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#1 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

Here is an opportunity for Naruto fans to submit a character of their imagination for the world of the Konoha ninja tribe.

(Disclaimer: If you are not a fan please do not litter this thread with hateful bombast. Give a hoot don't pollute.Thanx)

Try and be original in the conception of your character. If copycat characters are submitted they will be pointed out and scorned on site.

If you don't know Japanese,english will do . For example: Your charactes's name is Turtle surname Dynamite, if you can't translate it don't worry about it. Same goes for Jutsus.

Create!!!

Well!!!!!!

#2 Posted by Akronis the Immortal (153 posts) - - Show Bio

Naruto sucks, plain and simple. This thread = Fail.

#3 Posted by Buckshot (18913 posts) - - Show Bio

You're not adding to the thread so please don't post in it.

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#4 Posted by Resonate (15054 posts) - - Show Bio

Sling Shot says:

" (Disclaimer: If you are not a fan please do not litter this thread with hateful bombast. Give a hoot don't pollute.Thanx) "

Akronis the Immortal says:

"Naruto sucks, plain and simple. This thread = Fail."

I don't think you understand the concept.

#5 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

@ Anus the immature: Read the disclaimer, pop tart.

#6 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

So, like, would it be a copy of our character(CV) if we submitted a character like our character?

#7 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

If the character you submit fits organically within the bounds of the Naruto mythos and does not mimic too closely mimic any other main characters it won't be considered a xerox.

#8 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

Yoroi Raion (Surname: Armor, Lion)

Hidden Island Shinobi

Jounin

Ht:5'10" Wt:175

Hair:Black dreads, Skin:Mahogany, Eyes:Brown, Age:15

Hidden Island:The whole Island is made up of tribes of people of African descent. The Hidden Island has a strong heritage of shinobi much the same as Konoha.

Appearance:Dressed ike a Capoeria Maestre/ninja hybrid.Raion clothes are predominantly white with green, red and black striping running vertically along the seam of his baggy linin pants and cotton Aframe shirt(wifebeater.)His hair is neat shoulder length dreads pulled back into a pony tail, certain dreads are decorated with beads and shells native to his beachside village in the hidden Island of the Mist.He carries a small hand drum on a bandolier that also houses his knives and throwing weapons.

Fighting style:

Kekkai genkai: Sweat Armor: Unique to the Yoroi bloodline is the sweat armor. It is a specialized chakra charged coating that is activated by intentional prespiration. Raion's armor coats his body in a lavender sheen that imitates a mettalic look and density. The armor is very resourceful for parrying chakra and recycling it, and its near frictionless finish makes the wearer exceptionally elusive in combat, most attacks slide off or become glancing blows dependant upon the skill level in Capoeria style taijutsu that is commomn to the Hidden Island region.Of which Raion is considered a maestre(jounin) level. When employing the Armor Raion is like a impervious ball of lightning, deceptive and deadly.

Ninjutsu: Raion utilizes a special jutsu more than any other, known as the Lion's roar. The Lion's Roar is a devestating attack that utilizes finger signaling in conjunction with special voice activated chakra emmision.When performed correctly the Lion's roar can turn Raion's yells into vocal bombs. This technique is dangerous for the practioner as well as the victim so those with the Sweat Armor are the only ones really seen using the jutsu without ill-effect to their person. Raion has confesses to exploding a large swath of forest when he was a gennin irresponsibly using the jutsu.

Genjutsu: More than any other deception Raion employs the Lion's reflection. Through the use of the Lion's roar, but a song instead of a yell Raion can create the illusion of a mirror image of himself and cancel out his actual image so that his visible attacks are actually the mirror reflection of what he is doing invisibly.IE: If he is seen attacking from the right he is actually on the left and so forth.

Taijutsu: The Hidden Island has created a deceptive and rhythmic taijutsu known as Capoeria. It incorporates many cyclical movements utilizing acrobatic flashy kicks and feints much of it executed while standing on your hands.Raion is extremely well versed in this combat form. He is highly adaptive in his approach to melee and even confesses to hearing a certain music while playing (fighting) and creates a dance for it. Though savage kicks are often used joint manipulations and explosive punches (hooks) are also part of the taijutsu.

Bio: Raion is easygoing and freindly, His approach to even the most tense situations is with an amicable ease. Because of his hospitable nature he exudes confidence.

