Disturbing Behavior

Topic started by Darkchild on June 17, 2009. Last post by Darkchild 1 month, 4 weeks ago.
Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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@Sha said:
" Awesome Post DCKinda hard to choose this one or Nova's "
^_^ Thank you


Post by Sha (23,877 posts) See mini bio

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No problem.


Post by ~The Wanderer~ (20,622 posts) See mini bio

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Awesome post DC! This keeps me wanting for more :P


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@~The Wanderer~ said:
" Awesome post DC! This keeps me wanting for more :P "
Thanks man. This and Ferals is a really cool story i got in my head, both are going to end quite awesomely


Post by ~The Wanderer~ (20,622 posts) See mini bio

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Looking forward to it...gonna get around to read Nova's too...


Post by D-MANN (23 posts) See mini bio

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@~The Wanderer~ said:
" Looking forward to it...gonna get around to read Nova's too... "
Sweet, Im really enjoying these two.


Post by Feral Nova (23,311 posts) See mini bio

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WOW! O_O This is awesome! Great post DC! :D



Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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Thank u. Now go read urs lol


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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Definatly will get back to this next week. This weeks really odd for me, next week should be better


Post by Nobody (27,642 posts) See mini bio

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Nice posts DC


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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WAL Headquarters lies in ruins. The blast from the explosion spread out a quarter mile from the base, and all that remains is the table in the middle of where the HQ once stood. Intact but on its side it lies for a moment before a blast of energy sends it skyward and it slams back to earth with a shatter and splinters.

Nevann stands up and looks around at the destruction, waiting for a moment as his hearing comes back to him looks around trying to find the others. Soon finding Guyver laying hunched over something, his arms wrapped around it. Nevann sprints to to X and grabs him by the shoulder, the suit burns Nevann and sizzlings. Soon Guyver rolls over breathing hard his suit covered in scorch marks, looking to what Guyver had been protecting Nevann finds Feral wide eyed. She sits up looking to Guyver and in a labored way she tells him "I would have survived the blast Guyver their was no need to protect me." Guyver chuckles bringing his hand to his side and pulling a long piece of shrapnal from the side of his midsection and holding it up to her "Wasnt the fire I was worried about, More these little things. Your fires strong, but it would only take one of these lodged in your neck or head to end you."

Guyver flicks the piece of metal away and stands holding his side, Nevann finally able to breath takes in a deep sigh and collapeses falling to his knees Feral rushing to his side asking if he was alright. He nods his head " Just tired, where were the others. Did they make it out?
" he asks Feral but saying it loud enough for Guyver to hear. Guyver stands staring at the ground on the other side of the base. Closing his eyes he mumbles something, then turning towards the others he walks over putting his hand to Nevanns shoulder "John and Ferro.....didnt make it. Found John across the way at the end of the blast area, looks like they were just about out when the place went up." letting out a long deep sigh "Ferro...I found parts of him, he was cut clean from what I found. So the shrapnel got him before the actual blast did, it was quick he felt nothing." Nevann palmed his face as his wife and him wept together, their children slaughtered and two of their best friends killed without  a warning. All of it was becoming more for the couple to handle, Ferals body burst into flames as anger rose in her "What happen?! What did this?!" Guyver picked up a piece of something and held it out to the two "Ive found four more of these, this is a piece to a sophisitacted bomb. Someone who knew our system placed them in entryways and hallways, so when they went off shrapnel would injure or kill. And if the shrapnel didnt get the targets us, the napalm and C4 would. First the shrapnel was shot out then the explosion came second, this is what got Ferro....the explosion of the one I found near them took John out. Nova.....only someone who could get in freely without suspision could have placed these, and hidden them so well. One was where a duct would have been right above the exit of a hallway. Nevann was right it was."

Before Guyver could finish a loud booming voice resonated in the now empty field, standing atop a large rock he started to clap and speaking within each of their minds "Well well well, it took you three long enough. You know I was wondering If i had given too many clues when I killed the little ones. But it looks like I wasnt as careless as I had initially thought, bravo Guyver for figuring out what I did." Staring intently at Nevann "Dont worry, you three arnt the only ones to survive the blast. Obi is...somewhere, Im sure he survived....well maybe. Can he fly?" with a smile he shrugs "Oh well lets hope he can, cause if not the glorious grand canyon trip I gave him will end with a rather grusome splat." He chuckles something fierce and hops down off the rock and starts walking towards the group. "Now to finish you three off, I was more hoping Nova would have been taken care of with the blast but....Im more than sure I can take you all on at once." encaing himself in a thin shield all around his body he grabs at the air pulling the water vapor out of it, and freezing it instantly creating a sword and spinning it he waits for them to attack.


