First Comic

Hey i am in highschool and i was trying out different stuff. I decided to write a short part of a comic. Tell me how it is please

RATEK

Ra

Origin: Trained as a child how to fight and protect the innocent. Raised on the Police headquarters of the universe, Tazrel

Powers: Extremely athletic, superhuman agility and flexibility

Utility: White armour which is impenetrable, Left arm has an energy core which powers weapons, Weapons include two blades which can be turned into guns and extremely transformable, eg. Can be joined to form sword, long stick, can be twisted to make arm knives.etc.

Personality: Loving, lots of emotion, brought to earth to bring peace

Tek

Origin: Was brought up with Ra and has an extremely close bond. A white mutant wolf

Powers: Extreme strength, speed, teeth can penetrate close to anything, telepathy

Utility: Also carries a white armour which only protects his tummy his weakness

Fist Issue

{They say heroes are born not made.}

{ This was clearly the case for Ra. Born in Tazrel and taught how to protect the innocent as soon as he saw light}

{ He had one purpose in life and that was to protect those who couldn’t protect themselves}

[Fight scene between Master Roog and Ra]

Ra: Yaaaaaah,

[ A swing with the wooden sword which Master Roog swiftly dodges]

Master Roog: Why do you yell battle in silence, CONCENTRATE!

[Master Roog swings the stick at Ra’s leg which he avoids by jumping 20 feet into the air]

Ra: I talk however I want to, AAAHHH!!

[ Ra swings from the air and smacks the wooden stick onto the forehead of Master Roog leaving him dazzed on the ground]

Ra; Master!!!

Master Roog: I am alright, you have surpassed me

Ra: I know, you’re too easy for me now old man

Master Roog: ha

Ra: Right Tek

Tek: Grrr

Mar: Son you are ready

Ra: Am I really dad, don’t tell me you are joking again

Mar; No this time it is the real deal

Ra: How can I believe you?

[Mar switches his hand in which a screen appears of a planet]

Mar: The planet you will serve

Ra; Wooh

Mar: You shall protect its citizens from the evils within it

Ra: What’s it called

Mar: Earth, my son, Planet Earth