The Flash movie part 1

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The Flash

Part 1

We start in the year

1963 in a black and white flashback sequence, in this sequence we see Barry

Allen’s numerous saves as the scarlet speedster from bank robberies to natural

disasters, maybe these can be portrayed like front page articles shooting out

from the screen however as the sequence comes to an end we get one or two more

come up ten years later about the disappearance of the Flash and the Government

concerned about his true agenda.We then get a dark screen and then the word ‘The Flash’ along

with the logo. (The

idea for this is to introduce Barry Allen’s version of the Flash to the

audience and gives a clear indication of how awesome this man really is).

We now are at a

university with an older Barry Allen seen teaching a classroom of students and

given a lecture on physics, as he continues his eyes wonder to his large

audience and notices an empty seat and by his face expression he knows exactly

who it is.

We then cut to our

first real scenes of Central City in a sort of downtown part of the city, cars

are packed on every road and all the drivers are suffering from road rage with

constant beeping and yelling, then the cause of the problem is seen, a

motorcycle carrying two passengers darting right and left between the traffic

going so fast that it would be safe to say was breaking any speed limit, We

then see that the person riding the motorcycle is a young woman, and on the

back part screaming part laughing is our hero to the movie Wally West, the

scene goes back and forth between Barry Allen giving his lecture and Wally on

the motorcycle.

(This part

should be very fun and very exciting to watch; maybe a song playing in the

background when the motorcycle is racing between the traffic and maybe even a

moment when the cycle takes off on a lowered ramp attached to a truck, a song like

‘Want You Bad’ from offspring just to give it that fun energy.)

As the song comes to an

end we see the motorcycle pull up outside the university and Wally jumping of

the back and running straight to the classroom, just as he is rushing through

the halls he notices a girl who walks by and quickly reaches into his pocket

and pulls out a small sheet of paper with his phone number telling the girl

that it’s for her, he then steals a quick kiss and continues and ‘that’s for

me’, laughing he runs again through the corridors leaving the girl bewildered

but smiling, he then bursts through the classroom door yelling ‘I’m not late’

only to be greeted by a room full of (something) clearly not only is he late

his also in the wrong classroom.

The next scene sees

Wally walking in the right classroom however the room is now empty with only

Barry left tidying his desk.

When Barry notices

Wally he stops what his doing and just stares at him with a look of slight

disappointment.

WW: ‘I know what you’re

gonna say uncle Barry but I swear this time I really did try getting here on

time’.

BA Then why weren’t you

Wally, this is the ninth time this semester, if you were any other student I

wouldn’t think twice about failing you.

WW:’ Come on uncle

Barry you and me both know that I’m way ahead of most of the other guys I’ve

had you drumming your quantum theories in my head since I was two, so what if I

don’t show for a few lessons, im only missing what I already know’.

BA:’ That’s not the

point Wally, as part of my class you have a responsibility to show up like

everyone else, by not showing up you show no respect for me and worse you give

others the message that you think your better than them’.

Wally quickly replies

jokingly ‘and theyed be sooo right’.

Barry goes to leave ‘No

Wally, you’ve got it in your head that you’re so ahead of everyone here, then

how come you were the last person through my doors’ and with that Barry leaves

Wally in the classroom alone.

We then get the first

appearance of our villain of the movie, as Wally sulks out of the room he

crosses paths with another of the universities professors Eobard Thawne but

most of the students name him Professor Zoom, nothing is said as they both seem

to be deep in thought.

The next scene is in

the late evening at the Allan residence with Barry Allan locked away in his

basement speaking into a recorder and turning page after page of notes and

formulas scattered all across the room.

‘It’s coming I know it,

all these years trying to regain what I lost finally I am now in the final stages to becoming the speedster once

more, the night of the accident so long ago I used to believe was pure chance,

but after these past years trying to replicate that same accident I have come

to believe that the odds of that occurrence far exceed even a billion to one,

what if it wasn’t chance what if it was destiny or fate or whatever you want to

call it, but what if I was chosen to be the Flash what if what happened that

day was always meant to happen, and because of that I know it’s my

responsibility to become him once again’.

In the dark basement

Barry continues to race through all his notes.

‘Every chemical, every

formula from that night I have managed to sneak into my lab at the university

and are ready to be set up exactly like

they were the night I first experienced the Speed force, all that remains is

for the abnormal lightning storm started it off, and after years of waiting my

readings show one to occur in three days, however the only problem is the storm

will last a matter of seconds and once it passes it may never happen again.

