Marvel: The New 52 - Spider-Man #1

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#1  Edited By GR2Blackout

At the Midtown High chemistry lab....

"Mister Parker" said Mr. Octavius "Your late again"

"You dont understand, sir" said Peter "My Aunt May needed me to do her a favor"

"I see. Now do me a favor and go to detention."

Peter Parker never had an easy life. He never knew his dad, and he lives with his Mom and his Aunt.

All he knew is his dad was a scientist who went missing while trying to retrieve a special plant for his project. However, the plant was in a place called Wakkanda, which is famous for being known as "The Savage Land".

"Hey, Puny Parker!" said Flash Thompson, who Peter recognized simply as the brainless back-row bully from detention.

"What is it, Flash?"

"Me and my friends are going to sneak into the tiger-section of the zoo on the field trip.... where they keep the lions from Wakkanda. You can come... unless your too... chicken."

"Wakkandian lions? Cool!"

"I thought you didn't like cool stuff... oh well, be there."

The Wakkandian lion thing only reminded him more of his dad...

The next day at the zoo...

"Hello, my name is T'challa, I will be your tour-guide today" said the tour-guide at the zoo "I am an expert on all kind of Wakkandian animals, mostly Panthers."

T'challa pointed at the panther exhibit.

"These panthers are one of the three types of Wakkandian animals we have at the zoo, including saber-tooth tigers."

T'challa pointed to a saber-tooth tiger exhibit.

"This is our most popular Wakkandian exhibit. This saber-tooth tiger is named Zabu. Who is very friendly, but when hes hungry or tired, he kind of gets grumpy."

Peter thought all the animals were cool, and he was enjoying the exhibit until Flash interrupted it for him.

"Parker" whispered Flash "Its time."

They snuck to the lion exhibit.

"Oh, God, this could either be fun... or a huge mistake" thought Peter.

Just then, a Wakkandian spider crawled out of a crate just sitting there by the exhibit and bit Peter.

"Ugh" groaned Peter.

"Whats the matter, too scared?" asked one of Flash's friends.

Peter ignored how sick to his stomach he felt, and how jerky Flash and his friends were being.

"Heh! This so coo-AH...!" yelled Flash as he tripped, waking up the lions.

"Rrrrg" growled the lions, going to attack Peter, Flash, and Flash's friends.

"Aaaah!" they all screamed.

They walked backwards into the corner, surrounded by hungry lions.

"HISSSSSSSSS!!!" A giant, shadowy, green creature jumped out of a truck and tackled the Lions, eating there flesh.

"Oh my goOOOOOOOOODDDDDD!!!" screamed Flash, jumping over the fence with Peter and his friends.

Just then, the green creature ran off as security, animal control, cops, and T'challa ran to the exhibit.

"What was that spider?" thought Peter "And what was THAT?"

NEXT: All the answers... or really?

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#2  Edited By batkevin74

@GR2Blackout: Interesting. Honestly I believe Wakanda has only one K, but it's your story and in this dimension it has two, no big deal. Curious about WTF happens at the end with the green monster. Good work

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#3  Edited By teoP_ehT

@GR2Blackout: cool!

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#4  Edited By joshmightbe

good job

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#5  Edited By Avenging-X-Bolt

Damn , I've been toying with similar ideas for months now, guess you beat me to the punch. Great job

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#6  Edited By TheCannon

I can't believe I missed this/ I usually read all your stuff. Excellent work.

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#8  Edited By Rusty_Irons

Okay, this time it's the hulk, right?

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#9  Edited By GR2Blackout

Nope. But close!

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#10  Edited By Rusty_Irons

Umm...Devil dinosaur?

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#11  Edited By wildvine

I love Spider-man. this is great.@tmacximas Devil Dinosaur is red silly.