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I like it man :D

I'll make my post tomorrow, hopefully, I g2g

hmmm.... wonder if i can guess what influenced this....

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"hmmm.... wonder if i can guess what influenced this....

M
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awesome post Lexi Ill wait for Azteks first before continuing

...wow

thank you guys!!  really!  it's my first go at this so,  I'm nervous!

nice fan-fic forum hey andy

wow that was awesome, if you dont mind my opinion. 

I applaud you both.

hey kiara so tell me why did you turn blue if you don't mind me asking? 

(sorry for the delay...I won't be on later on tonight but at least I did get this in before I went, I know it 'aint that great but it is something, so that should count at least :P)

Jack walked down the hallway of his sister's house, he was a man of routine, during the week he was the happiest man in the world, living with his amazing sister and her adorable daughter, he had enough money to live on his own, but he preferred to be with his sister, to watch over her. However, on the weekends he was a very different man, he was never at home on the weekends, he would spend his time using his card counting skills to earn money to pay for his sister's bills, but that was just for those few hours that he was sober, the rest of his weekend was spent either in the gutter or in the emergency room, he was a man of many addictions. He didn't really need the substance abuse, he just felt like he might as well wallow in his misery, one of his flaws that stuck with him from his youth.

As he walked down the hall, he heard laughter coming his way and moved to the side of the hallway as a little girl ran by him to her bedroom, she was most likely going to get her pillow because it was movie night, her excitement, her innocence, it always brought a smile to his face. Jack then emerged from the hall, heading for the door, he turned to see his sister sitting on the couch, and watched as her daughter ran back into the room and leaped onto the couch beside her mother, clutching her pillow and brimming with excitement. He smiled, it was a beautiful thing to see, too bad he wasn't going to see anything like that on the streets of Vegas, with one last look at the two his smile faded as he thought of what he was about to do and he spoke, "Have a good night you two, I hope you enjoy the movie." But they did not hear him, they were bonding, his sister never asked where he went for the weekends, but he would have lied to her anyways, he couldn't let her know what he did.

Stepping out onto the streets of Vegas, Jack began his walk to the liquor store, to get intoxicated, to forget all the pain in his life, to dwell on his regrets and wish there was some way he could undo past mistakes...

oh and btw, they share a name but the guy in the fan-fic isn't my character

The weeks that followed my sons death were fadded and I remember very little except THAT day. The funeral ran through my head for the following weeks the amount of people who came was amazing but I kept looking into the casket for Jacob waiting for him to jump up screaming "GotYa" like he always did when he played or scared me. But nothing happened his tiny body lied in the casket and her body on the opposite side of him. Her one wish even though she wasnt a great mother was to be buried next to him, she also wanted to be buried next to her fallen family but that wasn't going to happen. They were buried in the front lot of the local cemetary and I even paid to reserve the lot next to my son a hefty price but my family helped with that. Many of my days sober were spent sitting at his grave crying and often coughing until blood came up. I would spend the entire day at his grave waiting for something or someone, and the care taker would usually wake me at night before he left telling me to go home in a polite way.

But the night that I will always remember was 5 weeks after his death, I had fallen asleep in hopes the pills would do their work and kill me in my sleep. Empty bottle of Vicoden sits on the night table My dreams usually involved a voice over but tonight it was different. A booming voice spoke through Jacob in the dream "What would you do If you could make this all go away, Make all the sadness go and once again be happy. What would you change, would you change his name, if you had him and if you had him with her? What would you do?" I stutter for a moment and the voice again speaks "What is your answer?" I finally bring the words out "Yes Take it all back take it all back all the pain and the suffering I want to be happy with my son again."  Jacob smiles and with the booming voice "As you wish, a small portion of my power has been endowed to you. Now begone and be happy, when you awake. You will be in another life."

The dream fades and i shrug it off as another drug induced dream. And the night goes on and I awake, But when i Do it is not the world I left when I closed my eyes the night before. My arm grows heavy as my eyes open slowly something pulling on it, I leap from the bed and push myself up against the wall. A woman turns quickly asking me "Hun? Whats the matter." My eyes widen as I notice two things. One the woman in my bed is not Jeena and two....I'm alive.

awesome Lexi

thanks so much, DC!

no prob cant wait to see Azteks

this is really good stuff..

"no prob cant wait to see Azteks
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Hey Jack....Shoot me a PM.

Jack entered the liquor store with not a single thought on his mind besides the thought of drinking all of his problems away. Jack's stay in the store was a short one, he found his alcoholic beverage of choice, for he had made this journey many a time and it was not long before he stood at the counter, forking over the money that would buy his happiness. Jack was a little surprised that he did not recognize the man behind the counter, being one of the most frequent customers at the place, but did not question him, he was not here to make small talk. However, the man seemed to want to talk to him and began asking Jack questions, peculiar questions, "What would you do if you could make this all go away, make all the sadness go and once again be happy. What would you change, would you have said something different, wou you have said it sooner? What would you do?"

