Toxin: Malice #3, The Finale! - (Script)

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PREVIOUSLY: Toxin: Malice #2 - (Script)

"Daddy" - Rated M

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Page 1

1.1 Splash Page

Anti-Venom fallen to his knees in front of Jenna’s remains.

CAPTION: TOXIN: N-not my mommy?

CAPTION: TOXIN: What do you mean?

Page 2

2.1

Anti-Venom looking at Jenna’s head.

CAPTION: GINA: This … isn’t me.

2.2

Anti-Venom is very eerily stroking Jenna’s hair.

CAPTION: GINA: I…

CAPTION: GINA: i …

CAPTION: TOXIN: Mommy?

CAPTION: GINA: N-not your…

CAPTION: GINA: mommy…

2.3

Anti-Venom looking over, slightly.

CAPTION: GINA: i am… mommy…

CAPTION: GINA: N-no…not…

CAPTION: TOXIN: Mommy, w-what’s going on?

Page 3

3.1 Splash Page

Toxin, fallen to her knees, her head in her hands.

CAPTION: GINA: n-not… mommy... yes…AM…NOT…

CAPTION: GINA: Y-YE-

CAPTION: GINA: O-ONE WAY--

CAPTION: GINA: C-ca-can’t…live with…myself…

Page 4

4.1

Toxin staring right at Anti-Venom.

TOXIN: SHE DESERVED TO DIE!

4.2

Anti-Venom. He’s taken aback.

4.3

Toxin glaring down.

TOXIN: FILTHY SCUMMY B*TCH!

4.4

Toxin’s eyes. They’re see-through. Gina’s crying.

CAPTION: GINA: h-have to… NO… y-yes…

Page 5

5.1

Anti-Venom’s tendrils from above are all wrapped around Toxin’s throat, holding her upright. Burning at her symbiote.

ANTI-VENOM: What…

ANTI-VENOM: Did you just say?

5.2

Toxin, her neck is sizzling.

TOXIN: Y-YOU CALL ME-MRS.MULLIGAN—AND I SAID…

TOXIN: DUMB… B*TCH…DESERVED IT…

5.3

Anti-Venom’s frothing at the mouth with pure, intense hatred.

ANTI-VENOM: GGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

CAPTION: TOXIN: MOMMY! MOMMY IT HURTS!

CAPTION: GINA: The only… way to… make things… right.

CAPTION: TOXIN: MOMMY WHY ARE YOU SAYING THINGS THAT MAKE HIM ANGRY???

CAPTION: GINA: Sorry… kid.

CAPTION: GINA: Patrick...i…love…him…he was right…

5.4

Anti-Venom punching Toxin across the jaw, and his tendrils are slithering back toward him, away from Toxin, giving her room to be sent flying.

ANTI-VENOM: RRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!

CAPTION: GINA: Only way… to set things right…

Page 6

6.1

Toxin flying through the air.

CAPTION: GINA: He said it… all the time…

CAPTION: TOXIN: IT HURTS!

6.2

Toxin smashing into a wall.

CAPTION: GINA: Said… you were… wrong.

6.3

Toxin falling from the wall.

CAPTION: GINA: you… addiction… wrong to have…

Page 7

7.1

Toxin starting to sit up on the ground, looking around.

TOXIN: Hit… like a dead girl…

TOXIN: LIKE HER!

7.2

Anti-Venom dropkicks Toxin in the face.

CAPTION: TOXIN: Why do you hate me, Mommy!?

7.3

Anti-Venom crouching next to Toxin, who’s flat on the ground again.

CAPTION: GINA: i love you… NO I… don’t…

CAPTION: GINA: i… baby Eddie dead… BECAUSE OF YOU…

CAPTION: TOXIN: You said… you said it wasn’t my fault…

7.4

Anti-Venom.

ANTI-VENOM: Remember what I told you, Mrs. Mulligan?

Page 8

8.1

Toxin looking at Anti-Venom.

CAPTION: GINA: I LIED.

CAPTION: GINA: HAVE TO—MAKE IT—COUNT

TOXIN: N-no…

8.2

Anti-Venom holding Toxin up by the throat.

ANTI-VENOM: I said you’d regret keeping this thing.

ANTI-VENOM: I said you picked your poison.

8.3

Toxin, her neck is sizzling from the touch of Anti-Venom.

ANTI-VENOM: Look at you now.

ANTI-VENOM: Your husband is dead, along with your baby.

ANTI-VENOM: You’re saying “I” with it.

ANTI-VENOM: Like that filth, Carnage.

8.4

Anti-Venom glaring.

ANTI-VENOM: Mrs. Mulligan, you’ve lost your mind.

Page 9

9.1

Anti-Venom’s pinching Toxin’s forehead.

CAPTION: TOXIN: AAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEE

TOXIN: Y-YES

9.2

Anti-Venom’s slowly starting to pull back, melting the symbiote visibly.

CAPTION: TOXIN: MOMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

TOXIN: yes… i…

9.3

Anti-Venom’s pulled off Toxin’s symbiotic face.

TOXIN: i…

TOXIN: I HAVE!

