Disturbing Behavior

Topic started by Darkchild on June 17, 2009. Last post by Darkchild 1 month, 1 week ago.
Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
(I did not create this character, I am simply making it taking the character a different direction. And was given permission to do so. So enjoy)This takes place in a different Universe, This is by no way the Wanderer of 616 Vine World.

Vega Quadrant.

Wanderer sits alone huddled in a ball atop a asteroid. Tears stream down his face and freeze as the coldness of space finds them, looking to the planet the Asteroid hurtles towards Wanderer is lost in his thoughts.

48 hours ago.

Wando watches his fellow teammates make absolute fools of themselves as the world is once again purged of its troubles. Feral Nova bounces around the large room with a clump of mashed potatos in her hands "DIE YOU VILE CREATURE! DIE DARKCHILD!!" And she bursts forward tossing the mashed potatoes full speed towards Nevann, Nevann dodges it and mocking Darkchild bellows "NO WAY!! Not ever gonna happen love.!!" Trying to bulk himself he picks Nova up an tosses her on the couch. It had been 2 years since the last of the evil had been expunged from their world. The Last remnants of their troubles now gone, Darkchild was the last to fall against WAL. And Wando was the one who took him from this world. Using his manipulation of fire he expunged the world of the vile creature known as Darkchild, yet in doing so he awakened something dark an evil. It covered his entire right side in a dark substance, the others knew nothing of his recent troubles as his outfit hid it completely.

Nova smiled hopping over to him "Come on Wands!! Come on their all gone we must celebrate the occasion. We no longer have the need to fight, all of them are gone all that remains are good an pure people." Wanderer smiles an syncing up with her mind he tells her "And what now? What must we do now that the world is once an for all pure. What will we do as a team?" Feral stops bouncing long enough to think before smiling again "I guess theirs no need for us huh? I mean I am sure that something will come up right? Im pretty sure theirs aliens out their right?" with a smile she giggles saying "ET PHONE HOME!!" making antennas with her fingers beside her head before bouncing away from Wanderer. He sat their smiling as the dark substance grew a little bit more as his thoughts raced something sinister came with the substance and he smiled saying to himself  "Yes I think your right....something will come up." leaping from the table he disappears teleporting away. A burned impression of where his right hand rested stays behind,


Post by Desiree Celion (101 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
O_o

LOL i like it, but i liked drifter's better!


Post by Feral Nova (22,757 posts) See mini bio

Loading...

Online Now

awesome job DC! O_O Now hurry up and do the next one! I wanna know what happens next! lol



Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
LOL ill let Wands see itit then ill continue



Post by Feral Nova (22,757 posts) See mini bio

Loading...

Online Now

v-v fine..... lol


Post by ~The Wanderer~ (20,023 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
Nice take ^^
-.- Cliffhanger much...lol


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
LOL yeah its a cliff hanger. And im sure will be more than awesome when it ends.


Post by Little Sparrow (67 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
1


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
Not trying to get graded Arrow, just doing it out of fun....prick LOL

Thanks anyway.

Well im off ill have a new post for both fanfics later tonight when i get outta work


Post by Little Sparrow (67 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
thats 1 out of 1 thats a top grade!


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
@Little Sparrow said:
" thats 1 out of 1 thats a top grade! "
LOL ok

Go read the one for Drifter im sure ull have the same reactions as the others LMMFAO!


Post by Little Sparrow (67 posts) See mini bio

Loading...

Did he write it or you?



Post by aztek the lost (19,555 posts) See mini bio

Loading...

Moderator

it was...satisfactory...though it seemed to be making fun of Nova more than focusing on CG


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
@Little Sparrow said:
"

Did he write it or you?

"
I did

@aztek the lost said:
" it was...satisfactory...though it seemed to be making fun of Nova more than focusing on CG "

These arnt for making fun its a new take. I read over Wandos profile and found a route i liked so i took it.


Post by Acer (11,346 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
Cool take.


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
Wanted to finish Drifters before i came back to this, a new post or two will be up tomorrow most definate. Cant wait to kickl this into high gear


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
Isacc reappears outside the base for the younglings of the Wal team, many of these children are the offspring of the elite members of WAL. As he walks up with a bright smile on his face Hotaru bounces up latching herself to his leg like a anchor looking up "Uncle Wandos here!!" the children all turn to her screams of join and all huddle around him wishing to have their turn on his mighty legs. Isacc smiles but inside his mind is nothing but happiness, something inside has left his true soul vacant and empty. All that remains is something dark an sinister, kneeling down to many of their levels he asks " Alright kids, lets play hide an go seek alright." Hotaru pops up nodding her head quickly being the youngest she huddles around a tree placing her face down into the tree an begins to count.

As she reaches 5 Wanderer walks up slowly behind her, tilting her head she turns around looking to Wanderer "Uncle Wando....your not playing right. Your suppose to go hide and I count alright." Placing her head back onto the tree she begins to count again, then Isacc speaks up again "I have no need to hide...from foolish weaklings like you." Hotarus eyes widen and she tries to let out a scream as Wandos hand presses hard onto the back of her head. A small whisper escapes his mouth as he places his hand on her back, quickly jabbing forward his hand bursts through her tiny frail body without any trouble. She lets out a small whimper as she slides from the trunk of the tree to the ground, hearing someone coming up behind him Isacc leaps into the tree branches. Raver an Shinzui both walk up babling how Hotaru sucks at counting why she was the one to be picked it, then they stop in their tracks mouths agap. They try to scream for help but their bodies convulse as Wanderers hand glows a bright blue, his hand palmed out then closing it quickly both the childrens bodies burst into a cloud of blood an water. With a sinister smile he leaps down from the tree and calls out for the others "Hey Guys come back...something aweful has happened." a sword of ice forms in his hand as the sound of childrens feet patter on the ground.

