Toxin/Malice: Wrath #1 - (Script)

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PREVIOUSLY: Toxin/Malice: Wrath Prologue - (Script)

"Revelations" - Rated T+

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Page 1

1.1
Toxin and Malice swinging through the air.

CAPTION: PATRICK: So far, today’s been good.
CAPTION: GINA: We need more good days.

1.2
Malice looking down.

MALICE: P-PAT!!!

1.3
The Riot-Wraith landing in front of a bank.

CAPTION: PATRICK: That-
CAPTION: GINA: THAT’S IMPOSSIBLE! That’s one of those MACHINES!

1.4
The Riot-Wraith smashing its fist into the front of the bank.

SFX: BRKKSH
CAPTION: GINA: From HIM!!!

Page 2

2.1
Toxin and Malice falling down toward the Riot-Wraith, about to attack.

MALICE: IT’S IMPOSSIBLE!

2.2
Malice landing across from it, Toxin landing next to her.

MALICE: We WATCHED you ALL get destroyed!
TOXIN: We WON that day!

2.3
The Riot-Wraith turning to face them.

RIOT-WRAITH: Civilian casualties permitted.
CAPTION: IRON WRAITH
SUB-CAPTION: “RIOT” MODEL 3847

2.4
The Riot-Wraith running at Malice, about to give her a right hook.

Toxin is looking over at her.

Page 3

3.1
Malice grabbing the Riot-Wraith’s arm with both hands.

MALICE: YOU

3.2
Malice tossing the Riot-Wraith like a ragdoll to the left of her.

MALICE: MADE BY HIM!!!

3.3
The Riot-Wraith smashing through a couple parked cars.

SFX: BRROKKSHH

Page 4

4.1
Malice’s right arm is forming a blade.

SFX: SHHNK
MALICE: Made by that MONSTER!!!

4.2
Toxin in a running jump over Malice, his hands joined in a fist.

Toxin is more bulky than before, steaming mad.

4.3
Toxin violently smashing his fists into the head of the Riot-Wraith.

TOXIN: HRAARRRR!!!
SFX: BRKKSHH

Page 5

5.1
Toxin looking over at Malice.

Toxin’s form is slimming down to normal as he calms.

MALICE: Good work.
TOXIN: He… we fought him off and…

5.2
Toxin glaring at the Riot-Wraith.

TOXIN: And he keeps fighting back.
TOXIN: Iron-Wrath keeps haunting us.

5.3
Malice looking at her arm, still a blade.

MALICE: Let’s find out who owns this thing… and if there’s any more…

5.4
Toxin looking over at Malice.

TOXIN: We’ll destroy them.

Page 6

6.1
Toxin climbing a wall.

CAPTION: PATRICK: And the search began.

6.2
Malice trashing a nightclub with maggia associates present.

CAPTION: GINA: Tearing apart every dive.

6.3
Toxin talking to a homeless man, peeking out from a makeshift shelter in an alley with a shocked look.

CAPTION: PATRICK: Any place we could think of where this information could come from, anyone who could have seen anything.

6.4
Malice holding a thug against a wall, her finger’s sharp tip an inch from his eye.

CAPTION: GINA: And anyone who could have been involved.

6.5
Pat standing in his police uniform in the station, walking away from other cops.

COP 1: Did you hear about the Hobgoblin?
COP 2: The one that works for Fisk? Yeah. Hate this damn city sometimes.
CAPTION: PATRICK: Even trying old friends didn’t give any results.

Page 7

7.1
Toxin and Malice standing in front of a garage-like door.

MALICE: Except for that rumor. That HE lives here.
TOXIN: He doesn’t live anywhere.

7.2
Toxin lifting the door open, Malice peeking down.

TOXIN: He just moves from dive to dive.

7.3
Malice stepping back, looking surprised.

TOXIN: Personally, not a fan of him.

Page 8

8.1 Splash Page
Toxin and Malice looking into one of The Punisher’s armories, with Punisher sitting in a folding chair, looking over.

TOXIN: But…
TOXIN: We need your help, Castle.

Page 9

9.1
Punisher’s face.

PUNISHER: Get out.

9.2
Toxin’s glare.

TOXIN: Hear us out.

9.3
Punisher reaching for a rifle on a table.

PUNISHER: Ten seconds. Only because I’ve had a long day.

9.4
Toxin trying to be civil and talk, Malice at his side, while Punisher waits.

TOXIN: You remember the day the machines came all at once and attacked the city, out from the ocean.
PUNISHER: Yup. That was a long day too.
TOXIN: They had symbiotes attached to them.
PUNISHER: And I had a flamethrower.
PUNISHER: Point, now.

9.5
Punisher looking down at the rifle.

TOXIN: Someone’s got the mechanized version, without the symbiote part. They’ve been used sparingly, clearly. Since we haven’t seen them till now. But someone has them.
TOXIN: Any guesses on who would want them?
TOXIN: We’re afraid they might try that day’s attack again.
PUNISHER: …

Page 10

10.1
Punisher.

PUNISHER: Bit back, I found an underground factory. Making big time weapons.
PUNISHER: I tore it down, took out the leader. But he’s got a friend.

