#1 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

New Amalgam Universe: Thunder Woman #6

INT. Island

Thunder Woman and Baldiope are facing a creature named Cheelik.

CHEELIK:

The Mighty Thunder Woman? I have been waiting years to gain my revenge on you.

THUNDER WOMAN:

If it’s a fight you want, it’s a fight you get!

Thunder Woman charges at Cheelik, but Cheelik slips out of the way. She picks up a boulder, and throws it at Thunder Woman. But, Thunder Woman breaks it with the Hammer of Truth.

THUNDER WOMAN:

You expect to defeat the Mighty Thunder Woman by throwing rocks?

CHEELIK:

No. That was to make sure you were as good as you were before. Apparently a decade in Man’s World hasn’t made you soft.

BALDIOPE:

Do not underestimate her Thunder Woman.

THUNDER WOMAN:

Who is she anyway?

BALDIOPE:

That is Cheelik. Leader of the cat trolls.

Cheelik charges at Baldiope, and knocks her unconscious.

CHEELIK:

No one to hide behind Princess.

Thunder Woman flies into the air, swinging the Hammer of Truth. She comes charging down at full force, and defeats Cheelik.

THUNDER WOMAN:

Is that the best Demoki has to throw at me?

MAN (unseen):

Not even close, Thunder Woman...

THUNDER WOMAN:

Who...?

MAN:

You still have to face the Genocutioner.

THUNDER WOMAN:

Have we faced each other?

GENOCUTIONER:

How can you not remember? You ruined my plans to conquer the nine islands!

THUNDER WOMAN:

It’s a long story.

GENOCUTIONER:

Neither of us have ime for it. You’ll be dead in a few minutes, and I’ll have to finish off Baldiope.

Genocutioner takes his axe, and charges at Thunder Woman. She blocks it with her hammer, and hits him in the jaw with it.

GENOCUTIONER:

You’ve lost your touch, Thunder Woman. You had me defeated by now last time we faced. Man’s World has taken away your ability to fight well.

THUNDER WOMAN:

I have bigger worries than you. Tell me where Demoki is.

GENOCUTIONER:

I will not speak. I answer only to Demoki!

Genoutioner swings his axe at Thunder Woman again, and knocks the Hammer of Truth out of her hand. Genocutioner kicks her in the gut, and knocks her to the ground.

GENOCUTIONER:

If this is what Man’s World has done to you, I might turn on Demoki and take over Man’s World myself. But first, I have to finish you off.

Genocutioner is about to finish off Thunder Woman, but she uses her uru bracelets to block the axe. She kicks Genocutioner in the stomach, and knocks him several yards away.

THUNDER WOMAN (thoughts):

I have to get to the Hammer of Truth within the next 20 seconds or I’ll turn back into Diana Blake.

She looks for a moment, and finds the hammer on a rock. She takes it, and throws it at Genocutioner.

THUNDER WOMAN:

I give you one more chance. Where is Demoki?

GENOCUTIONER:

I will not speak!

THUNDER WOMAN:

Very well.

She begins to swing the Hammer of Truth around, until it is energized with lighting. A rope of lighting is produced, and she wraps it around Genocutioner.

THUNDER WOMAN:

The Hammer of Truth will make you tell what I wish to know. Where is Demoki?

GENOCUTIONER:

Above.

She looks above, and sees Demoki hovering.

DEMOKI:

You want me, dear sister? Here I am!

To be continued...

#2 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

Sorry it took so long.

#3 Posted by wh1t3b0y5t33z (54 posts) - - Show Bio

Amazing concept! I love it! I can literally picture the scene in my mind. The only problem I see is that there could be a tad bit more action added to make it intense.

#4 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@wh1t3b0y5t33z Thanks. Hope other people like it as much as you. We get to see her showdown with Demoki in issue 7.

#5 Posted by wh1t3b0y5t33z (54 posts) - - Show Bio

look forward to reading it!

#6 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@wh1t3b0y5t33z Should be done tomorrow or Monday.

#7 Posted by wh1t3b0y5t33z (54 posts) - - Show Bio

awesome, I wish I could work on Dark Chronicles: Nightdevil #1 but the file is at my moms house :(

#8 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@wh1t3b0y5t33z That does stink.

#9 Posted by wh1t3b0y5t33z (54 posts) - - Show Bio

hell yeah but atleast i can work on it tomorrow!

#10 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome! Just one thing: it says she throws it at Genocutioner, then the next second, it says she swings it around. Did she pick it up in between throwing it and swinging it? Either, can't wait to see what Demoki has next.

#11 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@wh1t3b0y5t33z Good.

Thanks. And she twirled it to create a lasso of lighting.

#12 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Sorry, but that doesn't really explain my question. I'm not asking how she made the lasso.

#13 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

Sorry, but that doesn't really explain my question. I'm not asking how she made the lasso.

Could you be a little more specific please them?

#14 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

She looks for a moment, and finds the hammer on a rock. She takes it, and throws it at Genocutioner.

THUNDER WOMAN:

I give you one more chance. Where is Demoki?

GENOCUTIONER:

I will not speak!

THUNDER WOMAN:

Very well.

She begins to swing the Hammer of Truth around, until it is energized with lighting. A rope of lighting is produced, and she wraps it around Genocutioner.

It says she throws it, then the next moment she still has it.

#15 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

She looks for a moment, and finds the hammer on a rock. She takes it, and throws it at Genocutioner.

THUNDER WOMAN:

I give you one more chance. Where is Demoki?

GENOCUTIONER:

I will not speak!

THUNDER WOMAN:

Very well.

She begins to swing the Hammer of Truth around, until it is energized with lighting. A rope of lighting is produced, and she wraps it around Genocutioner.

It says she throws it, then the next moment she still has it.

Yes. It came back to her like Thor's hammer.

#16 Posted by batkevin74 (10793 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: @wh1t3b0y5t33z: I like it, but yeah the action was over way to quickly and easily

#17 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

@TheCannon: @wh1t3b0y5t33z: I like it, but yeah the action was over way to quickly and easily

It's was more of a set up for the showdown between her and Demoki. It also shows that Thunder Woman fought many villains before banishment.

#18 Posted by BlackArmor (6141 posts) - - Show Bio

your story is shaping up quite nicely, I like it

Online
#19 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@BlackArmor said:

your story is shaping up quite nicely, I like it

Thanks.

#20 Posted by Rusty_Irons (627 posts) - - Show Bio

Cool. One day i hope Thunder woman and Lobora throw down.It would be a good fight if it happens.

#21 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio

@tmacximas said:

Cool. One day i hope Thunder woman and Lobora throw down.It would be a good fight if it happens.

That would be nice.

#22 Posted by TheCannon (18745 posts) - - Show Bio
#23 Posted by batkevin74 (10793 posts) - - Show Bio

Bump