#1 Edited by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

"Augh!" Matt Murdock suddenly woke up from a nightmare.

"Why do I feel pain" he thought "Who or what could be torturing me?"

Matt's shoulder blade suddenly felt like it suddenly shattered. However, nothing was actually happening.

"HAHAHA!" A laugh, a devilish one indeed. All Matt could here was the laugh.

"What are you?" Matt screamed.

"I am something you cannot escape" the voice seamed to roar "I AM NIGHTMARE!!!"

Matt's spine felt like it was on fire

"AAAUGH!" he screamed.

A pain he has never felt before, a pain that made his spine shatter... but nothing effected him. He was physically unharmed, but mentally tortured.

Suddenly, it stopped. It all stopped.

He got up, put on his suit. Opened the window and jumped out.

The Daredevil has returned!

MEANWHILE...

"This is bad" said Strange

"How bad?" asked the mysterious man.

"I dont know" replied Doctor Strange "But Nightmare has returned"

"I'll stop him" said the man "And, Strange, thank you... for everything"

"Your welcome" said Doctor Strange "Now defeat Nightmare"

The mysterious man stepped into the light, revealing his face as he got onto his flaming motorcycle

#2 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Bump

#3 Posted by AweSam (7360 posts) - - Show Bio

It was a bit confusing, but I like it. Also, try working on the narrative. It's not bad, it just seems a bit off.

Take this: "Matt's spine felt like a wildfire" Sounds good, but it's the wrong word. Also this part: "Matt's shoulder blade suddenly felt like it shattered." The narrator seems to know a bit too much about what's happening. Still, not bad. Make the next chapter longer.

#4 Posted by YourNeighborhoodComicGeek (19873 posts) - - Show Bio

Why is this a limited series? Will you delete it or something?

#5 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

@YourNeighborhoodComicGeek said:

Why is this a limited series? Will you delete it or something?

No, it will only have a few issues. I wont delete it.

#6 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

@AweSam said:

It was a bit confusing, but I like it. Also, try working on the narrative. It's not bad, it just seems a bit off.

Take this: "Matt's spine felt like a wildfire" Sounds good, but it's the wrong word. Also this part: "Matt's shoulder blade suddenly felt like it shattered." The narrator seems to know a bit too much about what's happening. Still, not bad. Make the next chapter longer.

Thanks.