Post by Feral Nova (23,311 posts) See mini bio

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O___O OMG FREAKEN AWESOME!!!! I loves it! >_< Wanderer is kick @ss xD


Post by ~The Wanderer~ (20,622 posts) See mini bio

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This is awesome. Evil me is badass xD


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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That he is this is going to be one awesome battle.


Post by Constantine (11,077 posts) See mini bio

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sweet stuff bro :D


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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thanks man


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Guyver looks to Nevann then to Nova "Get her outta here, shes not in a stable mind. We cant let him get to her go now!!" Guyver rushes Wanderer a long blade bursting from his wrist and catching it in the air he swings hard towards Wanderer rage in his eyes. Coming around with his elbow to Wandos head he leaps backwards and rushes again unleashing a flurry of attacks aiming at points that would end Wanderer quickly.  Wanderer with a wide smile dodges all the attacks with ease, and finding both Nevann and Nova still frozen he takes his attention away from Guyver.

And Guyver screams to him "You bastard!!! John and Ferro were your friends how could you do this." building up energy in his body he releases it at close range from his chest and it slams into Wanderer pushing hard against him. "We were your family, why turn and kill us? WHY?!" Wanderer growing impatient slams his foot down into the ground creating a portal and falling down into it. Disappearing the beam soon dies down and Guyver breaths heavy as he looks around, turning to Nevann and Nova he screams "Get out of here now!!! I will hold him off for as long as I can."Nevann grabs Nova by the hand and pulls her and they both sprint away at first and turn into a full out run in the opposite direction. Nevann searching for a place to hide for the moment or keep his wife safe.

Getting a good mile away from the fight he finds a cave, and pulls Nova into it "Baby....wake up." she stares off into the sky completely vacant nothing going on in her mind. Her best friend killed her children and her friends, Nevann cradles her "Dont worry Stephanie, Guyver will take care of it all......"

Back with Guyver

He looks everywhere for him, finding nothing but the open field. His body trembles with anger and power, the suit reacting to his emotions on levels he hadnt ever felt before. As If the suit itself was angered at Wanderers actions. Suddenly the sound of metal clanging alerts him and he spins around coming face to face with Wando, the once friend smiles "Hello" and plunges a sword deep into Guyvers chest. Guyvers eyes widen and he grabs the blade "Gonna take a little bit more than that Wando to get rid of me." Sending a fist into Wanderers face and then following a roundhouse kick to his jaw he watches as blood gushes from his mouth. And with a smile he runs into Wanderer grabbing him around the waist, an locking his arms together tackling him to the ground. Wanderer is confused with his actions "What the hell are you doing? Giving me one last man hug before you leave this world?" Guyver smiles as his chest burns with energy "Nope...Im sending you to hell. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" and screams in agony as he pulls all the energy he has into the one place he can do the most damage the cannon in his chest. And releasing it at this close range it tears the skin from his body and rips the suit to shreds, Wanderer screams in pain as the energy has no where else to go other than directly into his chest.

The attack lasted less than 15 seconds but it did its damage, Guyver rolls off Wanderers body and stares at him. Finding his body motionless he drags himself over to him and feels his pulse.....nothing. With a smile he pulls himself to a rock and pushes himself up to a standing position, and looking around sees the cave off in the distance. Soon he makes it over to Nevann and Nova. Nevann sees his friends body mangled beyond anything either has ever seen him in "Are you alright?" Nevann asks "Yeah im peachy....hows Nova?" looking over to the white eyed beauty. He frowns "Shes never going to be the same again is she?"

