#1 Posted by batkevin74 (10362 posts) - - Show Bio

Welcome to Mashed Up Origins! This is an experiment of mine that I was going to make into a group, but with the chaos that a group can bring I decided to go it alone. Feel free to do your own. It’s short, sweet and basically a quick origin, something to make you go (hopefully) “I’d like to see that!” This continues & links with my M.U.O Fantastic Four and begins my possible & probable universing of my Mashed Up Origin’s. Enjoy and please comment, links to the other M.U.O's I've done are at the end.

Cape Canaveral

Colonel Carol Danvers stood before the gathered press, her teeth clenched firmly in a smile. -Can I just fly the damn thing?- she thought as she turned to another bank of reporters and their dazzling arrays of flashbulbs.

“Isn’t she wonderful folks” said Colonel John Jameson from the podium “Brains and beauty”

“Misogynistic bastard” Carol said through her teeth as she posed for more photos “Must be genetic”

“Just a few more shots folks, Colonel Danver’s has a plane to catch” Jameson laughed at his own joke.


The rocket roared into the upper atmosphere as it separated from the fuel tank booster with a loud clunk.

“Was that supposed to happen control?” asked Carol as the cabin shook like an old washing machine.

“Yes Colonel Danvers”

“Just checking, over”

“Is everything okay up there?”

“Well maybe I don’t exactly trust this bucket of bolts, after its owner turned himself and his three friends into colourful rage monsters” yelled Carol

“You’re fine from our point of view Colonel Danvers”

A light and a screeching klaxon alarm filled the cabin. Carol flicked some switches and looked on her screen. “Oh great!”

“Colonel Danvers?”

“I see it control. Sub-space storm”

“Telemetry indicates you’ll experience some turb…” the voice cut off as the cabin shuddered violently. Carol grabbed the controls and fought to keep the ship on course. A crack began to spider web across the glass.

“Abort! Abort!” yelled Carol into her comms. “Control, if you can hear me, I am aborting the mission! The ships integrity has been breached. Probably because it was built by an egghead and not NASA!” The ship spun off course as Carol wrestled the ship and brought it back down to Earth.


Carol popped the door off and wobbled her way out of the crash that she’d remarkable managed to turn from instant death to a bumpy landing in a field. Carol’s skin felt hot, and hard.

“What the…” Carol held up her hand as it started to fade before her eyes. She turned to run and her legs elongated and sent her thirty feet away in one giant elastic stride.

“Oh my god!” screamed Carol as watched her skin buckle and harden into orange tiles and then suddenly burst into flames!


“How you feeling Ms Marvel?” asked Colonel Jameson as he stood at the end of Carol’s hospital bed. Behind him stood two other men she recognised: General Thaddeus Ross and General Nick Fury.

“Wha? What did you call me?” stammered Carol as she sat up and looked at the plastic bubble that surrounded her bed and separated her from them. “What’s going on?”

“There was an accident Carol” said General Fury “Seems the ship Richard’s built wasn’t shielded against cosmic radiation”

“What does that mean sir?” she asked.

“To be honest Carol” General Fury scratched his stubble and pulled out a cigar “The boffins are trying to work that out. But what we can tell you is that you’ve managed to get yourself a fantastic set of powers”

Carol looked at her hands that were simultaneously shifting between being rocky, on fire, invisible and stretchy; sometimes being all four at once.





#2 Posted by TheCannon (17839 posts) - - Show Bio

Love it.

#3 Posted by Rusty_Irons (627 posts) - - Show Bio

Good one.

#4 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1610 posts) - - Show Bio

Hmmmm Carol Danvers with all four of the Fantastic Four's powers. Very interesting, she's a Super Skrull :) Nice work, may just have a look at what else you've mashed...

#5 Posted by TheCannon (17839 posts) - - Show Bio

I was about to make a post saying how surprised I was that only two people commented, but I see a third person has.

#6 Posted by MsMarvel22 (166 posts) - - Show Bio

This is very good work. I enjoyed it.

#7 Posted by DickGrayson (330 posts) - - Show Bio

Amazing, I love all of your ideas.

#8 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

I like it.

#9 Posted by batkevin74 (10362 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: Thank you

@tmacximas: Thank you

@4donkeyjohnson: Yeah she's a human Super Skrull

@MsMarvel22: Thank you, coming from a Ms Marvel that's even cooler :)

@DickGrayson: Thank you, but not all my ideas are good. I've had some shockers!

@primepower53: Thank you

#10 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1610 posts) - - Show Bio

I think Carol with the FF powers is scarier than the Super Skrull imo :)

#11 Posted by BlackArmor (6134 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome man! I almost did something like this for the Amalgamverse with Superman and the FF but there's no way it would have been this well written

#12 Posted by Veitha (2727 posts) - - Show Bio

Very Nice :)

#13 Posted by batkevin74 (10362 posts) - - Show Bio

@4donkeyjohnson: Thanks

@BlackArmor: That's an interesting idea if Superman got FF'd on his entry to Earth and grew up with HIS powers plus all the FF's powers...pretty cool idea

@Veitha: Thank you, more soon I hope

#14 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Sweet, Ms. Marvel, the Fantastic One! :P

#15 Posted by batkevin74 (10362 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

Sweet, Ms. Marvel, the Fantastic One! :P

That's kinda cool, the Fantastic One, works on several levels

#16 Posted by Ms. Omega (4369 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice Job Dude.

#17 Posted by batkevin74 (10362 posts) - - Show Bio

@Ms. Omega: Thanks. There's a couple other M.U.O's if you're interested :)

#18 Posted by 4donkeyjohnson (1610 posts) - - Show Bio

If you are going to sequel, continue or even expand; may I suggest this one. Carol is a complicated person and with NOW a vast array of powers, this would make a good on-going...at the very least a 2nd chapter imo

#19 Posted by tomdickharry1984 (830 posts) - - Show Bio


#20 Posted by batkevin74 (10362 posts) - - Show Bio

@4donkeyjohnson: Thanks

#21 Posted by batkevin74 (10362 posts) - - Show Bio

@wildvine Bumped as its linked to my FF MUO

#22 Posted by cbishop (6944 posts) - - Show Bio

Hmmmm Carol Danvers with all four of the Fantastic Four's powers. Very interesting, she's a Super Skrull :) ...

Exactly what I was thinking while reading it. Added to my FF Long Box - Authors. :)

#23 Posted by ImpurestCheese (4552 posts) - - Show Bio
#24 Posted by batkevin74 (10362 posts) - - Show Bio

Yeah she probably shouldv'e been called Ms Fantastic...why hasn't Marvel done that? Or have they?