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#1 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

(I don't own Superman or any of the DC universe nor Star Wars and their universe. I just smashed them together in this piece. Rated M. Please comment)

***20 years ago***

Krypton, Council Chambers

Jor-El stood, looking up at the giant hologram that filled most of the Kryptonian ruling council chamber “We have considered your proposal. But in keeping with Krypton’s neutrality, we decline your proposal to join in your empire”

The holographic image of Emperor Palpatine glared down at Jor-El and the other members of the council. The wizened, disfigured face slowly broke into an evil smile “That would be…unwise”

“Save your veiled threats!” snapped General Zod “We know of your rise to power Palp…”

“EMPEROR PALPATINE!” the chamber shook at the power of his voice “Is that clear GENERAL Zod”

Jor-El looked to the commander of Krypton’s armed forces and nodded, Zod reluctantly sat. “Krypton is a peaceful, neutral planet…”

“Is that why you have Generals?” scoffed the Emperor.

“We have the right to defend ourselves” stated Jor-El looking straight into his eyes.

“Very well. What of my other request?”

“Demand” murmured Zod, loud enough for Jor-El to turn and shoot him a stare.

“We will allow you space within Krypton’s sector, to build your satellite station, providing that unless there is a dire emergency, you shall not interact nor interfere with us”

Palpatine weighed Jor-El’s words and his own response carefully “In return, I expect the same courtesy from Krypton, Jor-El”

“Agreed”

“Before I leave you to your introverted, xenophobic ways” Palpatine looked down at Zod, who gripped the desk and bit his tongue. The Emperor turned back to Jor-El “Anakin Skywalker would like to thank the House of El for their…hospitality, during his time on Krypton as my ambassador”

“He is most welcome” said Jor-El as the hologram winked out.

“I can have ships headed to Coruscant within the hour!” yelled Zod “That pompous, self appointed wizard!”

“Calm yourself Zod”

“Don’t tell me what to do Jor-El!” Zod turned and glared at his personal and professional rival “You are a fool to believe that he understands anything but force!”

Coruscant, heart of the Galactic Empire

“They will pay the price for their lack of vision!!” scowled Palpatine turning to his apprentice, Darth Vader, who stood patiently beside the throne.

“Yes, my master” Darth Vader’s hollow breathing echoed through the throne room.

“What did you learn from your time with the Kryptonians?”

“A race of scientists, similar to Alderaan” Vader paused “Weak”

“Good” sneered Palpatine “Soon they will pay the price for offending the Dark Lord of the Sith!”

***19years ago***

Krypton, Council Chambers

“It’s a weapon!” stated General Zod “They are building a weapon, the size of a planet!” Zod dramatically threw surveillance discs at Jor-El’s feet “What do you have to say for yourself?”

Jor-El looked at the discs on the floor and sighed. He looked up at the assembled council and then over to General Zod “You have broken the truce Zod”

“I am protecting our planet from that maniac!” roared Zod “Have you not read the reports of what he has done to the Jedi? The massacre of Mustafar?

“We know all this Zod…but it does not change the fact you went against the council’s wishes and have brought the threat of war with the Empire, to an actual reality!”

“I’d prefer a war to this pandering!”

“Your words border on treason and sedition General Zod” warned Jor-El

General Zod stormed out of the chamber “You are all short sighted idiots!”

Coruscant

“What news…apprentice?” the words hissed from the Emperors lips

“The Jedi are all but destroyed” replied Darth Vader “There are still some that evade us, but not for long”

“Obi Wan Kenobi” growled Palpatine

“Yes my master. He is…”

“No longer a concern!” interrupted Palpatine “Ohran Keldor has informed me that the laser upon the Death Star is ready to be tested. I think the Kryptonians shall be the first to feel its power!”

Krypton, The House of El

Jor-El looked at his wife and their newborn son. He paced backwards and forwards, his mind elsewhere other than the joyous arrival of his heir.

“You’ll wear a trench in the floor” whispered Lara as she nursed her son.

“That’s highly unlikely” responded Jor-El “I hate to admit it, but Zod is correct, they’re building a weapon”

Lara looked at her husband “Do you think your son, who is just hours old, wants to hear his father complaining?” Jor-El smiled and headed over to his wife.

“Greeting’s Kal-El” and he placed a kiss on the forehead of the tiny infant

#2 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

Just a large on-masse shout out!