#9 Posted by Buckshot (18913 posts) - - Show Bio

I like that a lot, all of it just works.

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#10 Posted by Forever (4332 posts) - - Show Bio

Fantastic job Sling.

#11 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

That's awesome, and I know mine won't be able to be like that, but can one of the taled beasts be a seven tailed demon wolf? Just wondering...

#12 Posted by Fantasma Ghost (1452 posts) - - Show Bio

Sling Shot says:

"Yoroi Raion (Surname: Armor, Lion)Hidden Island ShinobiJouninHt:5'10" Wt:175Hair:Black dreads, Skin:Mahogany, Eyes:Brown, Age:15Hidden Island:The whole Island is made up of tribes of people of African descent. The Hidden Island has a strong heritage of shinobi much the same as Konoha.Appearance:Dressed ike a Capoeria Maestre/ninja hybrid.Raion clothes are predominantly white with green, red and black striping running vertically along the seam of his baggy linin pants and cotton Aframe shirt(wifebeater.)His hair is neat shoulder length dreads pulled back into a pony tail, certain dreads are decorated with beads and shells native to his beachside village in the hidden Island of the Mist.He carries a small hand drum on a bandolier that also houses his knives and throwing weapons.Fighting style:Kekkai genkai: Sweat Armor: Unique to the Yoroi bloodline is the sweat armor. It is a specialized chakra charged coating that is activated by intentional prespiration. Raion's armor coats his body in a lavender sheen that imitates a mettalic look and density. The armor is very resourceful for parrying chakra and recycling it, and its near frictionless finish makes the wearer exceptionally elusive in combat, most attacks slide off or become glancing blows dependant upon the skill level in Capoeria style taijutsu that is commomn to the Hidden Island region.Of which Raion is considered a maestre(jounin) level. When employing the Armor Raion is like a impervious ball of lightning, deceptive and deadly.Ninjutsu: Raion utilizes a special jutsu more than any other, known as the Lion's roar. The Lion's Roar is a devestating attack that utilizes finger signaling in conjunction with special voice activated chakra emmision.When performed correctly the Lion's roar can turn Raion's yells into vocal bombs. This technique is dangerous for the practioner as well as the victim so those with the Sweat Armor are the only ones really seen using the jutsu without ill-effect to their person. Raion has confesses to exploding a large swath of forest when he was a gennin irresponsibly using the jutsu.Genjutsu: More than any other deception Raion employs the Lion's reflection. Through the use of the Lion's roar, but a song instead of a yell Raion can create the illusion of a mirror image of himself and cancel out his actual image so that his visible attacks are actually the mirror reflection of what he is doing invisibly.IE: If he is seen attacking from the right he is actually on the left and so forth.Taijutsu: The Hidden Island has created a deceptive and rhythmic taijutsu known as Capoeria. It incorporates many cyclical movements utilizing acrobatic flashy kicks and feints much of it executed while standing on your hands.Raion is extremely well versed in this combat form. He is highly adaptive in his approach to melee and even confesses to hearing a certain music while playing (fighting) and creates a dance for it. Though savage kicks are often used joint manipulations and explosive punches (hooks) are also part of the taijutsu.Bio: Raion is easygoing and freindly, His approach to even the most tense situations is with an amicable ease. Because of his hospitable nature he exudes confidence."

Real nice, great character and background.

#13 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

A jinchuriki? A human with a tailed demon sealed inside of them. You can go that route if you like, but the seven tailed fox is Naruto, so someone might call you out on that alone.

#14 Posted by Resonate (15054 posts) - - Show Bio

Sling Shot says:

"A jinchuriki? A human with a tailed demon sealed inside of them. You can go that route if you like, but the seven tailed fox is Naruto, so someone might call you out on that alone."

Actually it was the 9 tails, so he's good until it gets introduced lol

#15 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

What the....It is the 9tails. I'm trippin. Good Look Res. My bad Cryo 7 tail wolf out till your hearts content.

#16 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

Ok, I looked up all of the nine-tailed beasts, and none of them are wolves, or have the ice element...so.....I was wondering if I could make it one of the rare other tailed beasts (lesser than the nine) or, like, make it so that 11 through 18 are angels as opposed to demons.

#17 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

Cryo-Wolf says:

"Ok, I looked up all of the nine-tailed beasts, and none of them are wolves, or have the ice element...so.....I was wondering if I could make it one of the rare *other* tailed beasts (lesser than the nine) or, like, make it so that 11 through 18 are angels as opposed to demons."

