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#1 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

Star City Airport

“Is it because I am black?” Oliver Queen stared at the airport security indignantly

“No sir it’s…”

“Then why are you stopping me from getting to my plane?”

“You haven’t filled a flight plan, you have an open bottle of alcohol in your hand, you’re drunk, you haven’t got a passport and you haven’t got any pants on!” said the woman as she unhooked some handcuffs

“How about I give you a thousand dollars to look away?”

“And now you’re trying to bribe me” She spun Oliver around and arrested him

“Hey not so rough baby!” joked Oliver as he was hauled away

Star City Airport, Customs & Detainment Area

“Where’s my client?” yelled Dinah Munroe “Where is Oliver Queen?”

Airport security looked at her blankly and coldly. The officer in charge stepped forward

“This isn’t a court room sweetheart” she said looking over her aviator glasses at the stunning super model-esque lawyer “He’s in lockup until he sobers up”

“What did he do this time?”

“You don’t know?”

“I got an SMS to bail him out, that’s it” replied Dinah as she took a seat

“He was drunk and tried to take his plane for a spin. He then assaulted two of my guys, so if he looks a little roughed up it’s because he fell”

Dinah shot death rays from her ebony eyes at the woman “Do you know who my client is?”

“Who doesn’t!” she exclaimed “Oliver Queen, multi-millionaire playboy who hangs in the Logan Wayne set. Maker of weapons and has a possible death wish”

“Exactly the text from the tabloids” agreed Dinah

“He’ll be free to go when he sobers up providing…”

“Providing what?”

“Well this incident could be embarrassing and since most of us here make minimum wage”

“You want money or you’ll leak this to the papers is what you’re saying?”

“I’m glad you understand” said the woman smiling

Dinah unflipped her phone “Oh hello can I speak to Pete Ross please”

“Who are you calling? Your lawyer?” asked the guard

“No the Daily Bugle” said Dinah “I’ll release the story myself so you don’t see a dime sweetheart”

Queen Penthouse, Star City

“Just do your job, you’re not my mother!”

“You petulant brat!” yelled Dinah as she slapped Oliver and stormed out

“Dinah!” Oliver called after her but she slammed the door and was gone “Fine! Go! I don’t care!”

Oliver slumped into his overpriced mega sofa and looked through a pile of junk mail on the coffee table. He grabbed the lot and through them into the air, shooting his hand into the midst and grabbing one, letting the rest fall like confetti. It was a letter from the Wakandan Embassy. Curious he ripped it open

Dear Mr Queen, It seems that due to your recent troubles, the government of Wakanda has refused a visa for you to visit the country you claim to be your spiritual home. Perhaps if you were less visible in the tabloids and gossip magazines along with less frequent trouble with the law then my government may be more willing to allow you in. We do thank you for the generous donation of $10,000 you sent but fearing it would be perceived as a bribe we have donated your donation to the Red Cross. Thank you Shara Kwarrai

“You lousy bastards!” cried Oliver “I sent $20,000! Dinah! Di…oh dammit!” Oliver upended the table with a smash and walked out onto his balcony that overlooked the city that his wealth and taxes built. Glistening in the night was Star Bridge and the lights from Lee Papp Stadium burnt a column into the ebony sky as some sport played inside it. “I don’t belong here”

Cairo Airport, Egypt

“What did you call me?” croaked the shrivelled Egyptian airport official.

Oliver pulled down his aviator glasses and flashed his pearly whites “I said Achmed and I’ll say it again slowly; Where’s my plane you sand shovelling, second hand pyramid salesman!”

The official began to charge at Oliver when his two compatriots held him back as he flailed wildly and swore at him in Arabic. Oliver crossed his arms and tapped his foot “It’s a six hour flight to Wakanda buddy” said Oliver “The sooner you tell me where you put my plane, the sooner you can go back to oppressing your women or whatever you do in your spare time”

The official broke free and went for Oliver’s throat; but Oliver chicken-winged him breaking his nose across his face and laying him out cold. Oliver reached into his pocket and produced a roll of bills and handed wads to the stunned pair of officials

“My plane” Oliver said deliberately and slowly “Where?”

They pointed to a Cessna 172 Skywing on the tarmac

“Thank you”

Storm clouds, 15,000ft in the air entering Wakandan airspace

“Mayday! Mayday! This is…” A tired Oliver looked exasperated as the radio came off in his hand “You’re kidding me!” Oliver fought the controls as the plane dipped and dived, tossed by the wind like a leaf. His instruments spun and as another lightning bolt illuminated the darkness, Oliver saw Mount Kanda standing defiantly in front of him. Oliver fled the controls, grabbed a parachute and rapidly left the plane as it slammed and exploded against the unyielding rock!

...To be continued

(Green Arrow, Oliver Queen & Dinah Lance are owned by DC. Black Panther, T’Challa, Wakanda and Ororo Munroe are owned by Marvel. Logan Wayne & Pete Ross are owned by Amalgam. This story is mine and the creation of Green Panther is mine but using elements from DC & Marvel, as I’ve said in other stories they own the sandpit I merely just play in it)

#2 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

Love it.

#3 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: Thanks! Trying to blend equally GA and Black Panther whilst retaining some freshness is a challenge

#4 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

I know what you mean. I'm having trouble not having Thunder Woman too much like Thor.