#3 Posted by joshmightbe (24876 posts) - - Show Bio

Great concept

#4 Posted by Rusty_Irons (627 posts) - - Show Bio

This is the best Star Wars idea since Death Troopers.

#5 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

@tmacximas said:

This is the best Star Wars idea since Death Troopers.

THIS TIMES TWELVE

#6 Posted by Rusty_Irons (627 posts) - - Show Bio

#7 Posted by TheCannon (18276 posts) - - Show Bio

@tmacximas said:

Thank you, but I already got it. I just refreshed the page to see if I could say "this" about anything. Thank you though.

Very good. I have never been a Star Wars fan, but very good.

#8 Posted by The Poet (8335 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74: oh this is fun! I look forward to reading the other 7 parts!

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#9 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@The Poet said:

@batkevin74: oh this is fun! I look forward to reading the other 7 parts!

#10 Posted by AweSam (7373 posts) - - Show Bio

Superman AND Star Wars? *Beep-beep-beep-beeeeeeeeeeeee...*

#11 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1649 posts) - - Show Bio

I concur with all of the above, this is a GREAT IDEA! I believe Krypton is going to suffer an Alderaan-esque fate...

#12 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@joshmightbe: Thanks (partially inspired by your Galactus eats Krypton idea)

@tmacximas: Thanks (not familiar with Death Troopers? Is there a link or site to look for this DT)

@GR2Blackout: Sweet! Thanks

@TheCannon: Not a Star Wars fan! Blasphemy!! Got rent 4-5-6 right now...I'll wait.....have you rented them yet.....how about now.......NOW?.....or now?

@The Poet: Shall get it very quick smart to keep you happy :)

@primepower53: Just a requote from you...I expected a tad better

@AweSam: Yup :)

@4donkeyjohnson: More than likely!

Now let's see just generally shouting out! :)

#13 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74: are you expecting all of CV to see this?

#14 Posted by TheCannon (18276 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

@TheCannon: Not a Star Wars fan! Blasphemy!! Got rent 4-5-6 right now...I'll wait.....have you rented them yet.....how about now.......NOW?.....or now?

I'm just not a Star Wars fan. Never understood why.

#15 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@primepower53: Yes, yes I am! Shameless self promotion and why not I say!? If I can get people to read my stuff, comment on it, maybe even talk about it then I'm happy

@TheCannon: I am guessing you are under 25, possibly under 20, which may account for your Star Wars-less existence. It's got everything, even 3 rubbish prequels! :)

#16 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

@primepower53: Yes, yes I am! Shameless self promotion and why not I say!? If I can get people to read my stuff, comment on it, maybe even talk about it then I'm happy

@TheCannon: I am guessing you are under 25, possibly under 20, which may account for your Star Wars-less existence. It's got everything, even 3 rubbish prequels! :)

Let me give Cannon some advice: NEVER. WATCH. THE. PREQUELS.

It will destroy your souuuuuul!

#17 Posted by darth_brendroid (1717 posts) - - Show Bio

This fits in almost seamlessly. I can see this sort of thing actually happening within the Star Wars series, haha. Awesome :D

#18 Posted by TheCannon (18276 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

@TheCannon: I am guessing you are under 25, possibly under 20, which may account for your Star Wars-less existence. It's got everything, even 3 rubbish prequels! :)

I've seen them (except the prequels), and just never really got into them. I'm not saying they were bad, I'm just saying I never really got into it.

@primepower53 said:

@batkevin74 said:

@primepower53: Yes, yes I am! Shameless self promotion and why not I say!? If I can get people to read my stuff, comment on it, maybe even talk about it then I'm happy

@TheCannon: I am guessing you are under 25, possibly under 20, which may account for your Star Wars-less existence. It's got everything, even 3 rubbish prequels! :)

Let me give Cannon some advice: NEVER. WATCH. THE. PREQUELS.

It will destroy your souuuuuul!

I don't watch prequels (except the X-men ones), so you don't have to worry.

#19 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: a wise choice, good sir.

#20 Posted by joshmightbe (24876 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: I'll go ahead and blame the ewoks

#21 Posted by CapFanboy (4520 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

@TheCannon: I am guessing you are under 25, possibly under 20, which may account for your Star Wars-less existence. It's got everything, even 3 rubbish prequels! :)

Oh come on! That's no excuse. I'm under 20 and I still love Star Wars...Pretty sure Cannon is still a pre-teen so that may be why...