Everything must be perfect and precise’.

(Now this little scene

after is one of my favourites that I have come up with, very simple but a least

in my mind awesome, during this basement scene there’s a little background

music being played, it’s called the toy cupboard however after the first minute

the tune suddenly changes into a more exciting beat which is perfect for how

this scene ends.)

Barry then sees an old

newspaper with himself as the Flash on the front page that must have been

somehow mixed up in his notes he stops talking for a second and just stares at

the picture holding it up in admiration for who he once was.

‘I know the time is

coming now that the world will need him once again and if I fail who then could

possibly take up the role’.

As soon as the scene

ends we go in quick succession to Wally partying with his friends at one of

Central City’s biggest nightclubs, the music is loud and vibrant and its clear

Wally is having an amazing time dancing and drinking.

As the night goes on

Wally overhears his friends talking about missing class tomorrow and pulling an

all-nighter, but then Wally does something incredibly rare in his nature and

remembers what his uncle was telling him earlier about responsibility and

impression, he tells his friends his going home and at first thought he was

joking, but he was serious, tomorrow he was going to prove his uncle wrong.

The next day Wally

wakes to the sound of his alarm in his apartment and just before going back to

sleep jolts himself out of bed rushes through his clothes and jolts out the

door, even though he had woke up late he could still just get there on time if

only he could get a lift, but with the streets packed and the roads busy he

knew there was no way so without thinking he just starts running, as fast as he

can he knows at this point he would be late for class once again, he knows that

his uncle will give him another speech expressing his disappointment but he

didn’t care, he didn’t want to give up that was easy, he wanted to be there

today, for just one reason, because he knew Barry wanted him there.

When Wally finally

reaches the university he feels like he’s about to collapse his out of breath

and very sweaty, but also he’s full of pride he got here, by himself for the

right reasons all he had to do was walk in on his uncles class which must only

be about halfway through, I can still show I’ve made an effort he thinks to

himself.

As he walks towards the

corridors and approaches the classroom door he notices a sign informing

everyone that class is closed for the day.

‘Oh hell no uncle

Barry’ moans a knackered Wally and with that opens the door and walks into the

empty room, he looks around and by the looks of things no one has set foot in

there all day, suddenly he hears someone coming and see someone about to walk

through the door, Wally quickly ducks behind one of the stretched lab tables

wanting to remain hidden until he found out who it was.

In his head he thought

it could only be his uncle but as he peered over the table’s top he saw that it

wasn’t Barry at all but instead Professor Thawne, remaining hidden he watches

as Thawne searches behind Barry’s desk through his cupboards and pretty much

everywhere else constantly muttering to himself ‘where are they I know it’s you

Allan I know it and I know what you’re planning, now where have you hidden

them’.

When it’s clear that

whatever Thawne wants isn’t in the room he sneaks out leaving Wally to come out

from where he was hiding only to then hear ‘WALLY!!!!’

Wally screams at the

surprise and looks across to see Barry walking through one of the backroom

doors on the higher decks, ‘relax Wally it’s me’

‘I know’ reply’s Wally jokingly

‘that’s why I screamed’

A slight smile spreads

across Barry face

BA: ‘What are you doing

here Wally, class is closed today I must have left ten messages on your machine

last night telling you’.

WW: ‘Ah yeah well the

thing is I was out last night’.

BA: ‘Of course you

were’ he said with a with a sarcastic tone

WW: ‘But I went home

earlier then I had too because I wanted to be here on time for once’.

Barry smiles

BA: ‘Well like I said

im doing no classes today I have a lot to do and I can’t have any distractions’

suddenly the mood changes.

WW: ‘Yup sure I hear

you loud and clear uncle you don’t want any distractions and of course that’s

what I am right.

Barry realising what he

said quickly replies ‘Wally I didn’t mean …..’ but before he could say anything

else Wally was gone. As Barry walks towards his desk he notices that someone

has been moving it all around, knowing that it wasn’t his nephew he looked up

realising that someone else was onto what he was planning and that tonight he

would have to be extra careful.

