Yeah my first fan-fic please enjoy if you have any tips for me on how i can improve im open to your opinions but please keep any criticism constructed criticism thank you.
Chapter 1: Awakening
The sweat began to drip from his body flowing like rain drops down the window pane on a stormy winters night outside the thunder cracked and echoed the ear drums of the lonely boy lightning came down from the heavens thick and fast lighting up the darkness as it fell a force of nature to be afraid of but to him it was a calming presence like a mother he never had the sun would shine when she was happy and the winds would howl when she was sad and today she was rage and sorrow as the rain drops and hail stones danced upon the clear windows the stones like bullets from a gun rapidly striking the thin glass but never penetrating it. Like the wolf on the full moon the wind howled like a chained and frightened beast whipping as it moved and danced the air outside was cold frost began to form over the window like a disease spreading like wildfire through the body.
The room around him was chilled the air as frosty as snow like a deep freeze but he was not cold or chilled to the bone quite the opposite his body like a raging furnace was hot his breathing gradually got more heavy as if each breath would be the last he would ever make. The sweat that formed like skin over a scab was picking up and it was not just his pale face that was flowing a river but his entire body now drenched in his own body fluids the quilt on which he slept on now soaked through damp his body hot while the room around him stayed chilled yet his body shivered it was a strange feeling being so hot yet feeling so cold and lonely never crying about the misery of your miserable life because your tears like the winds of time have faded into a void and in time sadness turned to anger and anger turned into loneliness and all that would lead to death and tragedy and then he began to wake up.
Every night when his eyes closed and the world around him turned to darkness is when the nightmares came like f*cking haunting spirits screaming like a b!tching little kid in his ear crying for his mother to come and save him and they turned his world to pure darkness as they melded his broken mind into death casting there shadows over his torn and shattered heart gripping at his soul slowly changing him into nothing more than a beast of hate like a wild and untamed animal he hated it all he feared it and he spat at it only anger fuelled his need to kill but he wanted the nightmares to end he screamed for them to go away but the demons laughed back at him as his world became nothing more than darkness. His eyes slowly began to open they were heavy as if being held down by weights of his misery and those weights were heavy. The room was still dark only the light of the half moon could be seen in such a dark world to bad that moon didn’t light up his own darkness. Peeling away the layers of blankets he moved his feet until they touched the ground the chill from the hard wood floor travelled through his body moving as freely as the blood that circulated through the veins.
Only a few seconds passed before the chill disappeared like a echo fading and dissolving into the air and then just as quickly it was replaced by that rage of heat and then BANG BANG BANG three large heavy knocks like the thunder that still boomed outside vibrated around the room 5 seconds passed before a voice so pure and sweet like a angel was speaking “Daniel its time for your appointment” her voice was like a harp so soothing and tender and it if only for a moment he felt free and for that one moment the darkness of the demon was replaced with the light of an angel. Her foot steps could be heard walking away from the room each step she took was quieter than the last. Daniel undressed himself his gown gently fell from his body standing there sweat still dripping he checked the time right on schedule he thought 5:00am the time when the nightmares would wake him up and she would come knocking at his door. Daniel with bowed head got into the shower as the water washed away the filth of his body never once did his head raise from looking down not once did his eyes shift. Daniel got out of the shower and got dressed as he opened his door a large creaking noise came from the door as he began his walk down the long hallway he came to a door stopping and pausing for a few moments he took three deep breaths before entering the room and there she was Amber Price her hazel nut hair swayed as she moved towards him signalling him to take a seat her eyes as blue as the sky on a clear summers day was as beautiful as a million exploding stars he felt lost around her yet so free nervous yet calm as she took a seat she looked at him “Hello Daniel how are we feeling today” her voice as always was calm he looked at her with heavy breathing finding it hard to speak to her “The nightmares are still there please make them go away” Daniel spoke with fear was it his love for her that he spoke with such despair or was it the nightmares that still plagued his mind. “I will help you Daniel but I need you to tell me your greatest nightmares”