all comics. but I'll get to the point. i have a problem with my dialog and i was wondering if someone was interested in helping me with that. i don't have any money to offer but i will be grateful. if anyone is interested and have time to spare feel free to contact me and i will give you details on how to go about it.

please guys, I'm looking for someone who is determined to help me and actually stay true to their words. i want to be able to contact via e mail( as often as possible) or any other means which will be comfortable for you. i need some one who is serious and would not ditch me last minute. i take my work very seriously so therefore i need someone who is just ad devoted as i am.

if any is interested please contact me THANKS!

#2 Edited by DcMarvelUnity (56 posts) - - Show Bio
#3 Posted by Archlord (140 posts) - - Show Bio

I could help you out, of course. I agree with DcMarvelUnity, that kind of dedication is hard to find unless money is involved, but many of my projects are free for the public, so I can understand that.

I very well know my fiction, and dialogue is never a problem for me. I might not know the 'cheesy' lines like somebody that lives in the united states, media wise, but you'll be surprised.

#4 Edited by Tanako (5 posts) - - Show Bio

Yes i agree with you guys, its totally understandable. but i appreciate whatever help i can get, especially for the current 3 chapters that are up right now. im looking into printing and want to make sure everything is almost perfect :D

what I'm really looking for are these

-spelling errors

-punctuation errors

-reconstruct sentences to make it sound better

-grammar usage

i not very good with those and just need someone to look over them. i don't mind having a couple of people to kinda ease the work besides i only have 4 chapters uploaded online and the fifth one is on halt. and i also update once a week which will give time for any corrections to be done to any of the pages.

#5 Posted by Archlord (140 posts) - - Show Bio

Once a week updating is fair. I know my english pretty well, so that won't really be a problem.

I've checked out your site too, excellent stuff. With work it could be a very populour web comic. I suspect you'll be doing other stories in the future too...

#6 Posted by Tanako (5 posts) - - Show Bio

@Archlord: Yes defiantly. right now boy with a secret is just to help me get out there. and thank you for taking the time to check out my comic. i appreciate it :D

#7 Posted by Illuminatus (9504 posts) - - Show Bio

Get ReVamp. He just loves to edit stuff. Don'cha?

#8 Posted by Tanako (5 posts) - - Show Bio

@Illuminatus: who's that?

#9 Posted by ReVamp (22865 posts) - - Show Bio

@Tanako: I believe he's talking about me.

@Illuminatus said:

Get ReVamp. He just loves to edit stuff. Don'cha?

I don't know where the hell you got that from.

@Tanako: Back to you. The best way to do this is to PM me with whatever you're interested with, like a page of your comic, so its easier to understand what you mean.

#10 Posted by Illuminatus (9504 posts) - - Show Bio
@ReVamp said: 

@Illuminatus said:

Get ReVamp. He just loves to edit stuff. Don'cha?

I don't know where the hell you got that from.

Flagged for profanity!
#11 Posted by ReVamp (22865 posts) - - Show Bio

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

Get ReVamp. He just loves to edit stuff. Don'cha?

I don't know where the hell you got that from.

Flagged for profanity!

Seriously though...

#12 Posted by Illuminatus (9504 posts) - - Show Bio
@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

Get ReVamp. He just loves to edit stuff. Don'cha?

I don't know where the hell you got that from.

Flagged for profanity!

Seriously though...

....Umm...JOAB?
#13 Posted by ReVamp (22865 posts) - - Show Bio

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

Get ReVamp. He just loves to edit stuff. Don'cha?

I don't know where the hell you got that from.

Flagged for profanity!

Seriously though...

....Umm...JOAB?

Um, no. But I like the way you think. I was more of like... Kinda wanting to know why you recommended me, just outta curiosity.

#14 Posted by Illuminatus (9504 posts) - - Show Bio
@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

Get ReVamp. He just loves to edit stuff. Don'cha?

I don't know where the hell you got that from.

Flagged for profanity!

Seriously though...

....Umm...JOAB?

Um, no. But I like the way you think. I was more of like... Kinda wanting to know why you recommended me, just outta curiosity.

You have a pretty diverse diction, as well as proper grammar skills. Also, because I like poking fun at you.
#15 Posted by ReVamp (22865 posts) - - Show Bio

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

@ReVamp said:

@Illuminatus said:

Get ReVamp. He just loves to edit stuff. Don'cha?

I don't know where the hell you got that from.

Flagged for profanity!

Seriously though...

....Umm...JOAB?

Um, no. But I like the way you think. I was more of like... Kinda wanting to know why you recommended me, just outta curiosity.

You have a pretty diverse diction, as well as proper grammar skills. Also, because I like poking fun at you.

Yeah, that's what I thought. Now, JOAB.

#16 Posted by Tanako (5 posts) - - Show Bio

Wat does JOAB mean?