10.2
Punisher looking over at the two.

PUNISHER: Underboss might be the one you’re looking for. Been looking for him myself. Hard guy to find.

10.3
Punisher putting the rifle down fully.

PUNISHER: You find info on Underboss, you might find what you’re looking for.
PUNISHER: You find him, you leave him to me.

10.4
Toxin nodding.

TOXIN: Thanks.
TOXIN: We’ll take down the machines… and give you any intel on him.

10.5
Punisher.

PUNISHER: Appreciated.
PUNISHER: Now get the hell out.

Page 11

11.1
Toxin and Malice swinging away from the scene.

MALICE: Friendly guy.
TOXIN: One in a million, babe.

11.2
Toxin and Malice scaling a wall together.

They are far away from Punisher’s location.

TOXIN: But he gave us a good lead.

11.3
Toxin and Malice still on the wall.

MALICE: Now we just need to find out where this … Underboss guy is.

Page 12

12.1
Toxin looking at the wall in front of him. There’s a tiny, smiling pumpkin bomb, glowing.

TOXIN: GIN-

12.2
Toxin and Malice thrown off the wall by a vicious explosion. Their symbiotes are freaking out appropriately.

SFX: BOOM

12.3
Toxin slamming into the ground.

SFX: WHUD
TOXIN: GRGHH

12.4
Toxin looking over at Malice, who’s landed next to him.

TOXIN: You… okay…?

12.5
Malice’s hand grabbing Toxin’s.

MALICE: Grghh… yeah.

Page 13

13.1
Toxin looking up, Malice getting up as well.

TOXIN: What the hell could have done th-

13.2
A razor-bat impaling Toxin in the face.

SFX: SHK
OFF PANEL VOICE: POP goes the weasel!
MALICE: PAT!!!

13.3
Toxin’s face. The features of a face are gone, it’s blank.

13.4
The face literally bursts into tendril and tosses the razor-bat aside.

TOXIN: Hobgoblin…

Page 14

14.1 Splash Page

THE HOBGOBLIN (Phil Urich), hovering above, razor bats in hand.

HOBGOBLIN: The one and only!
CAPTION: PATRICK: Gina, it’s okay, I’ll be fine. We can take knives, just don’t--

Page 15

15.1
Malice jumping up at Hobgoblin.

CAPTION: GINA: LIKE HELL! He tried to STAB YOU IN THE FACE!!!
MALICE: HSSS!
HOBGOBLIN: AHHH--

15.2
Hobgoblin literally backhanding Malice down.

HOBGOBLIN: SHADDUP!
SFX: SMAK
CAPTION: PATRICK: GINA!

15.3
Toxin looking over at Malice, who lands in an awkward crouching stance.

Toxin has grown a symbiotic mouth, and doesn’t look happy.

TOXIN: HONEY! Are you--
MALICE: FINE, FINE.

15.4
Hobgoblin’s face.

HOBGOBLIN: Look, you freaks, I’m here to HELP!
HOBGOBLIN: So stop fighting back! You’re making it hard to resist a giggle-fit—HEH—ha… a sonic giggle fit, I mean. The kind that turns you types into sludge.
HOBGOBLIN: Morethanusual. HA!

15.5
Hobgoblin’s mouth covered with webbing.

HOBGOBLIN: Mmf.

Page 16

16.1
Hobby pulling off the webbing.

HOBGOBLIN: Ahh… thanks. I needed that.

16.2
Toxin is glaring up.

TOXIN: What do you WANT, you FREAK!?
TOXIN: ANSWER, before we rip off your head and--

16.3
Hobgoblin interrupting, with a smirk.

HOBGOBLIN: Underboss.

Page 17

17.1
Toxin and Malice look stunned.

17.2
Toxin looking over at Malice.

CAPTION: PATRICK: … he wants to help us fight Underboss.
CAPTION: GINA: Why would he want to do that?

17.3
Hobgoblin’s grin.

CAPTION: PATRICK: Probably a gang war. The new Hobgoblin works for Fisk, I overheard it at the station.
CAPTION: GINA: So, we’re on HIS side?
HOBGOBLIN: Listen, kiddos.

17.4
Hobgoblin.

HOBGOBLIN: I woulda told ol’ Frank, except he kinda hates me since I beat him in a fight that one time.
HOBGOBLIN: I’ve been a double agent over at Underboss’s place.
HOBGOBLIN: The miracle of hologram technology and such nonsense.

17.5
Toxin and Malice looking up.

HOBGOBLIN: Point is…
HOBGOBLIN: I know where Underboss works.
HOBGOBLIN: That new company. Management Control Inc.
TOXIN: … Th… thanks.

Page 18

18.1
Hobgoblin turning around.

HOBGOBLIN: S’alright.

18.2
Close up of Hobgoblin looking back.

HOBGOBLIN: Oh, and I’d suggest finding cover soon. You’ve got a big friend who seems to want to play.

