#1 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

H20

"Mr. Norris..." Hammerhead walked into the bar.

"Yeah. What? Did Silvermane send you?"

"Yes. We have a prize for you...."

"What is it?"

"Have you ever wanted... power?"

"Doesn't everyone?"

William Norris excepted his "prize" and from then on.... everything was a blur.

THE WOODS...

"Oh, God, where am I?" Norris woke up. There was a path of destruction stopping at him. "Wait... I remember now. Hammerhead brought me to see Silvermane, who injected me with that... serum thing, and the last thing I remembered was huge ammount of pain from the injection and Silvermane telling me that the... 'transformation' or whatever would be triggered by anger and pain, He must've turned me into a monster!"

Just then, he walked off.

"I remember Hammerhead telling me to kill Luke Cage, my old friend, if I want to live." Will started talking to himself again. "I have to find Luke. Quick."

He felt a strange feeling in his nose, a tingling feeling. Images raced through his head and those images were of... Luke!

"I must still have some powers or whatever from the serum..." he thought. He went to track down Luke, and ended up in a small town. "Whats Cage doin' here?"

He walked into a bar and found him.

"Luke, remember me?" He said with an evil grin on his face.

Luke turned around.

"Will? Will NORRIS?"

"I'm here workin' for..." Will's eyes started glowing green "...SILVERMANE!"

He grew fangs, huge muscles, claws, scales, and gills.

"Aaaah!" Everyone panicked.

"COME ON, CAGE, YA STILL GOT IT? THAT STRENGTH AND CRAP YOU USED TO STRIKE FEAR INTO THOSE POOR SUCKERS WHO WERE DUMB ENOUGH TO FIGHT US BACK WHEN WE WERE ENFORCERS!" Will taunted Luke.

"SHUT UP!" Luke charged at Will and pushed him backwards through the window.

"AAAAH!" Will fell to the ground and rolled toward the river, with Cage coming after him.

They splashed into the river and Will dragged Luke under

"The one way to tell us apart" said Will "Is that I'm the one with gills!"

Will punched Luke in the face and knocked him out of the water and he went up into the air.

Will jumped out of the water and attacked Luke, both of them falling to the ground.

"Will, theres over 1000 ways to tell us apart" Luke punched Will in the face, sending him flying into the air "What now, Mr. Fish!?"

Will landed across the river, and Luke jumped over the river and landed next to him

"Well, I'm not the one on the run from an old man like Silvermane, now am I?" Will punched Luke in the stomach, knocking him into the river.

Will dived in after Luke, then grabbed him.

Luke kicked Will in the chest, and knocked him backwards, then swam to the surface.

"Where's that fish-stick now?" Luke said to himself.

Just then, Will grabbed his leg and pulled him back under.

Will repeatedly punched Luke, who grabbed a chunk of rock and smashed him in the head with it.

"AUGH!" Will's skull almost cracked open.

Luke grabbed Will by the throat and threw him up into the air, then jumped after him and punched him, knocking him far into the woods.

"AAAAAH!" screamed Luke, falling to the ground.

MANHATTAN

"You LOST to Cage? He LOST to Cage!"

"Listen, Hammerhead, he got, like, enhanced strength."

"No, Norris, you dont seem to get it. You HAD to kill him! Or we kill you!"

"No, NOOO!!!" Will screamed transforming into the beast. "RRRRRG!!!"

"Okay, Will, we'll give you one last chance... and this time, no messing around, KILL CAGE!"

Will nodded with an evil look on his face.

TO BE CONTINUED IN "SUBTEXT"

#2 Posted by TheCannon (17943 posts) - - Show Bio

Wow. This is amazing.

#3 Posted by darth_brendroid (1717 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm glad they didn't kill off Mr Fish haha. Nice one. There's one minor problem (at one point you start every line with either Will or Well; it's more an aesthetic thing I guess than anything else).

#4 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

@darth_brendroid said:

I'm glad they didn't kill off Mr Fish haha. Nice one. There's one minor problem (at one point you start every line with either Will or Well; it's more an aesthetic thing I guess than anything else).

Umm... thank you... I guess.

#5 Posted by darth_brendroid (1717 posts) - - Show Bio

It's more an aesthetic thing and minor like I said. It's otherwise fine and I enjoyed it :)

#6 Posted by RedRobinTimDrake (145 posts) - - Show Bio

good story want to read the next issue!