How Spider-Man 4 should go.....

Post by Calvin (1,725 posts) See mini bio

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Even tought I never read a Lizard story in the Amazing or Ultimate Spider-man, I do think it's a good direction. It kind of feels like there's a lot of different characters, though, just like in the Spiderman 3.

And way to many girlfriends!! xD Did you realise you put the 3 more important love affairs in Peter's life? This way the last fight will be a catfight!! lol - JK!

I just don't know the Carnage very well either, so I'm really not the best critic for the script. I would love to see the movie, though.

Good stuff !!

This is what happen when you put all of Pete's girlfriends in on room!!!

Posted 5 months, 3 weeks ago

Post by sora_thekey (2,000 posts) See mini bio

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lonefang6x6 said:

Awesome!! If Sam Raimi could read this he would probably approve of this!

@lonefang6x6 said:

"Awesome!! If Sam Raimi could read this he would probably approve of this!
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Thanks.... You do not know how much it means to me to have some prise... (don't get a lot of it when it comes to family and friends)

ALthough I don't think that Marvel would want me.... I'm a repeller magnet when it comes to good fortune....

MercenaryX said:

I like it, but I would change most of this.

What would you change?

Posted 5 months, 2 weeks ago

Post by Incredible Hulk-Prime (1,295 posts) See mini bio

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Cool Story.

Posted 4 months, 3 weeks ago

Post by sora_thekey (2,000 posts) See mini bio

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@Incredible Hulk-Prime said:

"Cool Story. "

Thanks!

Posted 4 months, 3 weeks ago

Post by KasadyCarnage (112 posts) See mini bio

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Carnage might be in the 4th film cause in Amazing Spider-Man the Goblin kills Gwen and he is dead... so who kills Gwen in the ultimate series?.... Carnage!!

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by Wild Card (199 posts) See mini bio

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Black Cat should b in the next movie.

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by Flawless (71 posts) See mini bio

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@Wild Card: Yo Yo Yo shawty I'm feelin that move fo sho

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by Wild Card (199 posts) See mini bio

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@ Flawless: Hell yea she bangin

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by Jerry Seinfeld (211 posts) See mini bio

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Cool! Not to many villians. You used 2 instead of 3. Three usually messes up a movie such as in Batman and Robin or Spiderman 3.

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by Caligula (2,105 posts) See mini bio

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other than setting up for Jackal, i really liked this, you should set up for a different villain in 5, mabye Rhino or Shocker

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by sora_thekey (2,000 posts) See mini bio

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@KasadyCarnage said:

"Carnage might be in the 4th film cause in Amazing Spider-Man the Goblin kills Gwen and he is dead... so who kills Gwen in the ultimate series?.... Carnage!! "

Yeah but Captn Stacy has to die first.....

There's a reason I didn't kill off Carnage at the end.....

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by vegeta (4,131 posts) See mini bio

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canage and lizard and venom comes back too help spidey beat carnage

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by m_man360 (39 posts) See mini bio

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Good, nice story, but the truth is you need have a script at least 120 pages written and the film is already in development, david lindsay abaire is writing the script..........so technically you have no chance...........you can't base it on an existing work..............you need to own the rights................how old are you, if you are in your teens finish school and get a degree for writing, there are hundereds of people out there who want to do the same but can't.....................................that's the way the cookie crumbles.

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by m_man360 (39 posts) See mini bio

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Sorry to burst your bubble, but that's the truth, and probably the reason why your family and friends disapove is because they know that the chances are impossible to break into the industry, you can't just come up with a decent story and expect people to start trying to make it into a film without at least writing a script for it. Like i said it's a good story but way far fetched for the movie world, you have to apeal to a wide variety of an audience for the film to do well finacialy and criticaly. Maybe if you wrote a full script and pitched it before production you might have a chance of a final re-write or side credit, but truthfully i doubt they will even read it. You just might get a lawsuit than a credit on film, so just halt the dreaming for a while and write something original and pitch it, maybe it will be a masterpiece, and like i said if you are in your teens just get back to school books and other ventures, try something else.

