1. We see Kate Kane in her car, looking at her from the passenger’s seat. She is looking in her handbag. Outside of the car, and clearly visible through the driver’s side window is a young Renee Montoya. Renee is dressed in her patrol officer uniform, and has her note book and pen in hand. She has just pulled over Kate for speeding.
KATE
It’s in here somewhere. I can never find a thing in this garbage sack.
RENEE
That’s ok, Ms Kane. While you’re battling the forces of your handbag you can tell me what you do for a living.
For the ticket.
2. Kate is in the bottom left corner of the panel, looking up. She is cut out against a memory of hers. In it, she is fighting bank robbers as The Batwoman.
KATE
Um....
3. Back to the same framing as Panel 1, but Kate is looking at Renee.
KATE
Coffee trainer.
RENEE
A coffee trainer?
4. A close up of Renee. She has a cheeky little smile on her face.
RENEE
How do you train beans to become coffee?
5. A close up of Kate. She is smiling.
KATE
Cute.
6. A tighter shot of Renee through the car window. The back of Kate’s head is visible in the bottom left corner. Renee is writing on her notepad.
RENEE
I’m going to let you off with a warning, but you have to promise me to slow down from now on.
Should you have any questions that need answering –
7. A close up of the piece of paper in Kate’s hand. It reads:
Renee - 555 434 632
RENEE
Give me a call
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