Four hours later.

Nevann wanders the empty field screaming out his daughters name "HOTARU!! Where are you?!! This isnt funny anymore, Come on out!" Looking around he backs into the tree and feeling something warm on his hand he turns around only to fall backwards his mouth hanging open he screams something gutteral an feral. Soon Feral Nova comes to see whats wrong and she too lets out a blood curtling scream, as she does the grizzly sight is shown to all. All the children hang some in pieces from the branches of their tree, a long sword made of ice sticking out from the truck of the tree.


Post by Sha (23,504 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
O_O!!!!

I'm so glad Sha died and got out of Young Wal. Secondly i'm happy mine is about a pole lol.


Awesome but Weird post lol


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
@Sha said:
" O_O!!!!I'm so glad Sha died and got out of Young Wal. Secondly i'm happy mine is about a pole lol.Awesome but Weird post lol "
Thank you.


Post by PRIMAV3RA (14,974 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
OHhhh i really like this one, the plot is really intresting and different which is what i like the most :) :)

good job cant wait for thee rest


Post by ~The Wanderer~ (20,023 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
o_o Nice...looking forward to see what I'm planning xP


Post by Feral Nova (22,757 posts) See mini bio

Loading...

Online Now

YOU KILLED MY TWINS!? O_O!

WANDO HOW COULD YOU! >_< ITS ON NOW! xP

awesome job DC o_o


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
@PRIMAV3RA said:
" OHhhh i really like this one, the plot is really intresting and different which is what i like the most :) :)good job cant wait for thee rest "
@Feral Nova said:
" YOU KILLED MY TWINS!? O_O! WANDO HOW COULD YOU! >_< ITS ON NOW! xPawesome job DC o_o "
@~The Wanderer~ said:
" o_o Nice...looking forward to see what I'm planning xP "
Thank you all of you.

Wando is going to be looking pretty f@#king badass in the next few post. Hope im doing him justice Wanderer really hope i am.

And yes for any of you looking DEEP into the lines, last two posts have been an Ode to DARTH VADER.


Post by PRIMAV3RA (14,974 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
I KNEW IT! *says in vader voice* :D


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
@PRIMAV3RA said:
" I KNEW IT! *says in vader voice* :D "
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Riight


Post by xxCellPhoneGirlxx (5,645 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
O_o hahah

wow, Great posts..


Post by ~The Wanderer~ (20,023 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
@Darkchild said:
" Hope im doing him justice Wanderer really hope i am. "
You are so far, don't worry :P
Looking forward to next part ^^


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
@~The Wanderer~ said:
" @Darkchild said:
" Hope im doing him justice Wanderer really hope i am. "
You are so far, don't worry :PLooking forward to next part ^^ "
Yeah ill be making a post in it later tonight. Tonights post will be setting the foundation for what WAL will do an who they think it is.

@xxCellPhoneGirlxx said:
" O_o hahah wow, Great posts.. "

Thnk you


Post by Darkchild (33,855 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
The WAL members remove the children, and a few of them remove their own children from the tree. As they take the corpses of the entire Young WAL team from the tree each stare at the never melting sword embedded in the trunk of the tree. Each never stare at the sword that killed their children for too long for they do not wish to know exactly who performed such a hanus act.

Burying their young they return to the WAL main base, and each upon grabbing something to sooth their misery sit around a table. Staring at what Nevann brought from the site they just returned from, it lies in the middle of the table. And the first to speak is Nova.

"No.....theirs no way it could be him. Theirs got to be another explanaition, maybe Darkchild didnt die. Maybe he took his powers, maybe even Goki is back. He is much like his father, maybe seeking vengence for what we did to his father." Nova places her hand on her face crying over the children she had to bury today, two of which were her own. Sobbing hard Guyver cant help it but he too must speak his mind "Nova, Darkchild is gone. His soul burned in the fire that....he blasted him with. You remember the look in his eyes when he took the life from Darkchild he was...enjoying it almost...too much. And now maybe..." Feral screams at Guyver "NO!! ITS NOT HIM IT CANT BE!! HE WAS THEIR UNCLE!!" Slamming her fist onto the table it ignites for a brief moment before Nevann swings a small sword the rush of air putting out the fire. Nevann is still quiet and he looks to Obi who still is silent himself, Obi Wan looks to Nevann without a word he stands up an walks out of the room Nevann shouts to him "Get back here!!"

Obi turns his head slightly looking to Nevann "Uchi...f@#k you. You know what must be done, yet you meditate on the issue with a room full of emotional women. I am going to do what must be done." As Obi Wan walks from the room, Ferro and John Valentine stand up an leave with him. Patting Uchi on the shoulders as they leave. Now all that remain in the room is Nevann himself along with the rest of the major team. He looks to Guyver, Feral, and Guyver and finally speaks his mind ".....Hes right. Feral I am sorry but...Wanderer must die for the crimes he has commited today an those he has yet to commit."


Computer Room. A set of muscular fingers tap one after another on the desktop, staring at the computer screen the hand reaches up and turns the audio off. And leaning into the light of the computer screen "You wish to kill me? HAHAHAHA that is quite entertaining." He says within his mind "Yet none of your will live long enough to set your dirty hands on my body." Standing up out of the chair a Digital Clock counts down, and Wanderer opens a portal and disappears.

3



2



1...........




BOOM!!!!




Post by Sha (23,504 posts) See mini bio

Loading...
Awesome Post DC

Kinda hard to choose this one or Nova's