Thor Rectonned: Volume 1#2

This is just a plot summary I thought of before working out all the details. I would like feedback before I write out dialogue and fight scenes.

Thor teleports to the Dark Dimension because he is tracking a layflu bomb that pulsed then teleported to the dimension Thor now exists in. Thor follows the bomb to a lair inhabited by Dormanru's servant, Durok the Demolisher(bear with me). Durok had stolen some of dormannu's power, gaining great strength and flight, thor uses mjolnir to remove Durok's superpowers, and returns to L.A.(the bomb returns there). He teleports innocent civilians to the limbo of space, takes the bomb into space, lets it detonate and its radius spans 10 light years, then thor absorbs the blast, saving L.A.

Inform me if anything is confusing or grammatically incorrect.

@xxxddd: yea good

@Z3RO180 said:

@xxxddd: yea good

Thanks.

No one else wants to comment?

@xxxddd Plot sounds good.

@xxxddd: cool. go for it.

@The Poet said:

@xxxddd: cool. go for it.

Go for what?

@xxxddd: Well, I was thinking go and write it

@The Poet:

Will you lock this if I do just plot summaries and not details?

Well, Thor should also be capitalized, Demolisher should be as well since it's apart of his name, Mjolnir is a proper noun so that too, and Dormammu was spelled wrong both times. :]

@Z3RO180: @Xanni15: @The Poet: Go here.

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