Posted 4 months, 1 week ago

Post by sora_thekey (2,000 posts) See mini bio

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@m_man360 said:

"Sorry to burst your bubble, but that's the truth, and probably the reason why your family and friends disapove is because they know that the chances are impossible to break into the industry, you can't just come up with a decent story and expect people to start trying to make it into a film without at least writing a script for it. Like i said it's a good story but way far fetched for the movie world, you have to apeal to a wide variety of an audience for the film to do well finacialy and criticaly. Maybe if you wrote a full script and pitched it before production you might have a chance of a final re-write or side credit, but truthfully i doubt they will even read it. You just might get a lawsuit than a credit on film, so just halt the dreaming for a while and write something original and pitch it, maybe it will be a masterpiece, and like i said if you are in your teens just get back to school books and other ventures, try something else."

Dude I just did this for fun I'm not gonna sell it or become a writer.....

Read the beggining of the clog..... it says "plot idea"

Posted 4 months ago

Post by mr.drac (6 posts) See mini bio

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maybe you could end it with instead of miles eyes changing you could have him staring and this test tube with a clone embryo in it.

Posted 4 months ago

Post by sora_thekey (2,000 posts) See mini bio

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@mr.drac said:

"maybe you could end it with instead of miles eyes changing you could have him staring and this test tube with a clone embryo in it. "

Wouldn't that give too much away???
I mean to the people who don't read comics?

Posted 4 months ago

Post by Carnage47 (10 posts) See mini bio

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Well I wish Eddie Brock didn't die in Spider-man 3 beacause it ruins Spider-man 4 because of Eddie Brock and Cleatus kassidys hate for each other, but i think what could go well for Spider-man 4 isgoing a little spin off type thing, where Peter is in Conners class and Seriel killer Cleatus Kassidy joing the class, when after class Cleatus notices the symbiot (from Spider-Man 3) and investigates turning him into Carnage, So Carnage goes on a killing spree and a small peice of symbiote gets on MacGragan (the Scorpion) to recreate a new Venom. (then at end it seperates from gargan so he can be scorpian in Spider-Man 5)
That is what marvel should do for Carnage and Venom and at least add the lizard some how. That is just my opinion though.

Posted 2 months, 1 week ago

Post by Moomin123 (948 posts) See mini bio

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I think that Lizard and (or) Kraven the Hunter are going to be the villains. But I'd like Carnage or Mysterio to be the villains.

Posted 2 months, 1 week ago

Post by Carnage47 (10 posts) See mini bio

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@m_man360:
lol

Posted 2 months, 1 week ago

Post by RoninKane (11 posts) See mini bio

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Judging by Rami's comments I think he wants to stay away from Sybiote s in the spiderman movies from now on. He made it seem like he was pushed in to putting them in Spiderman 3

Posted 1 month ago

Post by sora_thekey (2,000 posts) See mini bio

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@RoninKane: He was actually forced to... but if the symbiotic story was already put in place so it would be wise to continue on the story.... right?

Posted 1 month ago

Post by Kombat-King (12 posts) See mini bio

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The story sounds OK but I don't like the idea of three GFs either. That just seems it would be a drama fest and that didn't work out in SM3. Also Carnage is just a red Venom to me. The Lizard idea is spectacular though.

P.S Here is an address

Creative Artists Agency
9830 Wilshire Boulevard
Beverly Hills, California 90212-1825
USA

Posted 4 weeks ago

Post by sora_thekey (2,000 posts) See mini bio

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@Kombat-King said:

"The story sounds OK but I don't like the idea of three GFs either. That just seems it would be a drama fest and that didn't work out in SM3. Also Carnage is just a red Venom to me. The Lizard idea is spectacular though.

P.S Here is an address

Creative Artists Agency
9830 Wilshire Boulevard
Beverly Hills, California 90212-1825
USA "

.. but I didn't put in 3 GF? Black Cat was flrting with Spidey, MJ is patching stuff up with Peter and Gwen figures just to be friends!

Posted 4 weeks ago

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