Raptor - Fan-Fic - Comic Vine

#1 Posted by Dead_pool (29 posts) - 5 years, 7 months ago - Show Bio

I have an idea for a new superhero. He is called the Raptor. He is the son of Dr. Doom, kidnapped and experimented on by Apocalypse, he is recused by his father, who gives up a life of evil, but is sub-sequently assassinated. Raptor than joins the X-Men and falls in love with Rogue, who's powers do not effect him.

What do you think?

#2 Posted by Bay Man (11 posts) - 5 years, 7 months ago - Show Bio

I like the X-Men part. But the Dr. Doom and Apocalypse I don't.

#3 Posted by Dead_pool (29 posts) - 5 years, 7 months ago - Show Bio

Thanks for your honosty

#4 Posted by Bay Man (11 posts) - 5 years, 7 months ago - Show Bio

Raptor could be a Mutant, of a new kind. After the Mutants all die, a new type of mutants rise, and they are more powerful.

#5 Posted by Dead_pool (29 posts) - 5 years, 7 months ago - Show Bio

Good idea. I've been trying to create new heroes and Raptor has been one of my favorites. I have been trying new ideas for his origins.

#6 Posted by Bay Man (11 posts) - 5 years, 7 months ago - Show Bio

I created a character a long time ago. His name was Kid-Man. He was trained in Martial Arts and had super strength. I even wrote a comic for him. I might post the comic here later.

#7 Posted by Dead_pool (29 posts) - 5 years, 7 months ago - Show Bio

Cool!