#1 Posted by RuinedGlory (29 posts) - - Show Bio

Alright so I'm new and whatnot and I have a blog and I write comic book/movie/game reviews. I was hoping you guys since you all clearly love comics and this site is awesome would help me become a better writer and just take some time to read some of my reviews. They aren't long, but I'd like some opinions and what I do good and I what I do bad. I like criticism but please refrain from trolling, it's just not cool.

Anyways here's some, please please read some and thank you guys for your time and efforts. =]

REVIEWS:

HAUNT VOLUME ONE: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/24583161451/comicbook-review-haunt-volume-one

AVENGERS VS X-MEN #5: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/24577182411/comic-book-review-avengers-vs-x-men-5

MINUTEMEN #1: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/24575233190/comic-book-review-minutemen-1

SNOW WHITE AND THE HUNTSMAN: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/24250317261/movie-review-snow-white-and-the-huntsman

ADVANCE REVIEW: THE AVENGERS ( I saw it early ) http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/22308296480/advance-review-the-avengers

TOP 5 AVENGERS WE NEED IN THE NEXT MOVIE: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/22480164961/top-5-avengers-we-need-in-the-next-movie

BATMAN ARKHAM CITY HARLEY QUINN REVENGE: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/24011443470/videogame-review-batman-arkham-city-harley-quinns

OPINION: THE LIZARD IN SPIDERMAN: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/23724430052/opinion-why-the-lizard-in-the-spiderman-reboot-is

SAGA REVIEW #1-3: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/23634090787/comic-book-review-saga-1-3

DIABLO 3 VIDEOGAME REVIEW: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/23625845017/videogame-review-diablo-3

THE CABIN IN THE WOODS REVIEW: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/21072111432/movie-review-the-cabin-in-the-woods

TOP 5 SEQUELS I WANT: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/16299799476/top-5-sequels-i-want

TOP 5 HARDEST BOSS BATTLES: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/14180062110/the-top-5-hardest-boss-battles

SUPER 8 REVIEW: http://milanj.tumblr.com/post/6431413434/super-8-review

I have more but please just pick whichever and read. The top are the most recent ones and such.

#2 Posted by happypup70 (30 posts) - - Show Bio

Not the right place to post this I imagine.

I appreciate your enthusiasm and think you are on the right track. However, after reading some of your Haunt review I think, First: you need to edit your own work before publishing. I found several simple mistakes in your editorial. Writing with passion often creates these types of mistakes. Second: Always think about your message. Every sentence has a purpose. cramming too much into a sentence, another common problem with writing, is so easy to do, and when done wrong can be a horrible mess. My last sentence was way to long. I used it as an example. I practice shortening my sentences. As an example, I will re write my second point. Second: Your message has a purpose. Giving too much information at one time results in a horrible mess. Now doesn't that sound better.

Like you my brain runs faster than my hands. I am overwhelmed with thought. Rather than barreling on with new ideas I write slowly and carefully. I consider every word I use.

#3 Posted by CapFanboy (5366 posts) - - Show Bio

I flagged because I think it's in the wrong place.

#4 Posted by Mercy_ (91871 posts) - - Show Bio

Just switching this over to Gen. Discussion :)

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