The Dreammaker

Mature Rating, and sorry for my bad english, its not my natural language, so i needed helpo from google jaja

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Somewhere in the city.

-Believe me, mind it's fascinating, the mind is powerful. Now you see nothing, where would you imagine you are? Can you notice any unusual odors, some sensation? If I say that I have a gun in my hand , you imagine that I'm pointing at the front of your head and in a second you gill get shot , and oh, nobody had told me what happens when you die, even, would you find out? NO? Well you can ask the other three already killed and who knows, maybe they are waiting for you and your opinion, dont you believe?

Cop : Do what pleases you, i am not afraid

- How do you beat something you can not stop, and you have the certainty that even if you have the courage to face it, you know you will fail? -

Cop : Fuck you, not getting anywhere with me, the police is on the way, bastard

-The cop, cops, they will fuck me like a whore, you know, how are you so sure of that they will go to the right place?, If you even remember how you got here,

Cop : Obviously, I've beaten hard to not remember anything, and in fact, I fail to see anything in my mind, fuck, listen, I start to overeat, what do you want from me? -

-You begin to despair, is normal, your mind is not capable of withstanding the moment that happens, but neglected, it will only be a little longer, and i dont want nothing from you, you're just part of the puzzle-

Cop : What are you talking about? -

-Oh no I can´t tell you, is secret, if you want to know you have to go with the 3 guys who are all around, they will tell you all, I told them after killing them so most likely they already know the secret of the puzzle -

Cop : Fuck you!, Fuck!, Fucking insane! ...

A cry, a knife through the stomach several times, and then shed blood throughout the body, silence.

---To be continued----- (hopefully)

@thespideyguy: thanks, a lot , your comment made me happy

@anoldman said:

-Believe me, mind it's fascinating, the mind is powerful. Now you see nothing, where would you imagine you are? Can you notice any unusual odors, some sensation? If I say that I have a gun in my hand , you imagine that I'm pointing at the front of your head and in a second you will get shot , and oh, nobody had told me what happens when you die, even, would you find out? NO? Well you can ask the other three already killed and who knows, maybe they are waiting for you and your opinion, don’t you believe?

Cop : Do what pleases you, I am not afraid

- How do you beat something you cannot stop, and you have the certainty that even if you have the courage to face it, you know you will fail? -

Cop : F#@% you! Not getting anywhere with me, the police is on the way, bastard

-The cop, cops, they will $%#! me like a whore, you know. How are you so sure of that they will go to the right place? If you even remember how you got here.

Cop : Obviously, I've beaten hard to not remember anything, and in fact, I fail to see anything in my mind, $#!+, listen, I start to overeat, what do you want from me? -

-You begin to despair, is normal, your mind is not capable of withstanding the moment that happens, but neglected, it will only be a little longer, and i dont want nothing from you, you're just part of the puzzle-

Cop : What are you talking about? -

-Oh no I can´t tell you, is secret, if you want to know you have to go with the 3 guys who are all around, they will tell you all, I told them after killing them so most likely they already know the secret of the puzzle -

Cop : F#@% you! F#@%! $#!+^ng insane!

A cry, a knife through the stomach several times, and then shed blood throughout the body, silence.

---To be continued----- (hopefully)

Okay, it's a little disjointed. I edited your piece to fix three minor spelling errors (they are in bold) and edited your swearing, coz you arn't allowed to swear it's one of the Comic Vine rules.

It's interesting but at the moment it doesn't make much sense, let's see another chapter or two. But this bit

@anoldman said:

Cop : F!@$ you, not getting anywhere with me, the police is on the way, bastard

If he is a cop, shouldn't he say backup is on the way?

@batkevin74: thanks for reading it, but can you explain me the part of swearing? i dont get it

@anoldman: http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/fan-fic-rules/695900/#31

Part of the fan-fic rules, no swearing! Check'em out. You can do #@!&% but using S, F etc will get a moderator telling you what I've told you, sometimes not as nicely.

@batkevin74: oh sorry, as I said its not my natural language, so I dont know the meaning of all words,

so , in this case, swearing is saying bad words?

@anoldman: Yeah swearing is bad words, words that you shouldn't yell at your mother in a church for example :)

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