The UNDERDOG'S Daily JOURNAL A Vinersaurs Fan-Fic group fan-fic

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This Is a BLOG set in the real world which is actually a fictionalized real world full of unworldly things which was actually in Oh screw I lost track of what this actually about... well anyways read it dudes... cuz I am the UNDERDOG a real existing figure in your WORLD! the REAL WORLD! mwuaha! I sound lame...

So Hi I am the Under_DOG! (with an underscore)

So you probably know me as the dude who summoned a genie messed things up and regretted it... Well right now I'm hunting him down.But for now I am currently on a plane stressing me out... MY PLANE-MATES HATE ME!!! We are going to go to EGYPT right now because of a mission I will be in... WE WILL DEFEAT ALIENS! My powers are Spewing Rainbows out my mouth by the way...

Oh right Sorry but I forgot you don't know how I actually got my powers... It goes a little something like this:

The Epic wish of a Geek named Neil Saga was not written by me. It was written by that Cyborg Unicorn that aided me during the battle...Well he actually was not a fictional character but was actually a creature that secretly watches humans and at one point at a time, gave us the ability to IMAGINE. YEP folks We now have the power of imagination because of Unicorns secretly watching us. Now, the Epic Wish of a Geek named Neil was written by THAT Unicorn that is why it was probably all patched up and has many grammatical errors because the UNICORN only learned English from the INTERNET. Pardon him for writing that by the ways but he really said he'd want to write it down so I recalled the story he wrote it down and because of his ENGLISH that Fan-fic series sucked. Oh well I wont care the story is pretty much like that. HEY! I was supposed to tell how I got my powers right? Yah right so it was after the BIG EVENT and the UNICORN, (named HOOF TRELEN by the way) gave me this operation, an operation that changed my life... He (the UNICORN Hoof Trelen) implanted a new internal organ which would be science-ey and It would give me a pain in the neck because I was in a special Ed class (It was probably why Hoof Trelen called me a retard during the first chapter of THAT fan-fic saga). That Internal Organ gave me the power to puke rainbows out my mouth that temporarily blinds people... I also showed sign of breaking the laws of physics and doing stuff whatever I want, I called it toon-forcing a talent I can never do with people having that same power only on a larger scale around me. He said I'll need powers to defend myself against the Genie because one Day... He'll come back... He'll take revenge... and So here I am a rainbow Puking guy...

VILLAINS are under estimating my power so now I made an Identity... I am the UNDERDOG!!! which is a thing you probabably know... ahahaha! I defeat EVIL because... well I actually have no reason...

Well I gotta sleep now got butt kicking to do tomorrow...

The UNDERDOG is currently in the Ancient Aliens Returned??? EVENT

that's for my first BLOG... BYE BYE!

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you guys read it PLS?

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#2  Edited By The Poet  Moderator

interesting...

A lot of Fan fiction on this site are written with the same style, so it's nice to read something a little different...

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@The Poet: I'm always different... Anyways, any advice? plus I managed to make a very clever excuse for my poorly written Fan-fic saga so? what do you think of this one?

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#4  Edited By TheCannon

Good.

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@TheCannon: thanks CANNON! ^_^

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#6  Edited By The Poet  Moderator

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: not sure what advice I can give for this...

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@The Poet: then probably this one is a better one than my first fic's?

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Hi sir you got time to read this?

if you do please do read this one here...

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#9  Edited By batkevin74

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Mutual reading policy: I shall read and comment upon this, you shall read and comment upon this: http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/dc-mayhem-the-saga-of-ravan-chapter-1/709257/ Deal? Okay

It's a 4th person blog, is that it? I read one a while back from another vinesaur which was a bit confusing, a bit like this.

I like the idea that Unicorns are watching us (kinda creepy) but maybe I'll have to read more because this seems to be linked into a bigger universe with Neil...for a first time reader you can see why I'm a tad confused. It's like picking up the 5th issue of AvX as a starting point to comics. Now this bit @UnderDogs_OverBoard said:

I defend EVIL because... well I actually have no reason...

I thought you were a good guy who puked rainbows, so shouldn't you DEFEAT evil?

On the whole it's quirky, strange and I do want to know more about the aliens, but I feel this needs a bit more exposition, without me having to become a vinesaur to get the jokes etc. Keep writing

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Sure I'll read your fic's

I really don't know the POV i'm crazy

you read my previous story right? so you should have known the story behind this story ( though there's still a hole in the timestream between this and my previous one... a tiny period of time).

you caught my mistake thanks!

the Aliens thingy is an RPG but if you'd like it's what the next chapter gonna be

continue to support this one!

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#11  Edited By deadpoolrules

GREAT!!!

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@deadpoolrules: REALLY? thanks!

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#13  Edited By The_Roman

Different is right...

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@The_Roman: so whaddaya think about this?

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#15  Edited By Cozy_Da_Djed_Eye

This is great, little bro. If only the RP wasn't so slow lol.

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@CozyDaPrynce: THANKS BIG BRADDA!

^_^ the chapter two of this is up! hope you enjoy it and support it and follow it ^_^

Oh and hey COZY meet @The_Roman:

@The_Roman: meet my big bro @CozyDaPrynce:

HOPE WE RP again more often

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#17  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard:It blew my mind...Don't mind me while I put it back together.

