#1 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

S.T.A.R. (Shield Tactics And Research) LABORATORIES...

"My name is Dr. Darwin Masters" said the man "So, Miss...."

"Maria" she said "Maria McGee, of ST.A.R."

"Okay" said Dr. Masters, turning on his computer "Well, as you can see, one of these stars.... is not a star."

"Yes" she said "The cosmic energy is too high for a star"

"Exactly" replied Dr. Masters, akwardly "The cosmic energy is.... world-threatening, almost, so... what do we do?"

"Hmmm...." Dr. Masters sat down "Get me Dr. Palmer..... Hank Palmer"

LATER....

"Hmmm...." Hank started thinking "Well, as you probably see, Ms. McGee, and Dr. Masters, the cosmic energy is almost shrinking the closer this... thing gets to our planet.... as if it doesn't want to harm us."

"Well, what is it then?" asked Maria

"Its... alive" answered Hank

"Masters, set up the satellite camera" ordered Maria "I'll see if we can't get the Justice League Ultimates to check this out."

The camera showed a huge red and silver blur zoom across the solar system

AT SURFOUR LAKE....

A S.T.A.R. hover-craft flew above the area. Inside it was Maria McGee and Hank Palmer.

"As soon as the thing comes by, Hank, I want you to jump out and do the whole... size thingy" said Maria "Ya got it?"

Hank simply nodded.

Suddenly, they saw something brighter then the sun coming.

"HANK! NOW!" yelled Maria.

The top of the Hover-Craft opened up, and Hank jumped out, growing giant.

"RAAAH!" Hank grabbed onto the silver thing and pulled it down into the river.

As the two of them fell into the river, smoke started coming from the alien, almost burning Hank's hands.

When they fell into the water, the burning stopped, as if it put out the "fire".

TO BE CONTINUED...
#2 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Anyone?

#3 Posted by TheCannon (19472 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice! I would of commented earlier, but I was rushed and didn't have time to read it. But this is amazing.

#4 Posted by TheCannon (19472 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

Anyone?

This.

#5 Posted by Rusty_Irons (627 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

Anyone?

Good start.

#6 Posted by TheCannon (19472 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon said:

@GR2Blackout said:

Anyone?

This.

This.

#7 Posted by AweSam (7376 posts) - - Show Bio

What's the point of having Flash's powers if he's stuck on the board?

#8 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

@AweSam said:

What's the point of having Flash's powers if he's stuck on the board?

In case he's not on the board. He's not stuck on it.

#9 Posted by TheCannon (19472 posts) - - Show Bio

Bump.

#10 Posted by Rabbitearsblog (6028 posts) - - Show Bio

Great so far!

#11 Posted by wh1t3b0y5t33z (54 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice! Got the cool chemistry of Silver Surfer with the whole Amazing Fantasy esque. Aka freaking nice!