They got gaara sand one tail raccon they have the three tailed shark kisame has it their was a girl with like a four tailed dog then their was a two tailed turtle also orochomaru had the 8 tailed snake thats all thats been shown up to date we all know about narutos fox being over 1000 years old and all so i didn't have to name him.

#18 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

No, there's an actual legend on it, and though they don't follow the legend exactly, none of those are wolves. I was thinking either there were other tailed beasts, like 11 to 13, like three that were never told because they were forgotten in distant lands(where my character is to be from)

Either that, or 11 through 18 are actually spirits instead of demons, like angels.

#19 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

I know what you man their is a tale to it and yes it was a fox now wolf and the fox lived along time after every one hundred years it gained a tail by the 1000 year it would become immortal. and cyro i got some wolf pics i know you would love to see lol i saved them to my computer but you have to see them when i saw them i thought of you no homo though i mean i thought you would like them. And in the show it goes up to 9 tails and manga the most naruto ever let out was about 4 he was strong.

#20 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

Can't I just make a thirteen-tailed wolf of ice!? OMG.....I already have the story. The three other beasts were forgotten because they came from distant lands(My character comes from he Far North region)

#21 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

Cryo-Wolf says:

"Can't I just make a thirteen-tailed wolf of ice!? OMG.....I already have the story. The three other beasts were forgotten because they came from distant lands(My character comes from he Far North region)"

Lol i'm not stopping you its not up to me you could i guess yeah but i was just saying i got a pic you would like to see i hope.

#22 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

Fine show it.

#23 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

On my other computer lol i will get it when my sis gets on till then suffer with patience lol.

#24 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

where are the Naruto fans!

#25 Posted by Buckshot (18913 posts) - - Show Bio

I saw this and I was thinking of making a character around it (could even be another Hidden Island ninja) but nothing's jumping out at me right now. Figured I'd post it anyway so it at least gets seen since I think it looks good.

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#26 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

Damn, that is a sweet pic. He would be a kick-@$$ Hidden Island Ninja. I have the drawing for my character done, I'm just fine tuning the Jutsus a bit =D

#27 Posted by Resonate (15054 posts) - - Show Bio

Sling Shot says:

"where are the Naruto fans!"

Right here..hey you should ask Starleafgirl about hers because she has a freaking awesome character. I know this because she PM'ed me a while back and asked me about every question she could come up with and it scared me lol..I'm honestly thinking up a character right now. Might make him a Rogue Hyuga member or sommething I don't know...

#28 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

Before I introduce my character, I'll introduce the Tailed Beast sealed inside of him.

Anumaki, the 13-tailed Wolf of the North.

One of the Four Forgotten tailed beasts, The Wolf, Anumaki, was long thought of as the spirit of the North. The Four Forgotten tailed beasts were Native to distant lands, which is why they were forgotten from the 9 beast lore. It was usually the last sight of those who died in blizzards, especially blizzards described as demonic or unnatural. It plagued the Far North for years, and when it threatened to spread the cold and ice elsewhere, it was sealed into the body of the only one that could control it-the Karyuudo child of the Wolves.

And now for my character:

Karyuudo Shimoyake (Last Name: Karyuudo[Hunter], First Name: Shimoyake[Frostbite]), Far North Shinobi Chunin

Ht: 5'7", Wt:160, Hair: Dark Brown, almost Black, Skin: Copper(Native American-ish), Eyes: Golden-Yellow, Age: 15

Region: Far Noth. This region was founded by the Karyuudo Clan after they were banished from Kirigakure because of their Kekkai Genkai. Before they arrived it was a desolate, inhabitable region, but they were the first to colonize it. There they learned to freeze their Water Jutsu into Ice Jutsu by learning from the surrounding environment to control temperature. Many have fled to the Far North, making it a region of Rejects and Outcasts. The people of Far North have learned to live in the harsh conditions there, resulting in expert hunters, fisherman, and survival specialists. They use everything to its fullest extent, letting nothing go to waste. To the people of the Far North, everything has a use and a purpose. The region is wrought with freezing cold and merciless blizzards.

