Page One
Panel One: We see Lex Luthor, looking at an orange pill in his hand.
LEX: This is it!
Panel Two: We see Lex, with a clenched fist.
LEX: This is the money grabber, a pill for Superpowers…
Panel Three: Close in on his eyes.
LEX: Target: Superman.
Page Two
Panel One: A shot from behind some cop cars. A man in a mask, white shirt, jeans, and leather jacket (greaser) has robbed a bank.
OFFICER (into radio): Our bullet’s are going through him, sir! He must have some kind of phasing powers!
SFX: Blam Blam Blam Blam
Panel Two: Overhead view of the scene, a red and blue blur flies across.
Panel Three: Superman, standing over an officer.
SUPERMAN: No, just Superspeed.
OFFICER: How..?
SUPERMAN: Hearing, remember?
Panel Four: Superman and the masked man charging, birds eye view.
Page Three
Panel One: The masked man (draw many fists) hitting Superman repeatedly. Superman is stunned.
SUPERMAN: Ungh!
SFX: BAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMetc.
Panel Two: Side view of Superman, catching a punch.
Panel Three: Draw Superman in mid punch, and the crook in mid air, about to hit a wall.
SFX: BOOM!
Panel Four: Superman is standing over the man, cape fluttering in the wind.
SUPERMAN: Give it up.
Pages 4-5 double page spread
Lower Panel: the man is in mid lunge, (again, many fists,) and mid-air, attacking Superman.
Panel Three: The man runs around him, sucking the air from his lungs.
Panel Four: Superman sticks out his hand, and the man trips over it.
Page Six
Panel One: Draw many lightly shaded bodies, showing how he skids across the ground, and lands on a cop car.
Panel Two: Cape still fluttering in the wind, Superman is standing in the air, above the police.
SUPERMAN: He’s all yours’ officers.
Panel Three: Superman flying away, draw it however you like.
Page seven: one page spread
Show LexCorp building.
CAP: “You gotta help me, Mr. Luthor, PLEASE hook me up again.
Page eight
Panel One: Lex is standing over the man, he is bent down, pleading at his feet.)
LEX: YOU’RE the one who got yourself addicted to my pills.
MAN: Just one more…PLEASE!
Panel Two: Show Luthor pondering it.
Page nine
Panel One: Lex is walking towards a door.
LEX: all right…
Panel Two: Show Lex from the front, doors sliding open, a shadow outline for what’s inside.
Page ten
Panel One: Pills, trillions of them all in am organized pile.
LEX: Just one more time.
Panel Two: Focus on Lex’s eyes
LEX: for a price….
Page eleven
Panel One: The man's eyes turn yellow, make his skin in mid transformation to purple.
MAN: Yessss
Panel Two: Luthor is being shoved aside.
MAN: Sorry Luthor....
Panel Three: The man is revealed to the THE PARASITE
PARASITE: But the Parasite want's it all!
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