The Dog and the Cat (Original Story)

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There was once a dog named Ben. Ben liked to play in the backyard with his master, Nick. One day, when he was waiting for Nick in the backyard, a beautiful cat named Laylla came and peeped through the fence.

The cat said MEOW!!!! Ben ran away to his master. Ben had never encountered such a feisty cat.

The next day when Ben was walking around the neighborhood, he saw Laylla shaking so badly. He asked, "What's wrong? Can I help you"? Lylla said "I'm soo hungry". Ben ran back to the house to grab some bacon and gave it to Lylla. When Lylla regained her strength, she apologized to Ben for being rude.

The End.

Now, what is the moral lesson of this story? XD

THE MORAL LESSON IS OBVIOUSLY, BE NICE TO EVERYONE DAMMIT!!!!!!

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Mm, mm, I see...

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@superstay: Just so you know, this isn't supposed to be serious. Just looking for a way to mess around the fan-fic board.

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So your name's Ben?

Nice hehe

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@rocketraccoonthingy: Nothing wrong with an original story, even a cutesy original story. It's kinda...short. Actually though, while I was reading it, the tone made me think of those Little Golden Books (except for the phrasing of the moral), with a picture per page and just a line or two on each page. With a little tweaking and some art, this could be made into one of those books. :)

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@cbishop said:

@rocketraccoonthingy: Nothing wrong with an original story, even a cutesy original story. It's kinda...short. Actually though, while I was reading it, the tone made me think of those Little Golden Books (except for the phrasing of the moral), with a picture per page and just a line or two on each page. With a little tweaking and some art, this could be made into one of those books. :)

Yeah. That's the feel I kinda wanted for this story. I was expecting some LOL comments over here but thankfully, I get decent comments. And I hope this gets famous enough to be published as a book. XD Now that's what you call daydreaming brotha!!

I might also be doing more serious stories soon. ^_^

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@rocketraccoonthingy: The moral shows you were being silly with it, but sometimes we write something with real potential when we're not trying as hard. I really do think tweaking could make this publishable.

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There was once a dog named Ben.

Ben liked to play in the backyard with his master, Nick.

One day, when he was waiting for Nick in the backyard, a beautiful cat named Laylla Lylia came and peeped through the fence. The cat said, MEOW!!!! "Meow!"

Ben ran away to his master. Ben had never encountered such a feisty cat.

The next day when Ben was walking around the neighborhood, he saw Laylla Lylia shaking so badly. He asked, "what's What's wrong? can Can I help you"?. you?"

Lylia said said, "i'm soo I'm so hungry". hungry."

Ben ran back to the house to grab some bacon and gave it to Lylla Lylia. When Lylla Lylia regained her strength, she apologized to Ben for being rude.

The End.

You're welcome, cugino piccolo mio.

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The moral is a rather important one that a lot of people don't listen to.

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@ms-lola: Btw, I wrote this straight from my head. I didn't bother checking if there were stuff to edit butt, I will fix it up cousin. I WILL!

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@ms-lola: What's wrong with Laylla anyway?

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This is the origins of CatDog, how their parents met

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There once lived a hamster named Bob. Bob was a racist. The End.

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There once lived a hamster hamed Bob. Bob was a racist. The End.

I like this one.

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Once upon a time, the end.

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nice work

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I was reminded of the FIGHT CLUB FOR KIDS video. Was expecting cuss words.... But it went wholesome. Good job.

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