Jack heard the words clearly in his head, the words  he had been thinking to himself now spoken aloud, but he was not afraid of this man, he did not question him of how he knew what Jack was thinking, he felt a calmness instead and he replied to the strange man, "I do not know what I would do, but trying things over again couldn't hurt, too bad such things only happen in stories." He joked but did not laugh, he did not think it was funny, he craved the ability to be able to change his past, but he had come to accept that it could never be changed. However, the man at the counter whispered something that Jack did not hear, something that if he had heard, and understood, may have made things go quite differently for the man said, "This is a story, not my story...but I am its writer." and with that he disappeared.

Entering a dark alley, it did not take long before Jack had finished off all his drinks and lay wasted on the ground, his pains only increased by the alcohol, however, he wouldn't remember any of this so what did it matter? He simply lay there, unmoving, waiting for the alcohol to drag him into unconciousness, and it did, in fact it put him in a coma...in a coma where a voice once again spoke to him, "So do you wish to try and undo past mistakes?" And in his moment of weakness Jack answered, "Yes..."

Her body as she stands up out of bed glistens in the morning light, her eyes widen as she comes closer to me. I push myself up against the wall as if trying to escape but she cups my face and kisses me "Just another nightmare babe, Was he in trouble again?" She smiles as she asks the question bringing me back to bed and we both lay in bed. Her body warm and close to mine I turn to her pulling her face towards mine and I kiss her again Kari? These are Kari's lips but she looks so different. She chuckles as I stop moving my lips and lay their like a dead corpse trying to kiss. She pulls away and looks at me "What is going wrong with you huh?" she says with a smile "We need to wake you up?" she says as she reaches between my legs. I almost jump out of my skin as she took me off guard, I smile and shake my head 'No love, just a very vivid dream. So was Jacob any problems in the middle of the night?" this startles her completely she looks at me and asks "Who's Jacob?" My eyes widen and almost bulge from my head.

I leap from bed running out of the bedroom and running throughout the house looking for my son screaming his name. "Jacob!! this isnt funny." She comes to the doorway still naked and watching me act like a psycho I run back and forth from room to room looking for him. Finally I fall to my knees and the tears stream down my face. She finally comes over to me then holds me close her bosum cradling my head. She shhs me telling me "Duncan's sons name is Jacob....he is a character in your dreams. We have no children, We cant and you know this Javier. I am so sorry." she begins to sob again. My sobbing begins to subside and I look at her, she is my worlds version of my first love. I stand up and shake it all off telling her "I need to go to the pub baby girl, Need to get some thinking in." She smiles as we go back into the bed room "Not until we have our fun." pulling me hard and the door slams behind us.

Two hours and a very tired body later I come to the pub "Now i need to figure out why i ever left my worlds version." i say to myself with a chuckle. The demon or what ever it was last night did this, almost feels like he just moved my mind into the mind of Javier. My brain feels like its been through a blender I have the memories of this guy and my own courcing through my brain. A sudden headache takes over my body and blood begins to trickle down my nose, I wipe it away not wanting to worry right now as I think.

im in love with this story i only finished the first post but ive got some tears from it so  i like this story alot

"im in love with this story i only finished the first post but ive got some tears from it so  i like this story alot"

lol thats because im number 1 in everything EVER! lol

"lol thats because im number 1 in everything EVER! lol"

except for trivial things like writing lol and bowling hot dog eating

"except for trivial things like writing lol and bowling hot dog eating"

T_T  no way.  i dont like for people to read what i write, im writing something right now and ive been posting it in a free for all rpg where ur allowed to write about what u want.  and im writing a bio kinda like a fan-fic but its posted on another account.   and aztek kinda insulted it so its not to be shown to know one

oh well i wont insult or criticize less u ask for criticism

uhhhhh maybe one day

sweet

god im bored

i have to finish and revise the story first so idk when


if ur bored *hint hint* then u could post in sinner^^

"i have to finish and revise the story first so idk when


if ur bored *hint hint* then u could post in sinner^^"

maybe finishing the entire thing tonight and continue with the others once Sinners done

cool^^

"maybe finishing the entire thing tonight and continue with the others once Sinners done
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"Darkchild said:

"maybe finishing the entire thing tonight and continue with the others once Sinners done
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thats a lot to finish up man
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RUNS IN thread

dont kill urself trying to write all those :P

"T_T  no way.  i dont like for people to read what i write, im writing something right now and ive been posting it in a free for all rpg where ur allowed to write about what u want.  and im writing a bio kinda like a fan-fic but its posted on another account.   and aztek kinda insulted it so its not to be shown to know one"

alrighty i read all the posts and i must say im in love with this story keep up the good work lexi,dc and jack ^^

A story written in triplicate...nice idea.