As the night quickly

approached Barry is seen setting up his custom made lab inside his classroom

with certain chemicals and types of potions spread throughout the room and

constantly being mixed by the scientist, he then started going through all his

notes checking that everything was in the right place and at the right angle

etc. so that when the storm hits everything will be precise, Barry then sets up

four long vertical steel rods and places them at certain points in the room so

that when the storm hits the power would be conducted where he needs it to be.

With all the

preparation in place Barry then goes to his laptop and checks the storms

condition and to his shock it was mere minutes away, as Barry readies himself

to risk his life to once again possess the speed force he stands in the

epicentre of the room and closes his eyes ready for what is to come, there was

just one problem, he wasn’t alone.

His concentration was

interrupted by a familiar voice, It was Professor Thawne.

ET: ‘I knew it was you,

for years there was so many times where my thoughts were uncertain but of

course it you’.

Barry looks up at him

unsure of what he means.

BA: ‘ Thawne what are

you doing here ‘.

He laughs

ET: ’You know there

were many questions asked when the Flash disappeared so long ago’.

Thawne walked closer

towards him and Barry realised that this man knew about his past.

ET:’ Like where has he

gone, what’s happened to him, will he ever return, why did he lose all his

powers but after all those questions no one asked the one that mattered most,

the question I have been searching for ever since your disappearance and the

reason as to why I followed you here to work where you work’.

Thawne is standing

right in front of Barry now

ET: ‘Would you like me

to tell you what that question was’.

Barry just stares at

him and quickly glances at the laptop monitor to check when the storm is due to

hit.

Thawne whispers in his

ear ‘how did the Flash ever come to be’.

And with that Barry

realises what Thawne is talking about and what he’s been after, and goes to

swing for Thorne, the professor quickly dodges the attack and pushes Barry to

the ground and whilst laughing runs out the door with Barry getting up and

running after him in hot pursuit, whilst this is all going on however another

figure walks into the room completely unaware of what had just happened there,

its Wally.

‘Uncle Barry’ he

shouted.

‘I just wanted to say

sorry for earlier, and whatever you’ve got going on I want to help’.

Wally then notices the

set up lab in the room, the steel conductors, the floor covered in wires, every

table desk and shelf holding jars of bubbling chemicals.

‘Saying of which what

have you got going on’ Wally says in confusion.

(Now this is the moment

where everything changes, the scenes keep switching between Wally walking to

the epicentre where Barry was standing before, and then to Barry and Thawne

fighting throughout the university and finally the fight is taken outside in

the pouring night rain, I also think that the song/theme ‘the toy cupboard’

could be playing in the background once again to give it a more dramatic

effect, after all what’s about to happen next has have a big build up, with the

scenes keep switching Wally remains standing in the epicentre till suddenly a

crack of thunder can be heard and the vertical steel conductors suddenly start

powering lighting up the wires that surrounded him and causing all the jars of

chemicals to explode showering Wally with its contents.

Back outside Barry and

Thorne continue to fight and exchange comments of who deserves the power more,

until they both realise that the storm is already happening and that both of

them are about to miss out what they want forever, suddenly their fight seemed

now meaningless and both of them raced back towards the school trying to best

the other to be the first one there, little did they know that they were both

too late, as the storm raged on and grew stronger Wally began fearing for his

safety but for some reason knew that he shouldn’t move, he knew somehow no matter

how scary it was that he needed to stay right where he was.

Suddenly the full force

of the storm is unleashed and a huge lightning bolt hits Wally completely

blinding the room with light, as Barry runs through the classroom door he hears

the scream but as the light fades the room is empty, he then looks behind him

looking for Thawne but he was gone too properly escaped during the storm.

Barry looked on at his

classroom, his experiment had failed, the storm had come and gone, and by his

findings it would never return, never again would he become the Flash, but

there was something that he did not know, for the ‘accident’ that gave Barry

Allan his power so long ago was destiny and was always meant to happen, but now

destiny called for someone new to become the Scarlet Speedster and that destiny

belonged now to Wally.

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#2  Edited By batkevin74

Sorry dude but that is too hard to read! I tried and after the first 3 sentences I stopped. It's possibly pretty good but as it is in it's current format, unreadable.

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#3  Edited By Karlel01

yeh i know not sure what happened, i just copied and pasted it to the site and it came out all scrambled, will repost and sort it out mate, i hope you give it another try and do enjoy iy ive got 3 out of the 4 parts already written and posted on comicbookmovies.com and all the feedback i got was superb.