Ok this is the first time I do this, so I'm openminded for opinions/reviews, I know it is short but it's only the first part, I'll write the rest here if people think is good, if not well.
It all started in Mexico on the night of Halloween of 1991.
It was a cold and dark night, it was raining and both thunders and lightning were falling from the sky.
It was a night that no one would forget, that’s if there were survivors.
A small figure entered the building with just a small dagger in his hand.
He started walking on the hall, killing everyone in front of him; men, women, children and old people. It didn’t matter to him, because he was there for one reason and one reason only…..find an heir.
Hope I find here someone that is worthy of being my apprentice, and to keep my legacy to exterminate the heroes that plague this world
“No….no….this neither…..for god’s sake there must be someone here……I’m running out of time.”
Then a little boy that had just 3 hours from being born started crying.
“Shut up!!...I told you to shut up!!...silence you little scum....That’s it you’re dead.”
The old man grabbed his dagger and prepared himself to kill the little kid but just when he was going to do it. He stopped, he couldn’t continue.
“This boy...I can feel it....this is the one….This is the one I’ve been looking for!!”
okay thoughts/review/opinion/suggestions?
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