Page 10

10.1 Splash Page

Gina’s face revealed. She’s crying hysterically, begging.

GINA: YES!

GINA: I’VE LOST IT!

GINA: FOR THE LOVE OF GOD AND ALL THAT IS HOLY!

GINA: KILL ME!

GINA: I’VE DONE—HORRIBLE THINGS!

GINA: PLEASE GOD KILL ME KILL ME NOW!

CAPTION: TOXIN: MOMMY IT HURTS SO BAD!

GINA: STOP IT! STOP CRYING IN MY HEAD!

GINA: IT BURNS!!!!

Page 11

11.1

Anti-Venom placing his hand on Toxin’s stomach.

ANTI-VENOM: I told Patrick, when we met during that Supreme Jury business.

11.2

The white from Anti-Venom’s hand is spreading over Toxin’s stomach, burning as it spreads.

ANTI-VENOM: I told him that while he thought it was a child…

11.3

Gina looking down at her stomach, the white is slowly covering her chest now.

ANTI-VENOM: It’s just a monster.

11.4

White panel.

Page 12

12.1 Splash Page

Anti-Venom holding Gina by the throat. The Toxin symbiote is not visible, instead she’s covered in the purifying white of the Anti-Venom suit.

GINA: I…thank you…I’m sorry…

ANTI-VENOM: I understand. You wanted to provoke me, so I could cure you. But you didn’t have to.

ANTI-VENOM: But… I don’t want to kill you.

Page 13

13.1

Gina looking at Anti-Venom’s eyes.

GINA: W-why? Why can’t you just END it!?

13.2

Anti-Venom.

ANTI-VENOM: You’re… you were a wife and mother.

ANTI-VENOM: It isn’t right for me to do it.

13.3

Gina putting her hands on the sides of Anti-Venom’s face.

GINA: Please… i… I’m begging you...

13.4

Anti-Venom looks sad.

ANTI-VENOM: You were a family.

ANTI-VENOM: Now look at you.

13.5

Gina.

GINA: Please.

Page 14

14.1 Splash Page

Anti-Venom’s arm has sprouted a tendril that’s gone right through Gina’s forehead, and out the back of her head.

ANTI-VENOM: God forgive me.

Page 15

15.1

Anti-Venom laying Gina’s body gently on the ground, all the white slithering off of her and back onto him, leaving no trace of Toxin behind visibly. She’s finally cured.

15.2

Overhead of the entire area.

15.3

Jenna’s corpse.

Page 16

16.1

Anti-Venom standing over Jenna’s corpse.

16.2

Anti-Venom kneeling down.

16.3

Anti-Venom arranging her body parts.

16.4

Anti-Venom standing over Jenna’s body. He’s webbed her limbs back together as best he could.

Page 17

17.1

Anti-Venom turning.

SFX: BWWWWEEEEOOOO

17.2

The suit shapeshifting into a police uniform.

17.3

Eddie as a police officer, greeting two other cops.

Page 18

18.1

Eddie looking at a big SWAT car that follows, along with a full police escort behind it.

EDDIE: …

EDDIE: What’s that all about?

18.2

A smiling officer’s answer.

OFFICER: You didn’t hear?

OFFICER: We finally caught The Punisher.

18.3

Eddie’s nonchalant reaction.

EDDIE: This was all him?

OFFICER: Yeah. All the explosions.

OFFICER: Freak wanted to ring in the new year.

18.4

The back of the SWAT car.

OFFICER: With a bang, I guess.

Page 19

19.1

Eddie walking away.

EDDIE: Take care of the girl.

EDDIE: There’s a woman a few feet away, too.

19.2

Eddie looking down as he walks away.

EDDIE: Must have died in the crossfire.

19.3

Eddie alone in an alley.

CAPTION: ANTI-VENOM: Waste.

19.4

Anti-Venom wall crawling.

CAPTION: ANTI-VENOM: After all that.

19.5

The Scream symbiote slithering on the side of a building in an alley, not the same Anti-Venom was just in.

CAPTION: ANTI-VENOM: It was…

19.6

A tiny glob of the Toxin symbiote, slithering through the snow around the police.

CAPTION: ANTI-VENOM: A waste.

Page 20

20.1 Splash Page

Anti-Venom sitting on a rooftop.

CAPTION: ANTI-VENOM: All of it…

CAPTION: ANTI-VENOM: All of it meant…

CAPTION: ANTI-VENOM: Nothing.

THE END

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#1  Edited By _Marco_Smith_

Everyone's dead!

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@_Marco_Smith_ said:

Everyone's dead!

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@primepower53 said:

@_Marco_Smith_ said:

Everyone's dead!

You two are ignoring the fact that the symbiotes are still alive! =P

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#4  Edited By _Marco_Smith_

@InnerVenom123: They're dead inside!

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@_Marco_Smith_: Well that does it. I have to write a series about emo symbiotes.

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Awesome story, though I didn't like how everyone died :(

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@venomoushatred1001 said:

Awesome story, though I didn't like how everyone died :(

Thanks!

Scream and Toxin as symbiotes will return in Hybrid. =P

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#8  Edited By The Impersonator

great finale!