18.3
Hobgoblin flying backwards, waving at a spot above and behind Toxin and Malice.

HOBGOBLIN: DON’T MIND MEEEEE, just a happy little Hobby on his way back to his Kingpin!
HOBGOBLIN: HAVE FUUUNNNN!!!!

18.4
Toxin and Malice looking up.

A large figure is watching them.

TOXIN: Gina--
MALICE: N-no. Is that-
TOXIN: No, he’s dead, just--

Page 19

19.1 Splash Page

Toxin and Malice are both thrown back by the force of the figure landing.

The figure is someone wearing a suit of armor that seems to be a combination of all the Iron Wraith designs.

It has:
-wrist-blades that can retract backward onto the forearm (Phage),
-mounted turrets on the shoulders, and underarm (Agony),
-metal fists (Riot),
-and on the back of the suit, there are two large cylinders sticking out of two formed holes. Once the suit pulls them out, they would be revealed to be electrified whips (Lasher).

Page 20

20.1 Splash Page

The suited figure in a stance that shows it’s ready for combat.

X-PHAGE: Patrick Mulligan. Gina Mulligan.
X-PHAGE: You’ve been selected for termination, on behalf of the human race.
X-PHAGE: You can call me X-Phage.

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NEXT TIME: Genocide - Toxin/Malice: Wrath #2 - (Script)

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Nice work!

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#2  Edited By _Marco_Smith_

Hobgoblin, keeping it real!

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#3  Edited By The Impersonator

I just got intoxicated by this chapter. (It must be the beer which I drank. =P) Nice!

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#4  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53 said:

Nice work!

Thanks!

@_Marco_Smith_ said:

Hobgoblin, keeping it real!

I love writing him. He's such a sicko, but he's so fun. I guess he's like an RL troll.

I assume, as usual, you loved the rest? =P X-Phage do it for ya?

@The Impersonator said:

I just got intoxicated by this chapter. (It must be the beer which I drank. =P) Nice!

PFFT. Gettin' drunk and reading my stories. Nice. =P

Thanks!

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#5  Edited By The Impersonator

@InnerVenom123: You're welcome!

I didn't drink actually. It was just a joke. =P

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#6  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: I know. =P

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#7  Edited By The Impersonator

@InnerVenom123: Well, I do actually drink beer. But not all the time though. =P

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#8  Edited By Project_Worm

Nice job man. I like how you write Hobs especially. 

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#9  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: Of course. =P

@Project_Worm said:

Nice job man. I like how you write Hobs especially.

Thank you! Hobby is a favorite of mine to write.

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Just re read it, and upon reading it again, it seems a little jumpy. Like it went from the Iron Wraith attacks to Punisher's hideout. I didn't understand how they got there. And then they suddenly go to Hobgoblin. Just a minor thing, it may just be me.

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#11  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53 said:

Just re read it, and upon reading it again, it seems a little jumpy. Like it went from the Iron Wraith attacks to Punisher's hideout. I didn't understand how they got there. And then they suddenly go to Hobgoblin. Just a minor thing, it may just be me.

It was a bit jumpy, which is what I intended. It's kinda like a mini-montage, you're not supposed to know every detail, but still get the general idea.

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#12  Edited By ReVamp

I like.

Seriously, this was pretty cool, looking forward for the rest.

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#13  Edited By InnerVenom123

@ReVamp said:

I like.

Seriously, this was pretty cool, looking forward for the rest.

Thanks!

You skipped over the prologue, though. =P

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#14  Edited By ReVamp

@InnerVenom123 said:

@ReVamp said:

I like.

Seriously, this was pretty cool, looking forward for the rest.

Thanks!

You skipped over the prologue, though. =P

Ah Dammit. That #1 was deceiving.

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#15  Edited By InnerVenom123

@ReVamp said:

@InnerVenom123 said:

@ReVamp said:

I like.

Seriously, this was pretty cool, looking forward for the rest.

Thanks!

You skipped over the prologue, though. =P

Ah Dammit. That #1 was deceiving.

=P It's fine, the giant pretty picture clearly distracts from the "PREVIOUSLY".

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#16  Edited By ReVamp

@InnerVenom123: Well, to be fair I knew it was there because I came from #2 but I guess I just wasn't looking. Haha.

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#17  Edited By InnerVenom123

@ReVamp: S'alright. But give it a read, please. =P

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#18  Edited By KisserNe

BAD ASS! Woo!

Loved it, I am pretty stoked about this segment of your Symbiotes. I am heading on down to the next one.

You really do have a knack for writing villains that aren't completely villains, don't ya? Lol :)

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#19  Edited By Deranged Midget

LOVE the cameo from Punisher and I never would've expected Hobgoblin to help Pat and Gina.

Seriously bro... Mind=blown.

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#20  Edited By FadeToBlackBolt

Great opening chapter, mate. Best thing you could have done for Malice is have her buddy-cop with Toxin.  
 
Also, and you should take this as a huge compliment, I really like your Hobgoblin. I usually hate Legacy characters (and hate goblins too), but I'm really digging the immature and insane angle of Phil. So kudos!