Nevann hangs his head "No she never will be, our children...are gone....and our team...well were all thats left." a look of terror comes to his face "Where is he?!" Guyver "Dont worry, hes dead. Close range blast did the trick."  Nevann stares at him "Really? Are you sure?" Guyver smiles for a moment at Nevann. Split second later Nevanns face is covered in blood

Guyver stands a dagger coming from the bottom of his neck to the middle of his forehead, breaking clear through the medal on his forehead. The dagger is pulled out and his body falls limp and to the ground "Nope....hes not." Wanderer says with a smile. Suddenly the cave sky rockets to temperatures exceeding 10000, a hand grabs onto Nevann and tosses him deep into the cave. Then the heat surges and slams into Wanderer sending him away from the mouth of the cave, Nevann stands up an runs quickly as a figure drenched in all white. Turning back the figure is shown in full "My turn.." and Nova grabs the edge of the cave an pulls down trapping Nevann inside. He is hit by one of the falling rocks and knocked unconcious, outside Nova stands watching as Wanderer stands up "Well now, seems your finally awake Im glad. Would have been such a pity if I had to end yourlife while you were still in lala land."


Post by ~The Wanderer~ (20,622 posts) See mini bio

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OH RIGHT..I forgot to comment...lol nice post DC!


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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LOL! thanks man


Post by Feral Nova (23,311 posts) See mini bio

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aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! THE FINAL COUNTDOWN! >_<

o_o who will win!? who will die!? WHO IS GOING TO CHECK ON MY COOKIES THAT I LEFT BAKING!? >_<

lol jk

awesome post DC! O_O' this is turning out to be epic...

glances over at Wando dont get any ideas from this... lol


Post by Goki (548 posts) See mini bio

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LOL!

Thank u loves, im really enjoying this one. Ive never had this much fun controlling characters like this.


Post by Feral Nova (23,311 posts) See mini bio

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bbbuuummmppp


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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This will REturn within the week along with all my other ongoing fanfics

House of Pain though might be a lost cause probably wont ever get back to that



Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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Wanderer still laughs as he watches Feral snaps the entrance of the cave like a twig, bringing down ton after ton of rocks closing it. Sealing her lover inside keeping him safe, she turns and her body bursts with fire and energy. A beautiful white light shined from her body and the sand around her immediately turned to glass, extending for three miles. A shockwave of heat surged towards him heating the sand as it neared turning it to glass. All he did was smile and a field of psionic energy erupted around him in a dome, the heat slammed into the shield and he could feel its intense heat even through the field. She looked straight at him and without any emotion but hatred told him "They were right, their is nothing anymore in your mind. All that remains is evil encarnate, you took every.....all of our family is gone besides Nevann and myself. I thought maybe we were wrong that you would never touch a hair on the children but...." Her whole body again radiated a bright white light, and slowly the light and the immense heat retreated back into her body causing her frail slender body to tremble as she spoke to him "Thats not the case, and today I will end it. We have trained in many ways, and I myself along with Nevann trained in the VR room in scenerios much like this. What would happen if one of our turned on us, what would we do.......we would fight back. And unfortunate for you Izac...I know all of your weaknesses." Her body no longer shined bright all of the energy she had internalized, she was planning to make this quick and bloody.

His sinful smile still etched onto his face he replied to her statement "Your a sad one Feral baby, you are so delusioned to think that you have any chance at staying alive long enough to touch me." His powers were slamming into her body, he was sending wave after wave of invisible psionic energy at her. It continued slamming into her body but she still stared him down "And now that you have trapped your husband in the rubble no one will be coming to save you. I have elimiated everyone...." He stopped talking as he looked closer at Feral, her body was no longer trembling, a fraction of a second ago she was trembling with power an fear....."Oh sh!t." He fired a ball of energy at Feral and it slammed into her, but a cloud of smoke burst as it did. Turning around a firey hot hand wrapped around his neck and squeezed hard, she felt his neck snapping slowly under her hand. Using the immense power of a supernova she internalized all of that power, giving her even more strength on top of what she already had.

Without a moment of hesitation she heated her hand to immense levels, the skin on his neck boiled and he did something he hadnt thought she could make him do....he screamed. The screams of pain echoed throughout the valley they fought and his thoughts projecting into her mind were gibberish. Soon their was nothing but charred skin on his neck and soon it would engulf his entire body, she was not happy with what she had to do. As she gripped his neck she brought her other hand up and balling her hand turning it into a fist "Take the brain....you take the power." Bringing it back she put all of her power into her fist and just as she was ready to finish it she stopped for a moment, his eyes widened to a saddened man "Stephanie please its not me, something is controlling me. Dont do this, Im so sorry!! It wasnt my fault, I wasnt in control....the children Im so sorry please?!!! FORGIVE ME!!!"