#22 Posted by TheCannon (18276 posts) - - Show Bio

@CapFanboy said:

@batkevin74 said:

@TheCannon: I am guessing you are under 25, possibly under 20, which may account for your Star Wars-less existence. It's got everything, even 3 rubbish prequels! :)

Oh come on! That's no excuse. I'm under 20 and I still love Star Wars...Pretty sure Cannon is still a pre-teen so that may be why...

Shows what you know about me. I turned 13 last month.

#23 Posted by cnkrc (13 posts) - - Show Bio

Pretty Wicked , I was once writing stuff like that. Keep going. I hope you will include Lex Luthor in some part of this story. Come on man , give us some spoilers. >D

#24 Posted by CapFanboy (4520 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon said:

@CapFanboy said:

@batkevin74 said:

@TheCannon: I am guessing you are under 25, possibly under 20, which may account for your Star Wars-less existence. It's got everything, even 3 rubbish prequels! :)

Oh come on! That's no excuse. I'm under 20 and I still love Star Wars...Pretty sure Cannon is still a pre-teen so that may be why...

Shows what you know about me. I turned 13 last month.

No, it shows how little I care to know the age of someone I don't interact with often. Also, the "pretty sure" meant that I thought you were but there could be some doubt.

#25 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@cnkrc: Thanks man. I might mix Lex with Jabba :)

#26 Posted by wildvine (8772 posts) - - Show Bio

This is great, feel free to PM me about future stories. :)

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#27 Posted by Trodorne (2583 posts) - - Show Bio

great story man. can't wait for part 2.

#28 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@wildvine: Thanks. I will :)

@Trodorne: Thanks, hopefully this weekend

#29 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1649 posts) - - Show Bio

When can we expect chapter 2...??????

#30 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@4donkeyjohnson: Soon, keep getting dis..tract...edddddd

#31 Posted by wildvine (8772 posts) - - Show Bio

Goood, Goood, (rubs hands together)

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#32 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1649 posts) - - Show Bio

Feel the hate flow....no, feel the story flow through you! Join us on the Write Side bwhahahahahaha @wildvine

#33 Posted by tomdickharry1984 (836 posts) - - Show Bio

Noice work! Super-Star or Wars Man? :P

#34 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@4donkeyjohnson: Ha ha

@tomdickharry1984: Neither actually, part 2 is up for more. But Super Star has a nice ring to it...

#35 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1649 posts) - - Show Bio

Bumped

#36 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

#37 Posted by TheWholeDamnShow (758 posts) - - Show Bio

Not a huge fan of Star Wars, but I love me some Superman.

Great writing and story as usual Kev!

#38 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheWholeDamnShow: Thanks, there's a part 2 if you're up for it.

#39 Posted by TheWholeDamnShow (758 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

@TheWholeDamnShow: Thanks, there's a part 2 if you're up for it.

Sure thing!

#40 Posted by poze (225 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: The X-men prequels are f** up

#41 Edited by poze (225 posts) - - Show Bio

But I love it its really interesting!

#42 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@poze said:

@TheCannon: The X-men prequels are f** up

Ummmm okay....what?

#43 Posted by Ravager4 (1627 posts) - - Show Bio

Definitely the most unique concept I've seen in a while, very interesting. Too bad Krypton isn't under a yellow sun, because then the Empire would be screwed.

#44 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@Ravager4: Well a certain desert planet has a binary sun system, where a certain someone ends up on in chapter 2 :)

#45 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1649 posts) - - Show Bio

Any more? You have part 2 but then, well nothing...

#46 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@LadyLigeia: Cool, I'm glad you liked it

#47 Posted by tomdickharry1984 (836 posts) - - Show Bio

Any mor? U kinda stoppewd at 3...

#48 Posted by Referee (7271 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74: Awesome absolutely awesome. You have got to PM when the other chapters are written.

So are a Star Wars Fan including Dc characters or a Dc fan including Star Wars?

Again I loved it. I usual avoid the Fan-Fic page but when I read the title I knew I had to read it. Well Done!

#49 Posted by batkevin74 (10586 posts) - - Show Bio

@Referee: Thanks man, just PM'd you the links to parts 2 & 3. Thanks for reading. And don't avoid the Fan-Fic section, like the other forums there is some good, some bad and some indifferent :)

#50 Posted by Referee (7271 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

@Referee: Thanks man, just PM'd you the links to parts 2 & 3. Thanks for reading. And don't avoid the Fan-Fic section, like the other forums there is some good, some bad and some indifferent :)

I need you to post them again, I accidentally deleted the links.