#1 Posted by GR2Blackout (2932 posts) - - Show Bio

I Am The Night, Part 1: Bruce Wayne

Bruce Wayne sat on his couch. It was a sunny day for the former cop. Suddenly, Commissioner Gordon entered the room.

"Bruce" he said "Your parents... there... there..."

"What?" asked Bruce

"Dead" said Commissioner Gordon "I'm sorry, Bruce"

"Well, who killed them?"

"We dont know" said Gordon "Were still working on the case"

Bruce left the room.

He remembered his days as a police officer.

Him and his team...

Jim Gordon, Jason Todd, Dick Grayson, Harvey Dent....

and then theres him.

JASON TODD'S HOUSE...

Jason got home on his motorcycle.

He took off his red helmet, and saw Bruce.

"What are you doing back here?!" asked Jason" I thought you retired! You said it that night! You said--"

"No!" said Bruce "This is something different. My parents are dead."

"Oh, yeah, rich boy finally loses something" said Jason "Well, get used to it!"

"No, Jason!" said Bruce "I need your help to find out who did it!"

Jason put his red helmet back on, and got onto his motorcycle.

"Lets go" said Jason

DICK GRAYSON'S HOUSE....

Dick heard a knock on the door.

He opened the door and saw his two old friends standing there.

"Bruce?" he asked

"Yeah" said Jason "And me"

"Listen" said Bruce "We need help. You in?"

Dick just nodded.

HARVEY DENT'S HOUSE...

Bruce walked into the dark room.

"Harvey" he said

"Bruce?" asked Harvey "It's you? Get out!"

"No, Harvey" he said "I need help"

"I SAID GET OUT!" yelled Harvey

"God, Harvey!" yelled Bruce as he walked towards the door "This is why nobody likes you!"

"You sound like a 4th-grader!" yelled Harvey

#2 Posted by GR2Blackout (2932 posts) - - Show Bio

So, anybody like it? Any problems with it?

#3 Posted by andrewtheking (1004 posts) - - Show Bio

this is good

#4 Posted by TheCannon (20172 posts) - - Show Bio

This. Is. Awesome.

#5 Posted by GR2Blackout (2932 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon said:

Bump.

This

#6 Posted by TheCannon (20172 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

@TheCannon said:

Bump.

This

I never said bump.

#7 Posted by GR2Blackout (2932 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon said:

@GR2Blackout said:

@TheCannon said:

Bump.

This

I never said bump.

You've said bump before, therefore this statement is a lie.

#8 Posted by TheCannon (20172 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

@TheCannon said:

@GR2Blackout said:

@TheCannon said:

Bump.

This

I never said bump.

You've said bump before, therefore this statement is a lie.

I never said bump on this thread

#9 Posted by NlGHTCRAWLER (2894 posts) - - Show Bio

Bump :)

Good job, I like it. Btw, is that Batman Earth 2 in the pict?

#10 Posted by GR2Blackout (2932 posts) - - Show Bio

@NlGHTCRAWLER said:

Bump :)

Good job, I like it. Btw, is that Batman Earth 2 in the pict?

No. Maybe.

#11 Posted by thespideyguy (2766 posts) - - Show Bio

I love it.

#12 Posted by GR2Blackout (2932 posts) - - Show Bio

@thespideyguy said:

I love it.

Thanks

#13 Posted by GR2Blackout (2932 posts) - - Show Bio
#14 Posted by The_Tolman (14 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm assuming you mean "Your parents... they're... they're..."

Otherwise, I liked it.

@GR2Blackout said:I Am The Night, Part 1: Bruce Wayne

"Bruce" he said "Your parents... there... there..."