His eyes swelled with tears and she felt for him, she had always hoped it wasnt him in control and it was true he wasnt. She lowered her fist and the fire simply retreated back into her body, her chest glew with an intense red as the energies were stored in her abdomen. And with a smile she let his throat go, he wrapped his arms around her an embraced her "Feral Im so sorry, it wasnt my fault...it was his. Please forgive me...for everything and...and..." Feral looked at him "And what?Wando?" Suddenly his eyes were no longer red from tears an saddness they were evil once more "And for this...stupid b!tch." 

RIIIIP!!

The skin on her back tore open as a large spike burst into her chest and out the back, her eyes wide and with frieght she looked down at Wanderer he had a twisted smile on his face again. Standing up her body lifted off the ground, blood poured into a pool under her body as it hung from his chest. With a lick of her forehead the icicle that slammed into her chest shrank back into his body, and he let her body drop to the ground. The energies of the Supernova within her body made her body tremble with power, but this was not rage it was her body coping with the massive amount of energy and having no where to store it. He simply knelt down an smiled at her " Since you have very little time left, I will tell you why I am doing this....because I am not all you believe me to be." With a wave of his palm across his face it was shown who he was.

She couldnt believe it...and all she could say was  "Darkchild?" He smiled and then the smile turned into a booming laughter "Almost! My little lass it has been me this entire time, this body was most enjoyable to fight. So when he killed my body I decided to JUMP into his, waiting for my chance to get used to this massive amount of energy. He wasnt like the other one but he does just as well. Took a while to get used to the teleportation powers, those were nauseating." as he laughed an told her she glared at him "Genesis!"  He smiled slapping her face "BINGO!! You win a prize...but it does look like you wont get to see it. But Ill give you a going away present, those friends your team has what were they called the ones your childream loved. The VP right? oh they will be able to see you one more time." And with that he snapped his fingers and her body disappeared an reappeared in the VP headquarters.

A child walked up to her "Aunty Stephi?" She screamed at the child to run but it was too late.

VAROOM BOOM

The head quarters imploded as the energies within her body went nova, but on a much smaller scale. The entire country was wiped off the face of the map, and back with Wanderer he smiled as he felt her energy disappear "Such a waste, had such a nice ass. Hmmmph guess I gotta get rid of the wannabee ninja now, this one wont be as much fun as the others. But hell least I get to have a little fun." Just as Genesis/Wanderer was walking towards the pile of rubble he grabbed his skull an fell to the ground screaming in pain "GET OUT!! You shouldnt be here anymore!!! Damn you Izacc, stubborn little sh!t!!" AS he was distracted with his mental problems he wasnt able to sense the individual who had returned. As the person inched closer he finally made his pressence known "Levitating is not a difficult procedure Wando...I mean Genesis. It was the flight back here that was a pain in the ass." Shaking Izacc away within his mind Wanderer turned towards the voice and his eyes widened and then a smile came to his face "I was wondering if it really was going to be that easy to take you out....Obi Wan." 

Obi-Wan stood lightsaber in his hand, and his other arm shaking an cracking with electricity.



Post by ~The Wanderer~ (111 posts) See mini bio

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Wow O.O! That was awesome...
Just wondering though, why didn't the until-then-supressed-Wando urge Nova to escape? xP


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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He was trying to break free, it was just Genesis who was toying with her head to get her to let go. 

And the migraine Genesis got was Wanderer lashing out for Killing Nova



Post by ~The Wanderer~ (111 posts) See mini bio

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Ohh that makes more sense lol.


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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Lol


Post by Darkchild (34,039 posts) See mini bio

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So did u like the Matter MAnipulation idea in To End it All for Wanderer?


Post by ~The Wanderer~ (111 posts) See mini bio

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@Darkchild said:
" So did u like the Matter MAnipulation idea in To End it All for Wanderer? "
It wasn't bad, just felt a bit redundant..I had an idea for an ultimate, far future version of Wando turning into a Time Trapper/ Marquis of Death-like being that could manipulate time into smallest detail..which would include aging, de-aging, summoning, banishing and all that kind of stuff...adding matter manipulation to that would just be overkill :P