Okay, I know there are no directions on who is talking or narrative descriptions, but just hang with me.
When speaking, we all tend to emphasize certain words over others, and I am trying to incorporate that into my writing(all capitalized words would be considered emphasized and bolded words in a comic-book script). Also, I need criticism on if I am being too wordy or don't have enough metaphors or if parallelism would better get certain points across.
Here is a naked speech(i.e. without descriptions behind the dialogue).
"I find your problem to be trivial."
"Do you have the power to bring back six billion people?"
"Then HELP ME!"
"We're about to embark on a SUICIDE MISSION TO SAVE THE UNIVERSE, and you're worried about one measly planet?"
"It is not one planet, it is my planet. And I plan to protect it."
"Then it seems itis true."
"That humans know better than anyone else what it is like to make irrational decisions."
"What are you implying?"
"I'm not implying anything, I'm stating a fact."
"Why YOU SON OF A BI-"