Hidden Village: Koorigakure (Village Hidden in Ice). The Hidden village of the Far North lies in a hollowed out Iceberg, constantly floating in its arctic waters. It is the size of a normal village like Konoha and is the biggest iceberg in The Far North, kept from melting by the villagers' Ice Jutsus. Most of its villagers are of the Karyuudo Clan, but because of their welcoming nature, it is home to many peoples.

Profile: Shimoyake was the thirteenth child born in Koorigakure, and because Anumaki, the 13-tailed beast of lore, was ravaging the land, the edlest Karyuudo(who had already designated Shimoyake's animal guide as the wolf) decided he was the perfect vessel for Anumaki. Anumaki was then sealed within Shimoyake as a baby, before he was sent to live with wolves. Shimoyake has always wanted to be a Medi-nin, and is close to becoming one. He spends his days on call as a medi-nin-in-training. Anumaki's Chalkra has allowed Shimoyake to excel in Ice Jutsus, and when used in conjunction with his Kekkai Genkai, it can transform him into a full werewolf-like state. One of his main weapons is his intellect, which is widely revered in Koorigakure. He attained the rank of Chunin at a young age because of his intellect.

Kekkai Genkai: Beast Molding: The Karyuudo bloodline holes a technique known as Beast Molding. When each member of the Karyuudo Clan is born, the eldest member of the family declares them an animal guide. For 1 year, they are sent to live with that animal to adapt their characteristics. The Karyuudo's Chalkra allows them to not only communicate with animals, but mold their bodies around the animals'. When a member of the clan is born, their chalkra is bland, having nothing to identify itself. Even their anatomy is just waiting to be molded into a specific type. When they are sent to live with their animal guide's family for a year, their chalkra "molds" everything about that Karyuudo to conform with that of the animal. Their physiology, mindset, and behavior is changed to become like the animal. Those characteristics stick with them for their entire life. Shimoyake's animal guide was the Wolf. Anumaki was sealed into him as a baby, before he was sent to live with a Wolf Pack. Everything about him is now wolf-like. He is strongly pack, or family, oriented, but is still a lone-wolf type character. His physiology has changed to conform to a wolf's, suh as a special blood vessel to prevent freezing, scent glands to leave his scent more easily, heightened senses, becoming digitigrade, or having larger feet and hands to distribute his weight evenly when running, heightened wolf-like physical abilities, modified teeth, and much more. Each member of the Karyuudo bloodline comes up with their own Jutsus using what they learned from their animal guides as a sort of coming of age ritual.

Ninjutsu: Shimoyake mostly fights using his Taijutsu or Water and Ice Jutsus, but he has produced a special jutsu he calls Howling Jutsu. His vocal chords changed to resemble a wolf's, giving him the ability to howl. By enhancing his howls with chalkra, he can alternate pitches and tones for varying affecs such as sonic emition, destructive capability, or mesmerizing an opponent. Those are the only pitches he has discovered so far, but is determined to learn more. Each has a different degree of difficulty. He is also fiddling with a technique of using this jutsu, but not opening his mouth to howl. Because the sonic energy has nowhere to travel, he can channel it through his hands to emit Sonic Vibrations to enhance physical attacks or channel into the ground. He has not mastered this technique yet, since the sonic energy is very hard to control.

Genjutsu: Shimoyake doesn't use much Genjutsu, but he did form his own based on the wolf's pack hunting strategy. He calls this technique Wolf Pack Jutsu. He can create corporeal clones of himself, but only up to four. Each is a full clone, and has his wolf traits. The only thing they do not have is Anumaki's chakra, which is a big way of telling the clones from the real Shimoyake. Each clone has its own mind and operates on a hive mind, allowing them to travel over long distances and still keep in touch. All four clones, plus Shimoyake have the same scent, so if one crosses over into the path of another, they will know that a clone or the real thing has been there. When the clones are formed, each one has a specific rank. Shimoyake is the Alpha, making him in charge. The other four clones rank as Beta, Gamma, Delta, and Omega. The clones refer to Shimoyake as Alpha, and as such he refers to each one as their rank. They do not have the chakra to perform Water or Ice jutsus, which is why Shimoyake never uses them when Clones are formed. The clones, however, o have knowlege of his Taijutsu and Wolf Jutsus, which is what they fight as. They, however, cannot make clones. Togther, they hunt as a true Wolf Pack.