#5 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: It's a challenge but it's fun, looking forward to seeing Thunder Woman actually, part of me has imagined that Odin & Hippolyte carved her out of Uru rock and breathed life into her (so taking the clay idea but Norsing it)

#6 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

Good idea. Mine was to have the Odin/Hippolyta combo banish Diana Odinson to Man's world as Dona Blake, until she finds her hammer and givers her the powers of Thunder Woman.

#7 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: Hmmm interesting, looking forward to reading her

#8 Posted by DickGrayson (330 posts) - - Show Bio

It is excellent, I am looking forward to more! (:

#9 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@DickGrayson: Thanks man

Hopefully another chapter up this week

#10 Posted by DickGrayson (330 posts) - - Show Bio

Welcome, and yes HOPEFULLY! :)

#11 Posted by tomdickharry1984 (837 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74: This is AWESOME! Nice mashup dude! Green Panther is boterline brillant! More...more please!

@TheCannon: Thunder Woman?

#12 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

Wonder Woman and Thor. Thor is the God of Thunder. Go read it on the fan fic section.

#13 Posted by RedRobinTimDrake (145 posts) - - Show Bio

great! the second ones good to

#14 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@RedRobinTimDrake: Thanks man

#15 Posted by DickGrayson (330 posts) - - Show Bio

I absolutely love the idea of Green Arrow, and Black Panther.

#16 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74: heheh....no pants...

AMAZING CHAPTER! Character is funny and quite amusing.

#17 Posted by kamrenamir (212 posts) - - Show Bio

@DickGrayson said:

I absolutely love the idea of Green Arrow, and Black Panther.

I agree! This is great and I will happily read all the rest.

#18 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@kamrenamir: Sweet! Thanks

#19 Posted by blur1528 (1055 posts) - - Show Bio

This is really fun to read because every other line I'm like "... wait that's not right..." and then I chuckle and keep reading. Highly enjoyable.

#20 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

Thanks man! Chapter 2 is also up and 3 sometime this week

#21 Posted by BlackArmor (6142 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome

#22 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@BlackArmor: Thanks man. Part 2 is up and part 3 JUST hit the vine about an hour ago if you're interested.

#23 Posted by BlackArmor (6142 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74: Gonna get to them tomorrow

#24 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@BlackArmor: Coolio

#25 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

Friendly bumpage...up to part 4 now

#26 Posted by Rusty_Irons (627 posts) - - Show Bio

this is the first green panther ive read and its good.will have to read the others some time.

#27 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@tmacximas: Thanks man, appreciate it. He's up to chapter 5 when you get a chance to :)

#28 Posted by cliffrice (1015 posts) - - Show Bio

realy good story. i feel like there is a small touch of tony stark in there as well. or maybe i'm imagining it.

#29 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@cliffrice: Well he's a friend of Booster Stark aka Platinum Man written by

#30 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1703 posts) - - Show Bio

This is really entertaining to read. The line "the sooner you can go back to oppressing your women or whatever" made me actually laugh out loud (as opposed to typing it). Very good and ending on a cliffhanger. I hear there is more...

#31 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@4donkeyjohnson: Yeah GP is up to 5 chapters, gotta get back into it soon. But thank you for reading

#32 Posted by tomdickharry1984 (837 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 Green Panther mentioned in 'Good Times @ Marverl High' :p

#33 Posted by EdwardWindsor (14428 posts) - - Show Bio

Very good work man, look forward to seeing more of the new amalgram stuff.

#34 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio
#35 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@tomdickharry1984: Really? Well I best go check that out

@lazystudent: Thanks for reading, I'm up to 5 chapters of Green Panther if you're interested

@TheCannon: Yes we have a library go look. Also willbe getting back into Green Panther soon

#36 Posted by tomdickharry1984 (837 posts) - - Show Bio

Yeah mate :)

#37 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

have a read, tell me what you think, thanks

#38 Edited by Ravager4 (1627 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74: oh , Ollie, you so hopeless. I thought this was pretty good, definitely got a laugh out of it. only Oliver Queen would try to fly a plane drunk with no pants.

I don't suppose I could shamelessly ask for a lookover of my fan fic now, could I? =P

#39 Posted by CapFanboy (5332 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

“Is it because I am black?” Oliver Queen stared at the airport security indignantly

I knew this was gonna be awesome as soon as I read this.

#40 Posted by Time_Phantom (527 posts) - - Show Bio

This was good. Ollie is so funny. Do you have more of this?

#41 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@Ravager4: Yes, yes I shall. I am so far behind in my Ravager reading

@CapFanboy: Thanks

@Time_Phantom: Yeah there's 5 chapters so far

#42 Posted by YourNeighborhoodComicGeek (20387 posts) - - Show Bio

Really good plot. And I love the beginning xD.

#43 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@YourNeighborhoodComicGeek: Thanks man, there are 4 more chapters if you're keen :)

#44 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

Bumped because I really like my creation and would like more people to read it, that's all :)

#45 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1703 posts) - - Show Bio

Up to chapter 7! Well lets move this upwards so I can re-read and refresh. :P

#46 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

GASP! He bumped it! Madre dios, he's a madman!

#47 Edited by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

And one final piece of history bumped before I go

#48 Posted by Warpimp (57 posts) - - Show Bio

This was great! *off to read Thunder Woman*

#49 Posted by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

@warpimp: Well there's 7 chapters of Green Panther if you're keen :)

#50 Edited by batkevin74 (11004 posts) - - Show Bio

Bumped