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#18  Edited By batkevin74

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: I have read this... see @batkevin74 said:

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Mutual reading policy: I shall read and comment upon this, you shall read and comment upon this: http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/dc-mayhem-the-saga-of-ravan-chapter-1/709257/ Deal? Okay

It's a 4th person blog, is that it? I read one a while back from another vinesaur which was a bit confusing, a bit like this.

I like the idea that Unicorns are watching us (kinda creepy) but maybe I'll have to read more because this seems to be linked into a bigger universe with Neil...for a first time reader you can see why I'm a tad confused. It's like picking up the 5th issue of AvX as a starting point to comics. Now this bit @UnderDogs_OverBoard said:

I defend EVIL because... well I actually have no reason...

I thought you were a good guy who puked rainbows, so shouldn't you DEFEAT evil?

On the whole it's quirky, strange and I do want to know more about the aliens, but I feel this needs a bit more exposition, without me having to become a vinesaur to get the jokes etc. Keep writing

Is there a 2nd chapter you want me to look at?

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@The_Roman: YOU HATED IT?

:(

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#20  Edited By The_Roman

@CozyDaPrynce: So you're Cozy. The Vinersaurs talk about you...

You okay?

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#21  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Nah, I liked it.

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#24  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Genius, yeah.

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@The_Roman said:

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Genius, yeah.

I hate it when you lie :(

or being sarcastic...

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#26  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Lying? Sarcasm?

Meeeee? You do me a great disservice, sir. I respectfully request that you rescind your previous comment or else prepare yourself for one devil of a skirmish!

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#27  Edited By jobiwankenobi

Hmmm... interesting. I don't get the backstory, and their doesn't seem to be much of a story. It's still good, though.

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#28  Edited By wildvine

You are weird, no original, no wait, orwierdginal. that is you. keep it up.

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@The_Roman: OKI OKI I JOKE I JOKE I KID I KID!

@jobiwankenobi: Backstories=Boring? I guess I'll do It later

@wildvine: Thanks Your highness! ^_^

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#30  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Smirks and nods. Quite.

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@The_Roman said:

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Smirks and nods. Quite.

^_^

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#32  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: We need a Vinersaurs theme song...

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@The_Roman said:

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: We need a Vinersaurs theme song...

We actually do have a theme music...

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#34  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Why wasn't I informed?

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@The_Roman: because the IDEA WAS LEFT OUT WHEN THE GROUP GOT BIG

only me and the BOSS know what it is...

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#36  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: And yet you didn't inform me? I see where I stand in the organisation! Good day to you sir! Storms out, seething.

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@The_Roman said:

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: And yet you didn't inform me? I see where I stand in the organisation! Good day to you sir! Storms out, seething.

AHAHAHA well We never told anyone but really if you'd like to know i'd PM you

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#38  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Nay! Thou hath chosen thy association!

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#39  Edited By YoungJustice

I read it, forgot to comment.

Good job man.

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@The_Roman said:

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Nay! Thou hath chosen thy association!

Hey we never told anyone cuz me and the Boss thought no one would care! dont be a--- THIS COMMENT IS UNDER CONSTRUCTION.................................................

@YoungJustice: THANKS!

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#41  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: NAY! THOU SHALT BE JUDGED AS A TREASONOUS *CENSORED* *CENSORED*.

So *CENSORED* you, right in the *CENSORED*!

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@The_Roman said:

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: NAY! THOU SHALT BE JUDGED AS A TREASONOUS *CENSORED* *CENSORED*.

So *CENSORED* you, right in the *CENSORED*!

I'm just a kid so dont go on cursing me... OH GAWD...

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#43  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: You *CENSORED* telling me what to do? I will *CENSORED* you up so bad! I am so *CENSORED* serious! Right in your *CENSORED* face!

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@UnderDogs_OverBoard: You *CENSORED* telling me what to do? I will *CENSORED* you up so bad! I am so *CENSORED* serious! Right in your *CENSORED* face!

*runs away and cries like a weenie

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#45  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard:Nods knowingly, then drinks Monster because it's half 1 in the goddamn morning.

(And with that I bid thee good night)

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@The_Roman said:

@UnderDogs_OverBoard:Nods knowingly, then drinks Monster because it's half 1 in the goddamn morning.

(And with that I bid thee good night)

^_^ i thought you never sleep

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#47  Edited By Cozy_Da_Djed_Eye

@The_Roman said:

@CozyDaPrynce: So you're Cozy. The Vinersaurs talk about you...

You okay?

I think so.

Depends on what their/your definition of "okay" is, though ...

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: We will. The RP kinda died after we killed the first group of aliens ...

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@CozyDaPrynce said:

@The_Roman said:

@CozyDaPrynce: So you're Cozy. The Vinersaurs talk about you...

You okay?

I think so.

Depends on what their/your definition of "okay" is, though ...

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: We will. The RP kinda died after we killed the first group of aliens ...

NICE

IKR plus akira was kidnapped no one will lead the direction to somewhere...

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#49  Edited By The_Roman

@UnderDogs_OverBoard: Even gods need to sleep, boy.

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@The_Roman: K whatevs