Taijutsu: The Karyuudo Clan has formed their own Taijutsu, similar to their Kekkai Genkai, known as Animikku, short for Animaru Mimikku(literally Animal Mimic). It utilizes an animal's movements in martial arts. Each member of the Karyuudo clan has their own branch of the Taijutsu based on their animal. Shimoyake knows the Wolf Style of Taijutsu, which is comprised of quick movements and quick strikes to an opponent, rather than power. Because it does not involve chakra, the Karyuudo have taught it to members of Koorigakure, making it the Taijutsu of The Far North. When one learns Animikku, they must learn from a Karyuudo, because they have the senses to tell which animal would be best suited for that individual.

I hope it's good enough. I had fun coming up with it, and my friends who are way more involved in Anime than I am helped me with the names. I didn't try to copy anyone, so if I did, it was totally accidental.

#29 Posted by Quintus_Knightfall (84356 posts) - - Show Bio

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn Cryo. Nice

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#30 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

The drawing or the story? I liked both of 'em, Now I really want a Naruto RPG to play him lol

#31 Posted by Quintus_Knightfall (84356 posts) - - Show Bio

Both. You could always make one ya know.

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#32 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

It wouldn't be that good. Not many people probably would join, plus I'd need a storyline, and people might want to play other characters instead of making a Naruto version of their character. But, idk...

#33 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

cyro you ever get my pics i sent you check your PM

#34 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

Yes I got them. I got it the day you sent them.

#35 Posted by zee crusher (8997 posts) - - Show Bio

Oh so you didn't like them i supose then.

#36 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

WOw.

@Cryo: Wooowee, that is the level effort I'm talking about. You got hte culture the history the customs of the people as well as the character. Your ideas are great and translated really well. I especially like the animal molding.The art was dope too. Excellent job.And if there is a Creator-owned RPG I'm in as Raion Yoiroi.

Side note:( Your wolf howl jutsu reminds me of the Lion roar nin/genjutsu my character has,and the wolf pack remind me of Naruto's clones,just to shoot straight with ya.)

@ Buck: THat pic is dope where'd you find it? Whatever character you make for that pisc is going to be dope. And make him from the Hidden Island because his power fist band is too fresh.

@ Res: Tell Starleafgirl to shake a leg and get her character on her i can't wait to see it.

#37 Posted by Jax (7542 posts) - - Show Bio

Kiyoshi Morioka. Kiyoshi=quiet. Land of Death originally from Konoha but brought to LOD after birth. Jounin

Height: 6ft 4 inches. Weight: 250lbs. Hair: Long black hair. Skin: Brownish Black (African like). Eyes: Black Age: 14

Land of Death: A war ridden land. This place is home to only the most formidable opponents. Bodies everywhere you step. Very few people live here.

Appearance: Wears all Black. His hair flows down to his back. Wears a black robe with pants under it. On the robe is the word Shi in the front below the neck which means death and is the name of his friend. Blue and Red stripes are on the upper torso and lower torso but not in the middle. His pants have no coloring they're just black. On his back he carries 2 swords which he uses for combat.

Fighting Style:

Kekkai Genkai: Blood power. Unique to Kiyoshi's bloodline is the blood power. Whenever in a battle and if any fighter loses a drop of blood his skills change dramatically but first his arms automatically absorb the blood. When he absorbs the blood that leaves him open for a second. Kiyoshi's power quadruples on 1 drop of blood and can keep increasing but there's a limit. He can only increase his power by 4 about 3 times. So 3 drops of blood and his power increases by 12 which makes him a almost unbeatable opponent. He can manipulate the blood in his body to form powerful weapons, shields, and use the blood in his body for special jutsu. The Morioka family has a high amount of marrow in their bones allowing them to make more blood.

Ninjutsu:

Kiyoshi knows most types of elemental jutsu like Grand fireball or Earth shake but uses a special type of jutsu called Blood limit. Blood limit uses specific hand signs in order to trap there opponent and while the opponent is trapped in the dome made of blood and chakra Kiyoshi then extracts all the blood in the opponents body for his own use. Kiyoshi also knows an ability called Blood River. Blood river uses up blood and a lot of chakra. Blood River transforms the ground into a river of blood engulfing the opponent.

