#1 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

PAGE ONE:

 

Panel One: We see Clark and Lois in bed, Clark's eyes are open.

CAP: Clark Kent's day began normal

Panel Two: Clark flying Lois to work

CAP: He went to work with his wife

Panel Three: Clark at his desk at the daily planet, Perry in the background, shouting (no word ballons)

CAP: His boss yelled at him

Panel Four: We see half of Clark's face, the main focus should be the window he's looking out of, as a Viking attacks the city.

Panel Five: Superman rushing into battle.

CAP: So superman arrives to save the day!

 

PAGE TWO-THREE (DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD)

 

 

The Viking in mid swing, Superman is in mid- punch.

CAP: Little did he know...

CAP: ....it was all just a distraction.

 

PAGE FOUR:

Panel One: The Viking is charging

VIKING: Rrraaaah!

Panel Two: Superman pounds him into the ground.

VIKING: OOF!

SFX: Crack!

 

PAGE FIVE:

Panel One: A picture of STAR labs  

Panel Two:  Three covert men, dressed like SWAT teams toss tear gass into a room. 

MAN 1: MOVE! MOVE MOVE!

Panel three: The men arrive at a heavily guarded chamber, one is in the middle of attaching explosives to the hinges.

MAN 1: Explosives?

MAN 2: check.

Panel Three: Side view of the chamber, as it appears to be more of a metal coffin. (Mid explosion.)

SFX: BOOM

 

PAGE SIX:

 

Bizarro is revealed to be in the chamber.

 

PAGE SEVEN:

 

Panel One: Same side view of the chamber, Bizarro's fire breath lights two men.

MAN 3: OH MY GOD! HE'S KILLING THEM, KILLING THEM!!!

Panel Two: Bizarro flies out of the chamber

Bizarro: You're welcome! You am safe with bizarro #1!

 

PAGE EIGHT: 

Panel One: close up on Superman's ear

CAP: "Oh my God! He's killing them killing them!"

CAP: "SAFE with bizarro #1!"

Panel Two: Superman using his heat vision on the Viking's sword handle, turning it white hot,

VIKING: AAARHG 

Panel Three: Superman uses his breath to encase Viking in ice.

SFX: Wooooosh

Panel four: A close up on the frozen Viking, with Superman flying away in the background.

 

PAGE NINE:

Panel One: Superman flying  

Panel Two: Bizarro towering over the man, who is on the floor.

Panel Three: Superman is just a red blur

Panel Four: Bizarro about to use his fire breath.

 

PAGE TEN-ELEVEN: DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

Superman hits Bizarro, his fire breath goes in another direction.

SUPERMAN: ENOUGH, BIZARRO!

BIZARRO: Yum!

 

PAGE TWELVE:

 

 

Panel One: Superman hiting Bizarro through a wall.

Panel Two, Both of them use opposite breath power.

Panel Three: The two collide.

Panel Four: Both using opposite vision powers.

Panel Five: Superman goes flying when Bizarro hits him

 

PAGE THIRTEEN:

 

Panel One: Superman lands on a teleporter to Bizarro world.

SUPERMAN: Bizarro, wait!

Panel Two: In a burst of blue light, both are teleported to Bizarro world.

 

PAGE FOURTEEN:

 

Panel One: Superman and Bizarro on Bizarro Earth Bizarro goes in for the kill.

BIZARRO: Now me make sure you live.

Panel Two: Heat vision hits Bizarro from off panel (not Superman's)

CAP: Superman was too late, the teleporter, brought him...

OP: ...Here, I've been monitoring you Superman.

OP: Since the all night, we've been going back in time.

Panel Three: Superman getting up.

SUPERMAN: I remember you...

OP: Bizarro Earth has a blue sun, so I have powers.

OP: Any Species other than bizarros get killed in approximatley two days....

 

PAGE FIFTEEN:

We see Zibarro, from ALL STAR SUPERMAN floating in mid air.

ZIBARRO: So we better hurry...