Genjutsu:

Kiyoshi is deadly with Genjutsu. Kiyoshi's favorite Genjustu illusion is Blood Rain. Blood Rain is rain made of blood that causes the opponent to relive horrible experiences in their lives. This jutsu causes most people to go mad or insane with guilt or sorrow. He also knows one other Genjutsu illusion. His other one is Blood Death. This jutsu uses blood so that it creates a dead replica of Kiyoshi while the real one escapes. This jutsu is useful because when he creates the replica the real one turns so small that you can't see him and he grows back to 6ft 4inches when he feels the opponent is convinced.

Taijutsu:

Kiyoshi enhances his Taijutsu with chakra making his attacks more powerful. He uses a gentle fist style, Jujutsu style, and he's a swordsman. Like the Hyuga clan he uses his attacks to block points in the body but instead of blocking chakra points he blocks points where blood flows. As for Jujutsu he uses indirect force to defeat a opponent. He uses throws and the opponents force against him/her. He's also a master at evading. As for Swordsmanship he uses the 2 swords he keeps on his back to fight and to defend.

Bio:

Kiyoshi is quiet most of the time because very few people live in the Land of Death. Kiyoshi has only 2 friends whose names are Shi and Kita. Kiyoshi wishes to know where he comes from because he knows he's not from the LOD but his parents died before he could know. They died when he was 10. Kiyoshi also knows they left him a path to follow to discover where he comes from. Kiyoshi is a proud warrior who doesn’t get overconfident and knows when to flee. He's happy to help anyone he gets to know.


Post Edited:2008-01-12 15:14:04

#38 Posted by Jax (7542 posts) - - Show Bio

After I figured out the kekkai Genkai the rest was easy but after seeing Cryo's and Sling's mine looks light.

#39 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

Sling Shot says:

"@Cryo: Wooowee, that is the level effort I'm talking about. You got hte culture the history the customs of the people as well as the character. Your ideas are great and translated really well. I especially like the animal molding.The art was dope too. Excellent job.And if there is a Creator-owned RPG I'm in as Raion Yoiroi. Side note:( Your wolf howl jutsu reminds me of the Lion roar nin/genjutsu my character has,and the wolf pack remind me of Naruto's clones,just to shoot straight with ya.)

Thanks! I love him. I know there are some similiarities, but, for the record, I was planning on making something on a Wolf's Howl before Lion's Roar was posted. It's not so much, since Lion's Roar is yells, just any yells, but Howling Jutsu is howling at different tones and pitches like actual wolves. As in, he can just create super sonic sound that can crack glass and be really loud or he does something that can actually destroy stuff like an almost wind blast and be loud, or if it's a really low haunting pitch, it can put th opponent into a trance.

I tried making it different, and as for the clones, I didn't make their power so much different as their character. Like, the whole hunting like the wolf pack, the rankings, and stuff like that. That's how I made that stuff different.

#40 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

Nawwww. Yours is tight. And for a 14 year old he is a biiig boy. The blood theme is crazy. On intimidation alone he would win half his battles. The Blood rain genjutsu is money, like a Naruto Penance stare.Crazy dope submission.

#41 Posted by Resonate (15054 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"Cryo-Wolf says:
"Ok, I looked up all of the nine-tailed beasts, and none of them are wolves, or have the ice element...so.....I was wondering if I could make it one of the rare *other* tailed beasts (lesser than the nine) or, like, make it so that 11 through 18 are angels as opposed to demons."
They got gaara sand one tail raccon they have the three tailed shark kisame has it their was a girl with like a four tailed dog then their was a two tailed turtle also orochomaru had the 8 tailed snake thats all thats been shown up to date we all know about narutos fox being over 1000 years old and all so i didn't have to name him."

8 tailed snake and the 3 tailed shark thing? Are you sure you're not confusing it with myth? Because I know that there is a legendary 8 tailed snake in Japanese myth....but I'm pretty sure Orochi doesn't have it and if he did, Itachi would have killed him and taken it before he banned him from the Akatsuki, because that's what they're after.

I'm pretty sure you meant that Kisame killed it, because if he had it on him then somebody would have killed him any way lol

Sorry, Naruto OCD talking here....

#42 Posted by Jax (7542 posts) - - Show Bio

@Sling: Most of the weight is muscle and blood seemed like the perfect kekkai genkai.

@Cryo: Yours is good to I liked the beast molding. What do you think of mine?

#43 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

It's good. There's like overbord on the blood thing, but, then again, I went overload on the wolf thing, so we're square. You should add that that because of their kekkai genkai, the Kiyoshi family has a high amount of marrow in their bones, that way they can make blood easier. Just a suggestion, I learned that recently in science so...so....

OMG THERE'S A RAINBOW OUTSIDE MY HOUSE!

#44 Posted by Jax (7542 posts) - - Show Bio

Cryo-Wolf says:

"It's good. There's like overbord on the blood thing, but, then again, I went overload on the wolf thing, so we're square. You should add that that because of their kekkai genkai, the Kiyoshi family has a high amount of marrow in their bones, that way they can make blood easier. Just a suggestion, I learned that recently in science so...so.... OMG THERE'S A RAINBOW OUTSIDE MY HOUSE!"

Thanks for the suggestion and I want the pot of gold.

#45 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

Jax says:

"I want the pot of gold."

Mine.

#46 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

Yeah the pack has a distinct difference with their team mentality. And the Howl is slightly different in operation but the end result is very similar. The Lion's roar is the Naruto version of Black Bolt's voice only not as powerful (as far as we know). The Lion's Roar used as the Lion's reflection is a genjutsu that manipulates the mind a specific way. Which is similar to the mesmerism of the Wolf's howl.Is all's I'm saying.

#47 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12662 posts) - - Show Bio

raises hand Shimoyake Karyuudo!

But, can we do it american style? As in, their called by their first name's and stuff, none of the backwards stuff? I don't mind it, but it's way easier the other way around.

#48 Posted by Jax (7542 posts) - - Show Bio

Why not make another Naruto battle RPG the other one noone posted in because it just died okay? I'll be Kiyoshi Morioka.

#49 Posted by Sling Shot (3560 posts) - - Show Bio

Raion Yoroi, is ready to mix it up whenever the dust kicks up.

#50 Posted by Resonate (15054 posts) - - Show Bio

Okay...I think I'll attempt now

Name: 憎悪愛 Keishi Koishii (Despise, Love)

Village hidden in the Clouds

Age:19

Status: Rogue ninja, currently on hiatus

Keishii was a member of the Hidden Cloud Villages elite ANBU squad. He was their main source for assassinations, as he was a master of the Thousand Birds Chidori technique and an excellent escape artist. He was nicknamed "The Flying Thunder" because the last thing that targets saw and heard before their death's was the blue light flash above their heads and the sound of birds chirping. He was revered by the nation, but was equally feared by them too, due to his second personality.

Unlike anyone else in the world with the disorder, he gained his problems through special means. At the age of seven, he was captured by Orochimaru and used in many terrible experiments, in which the Yin/Yang within his body was separated to an extreme. He would have never survived if it were not for his father summoning his own team of select Jonin and ANBU to save the children taken by Orochimaru. He was able to make it seem like a legitimate scheme, but every one knew that he just wanted his son back at all costs.

His chakra was either always negative or always positive, meaning his good days were great, and his bad days were..well, bad. He had to fight to get through the academy, and couldn't bare it for more than a few days at a time. However, the experiments did do him some good. He became extremely good at manipulating this dangerous chakra, as it would multiply and multiply every day.

At birth, his parents named him Amatsu Ichinan (heavenly boy), because they thought it was a miracle for him to have survived being born so prematurely. He was a very small child, and was picked on for years for not being big and strong like his father. But the insults stopped flying once he had his first bad day with his chakra. His doctor had advised his parents not to go to school, but they couldn't tell the difference. The boy that had made fun of him the day before was dead before the academy got out that day.

Years later he perfected all of his lightning jutsu that he could think of, and a good array of physical fighting skill, and he wasn't messed with by the other Chuunin. He felt no guilt from the day that he had killed Oki, the kid that had made fun of him for his size, at all. He also didn't feel in te slightest way had he overreacted. Anyone that got in his way would die, and no one got in his way after that. They had no proof, but everyone knew that Keishi had done it.

After being asked into the ANBU squad at the age of 17, he was sent on multiple assassination missions, and was revered a hero after killing an entire brigade of rogue ninja that had invaded the city by himself. Keishi was loved by all, until he dissapeared one day after that. No one know where or why, only that he declared he was going to slay the serpent. He changed his name from Amatsu Ichinan and continued on his way. Many thought he meant Orochimaru, but they were dead wrong. He meant the black serpent that lay in his heart.

To be continued...

Any way hope that was good just kind of slapped it down on the spot lol