#1 Edited by YoungJustice (6863 posts) - - Show Bio

Maryland MRD Base

"Wolverine, down!" Cyclops yelled out to Wolverine as he dodged a blast from a sentinel, luckily, he had gone through extreme training on the field for the last 3 months since the Sentinel Initiative was started.

Wolverine ducked as a missile flew above his head, behind him, Storm flew in and grabbed him by his arms, they soared above the Sentinel, Storm through Wolverine on the head of it, while she gathered thunder.

Nightcrawler teleported onto the scene, using his blue smoke to trick the sentinel's vision, Iceman created a path of ice in front of him as he froze the sentinel's hand, attempting to stop it from shooting.

All at once, Wolverine slashed the Sentinel's eyes, Iceman froze its hands, Nightcrawler dropped a MRD truck on its feet, Cyclops shot an optic blast at its torso, and Storm finished it off with a thunder strike.

They all grounded themselves, and put together a game plan, Cyclops being the leader, was the one to formulate it.

He was serious when the X-men were involved Jean said it was what she liked about him.

"Wolverine and Storm will guard the facility until given further orders. Iceman, Nightcrawler, and I will infiltrate the base to break Dazzler and Ariel out. Remember, no lethal attacks under any circumstances. MRDies will be on us, watch your back, lets do this."

Everyone got into their positions.

Seconds after the infiltration team entered the base, MRDies surrounded them.

Luckily, they were prepared for this situation.

Nightcrawler teleported with a "BAMPH!" and blue smoke behind him, Cyclops and Iceman easily took the agents down in H2H, and slowly intimidated them as they interrogated them, after they found the location of their teammates, they rushed to find them, and when they did, only one person guarded them, they weren't in MRD clothing, he wore a suit that closely resembled Wolverine's, and when you looked closer, you could see why.

It was Daken, 2 months ago, he was expelled from the X-Men because of his various attempt at getting staff and students to sleep with him, but no one expected him to join the ones who want to kill his own kind.

Cyclops, astonished, held back rage.

"How..How DARE YOU!" He shot an optic blast at him that went off course. "We trusted you!" Another optic blast flew at him. "Go to hell!"

He shot one of the most powerful optic blasts he had ever used at his life, Daken was hit, but his skin just regenerated, and he laughed.

"Shut up, god damn crybaby."

Within the blink of an eye, Cyclops was on the ground, knocked out.

Iceman looked around for Daken, but both were too late, Daken used a take-down attack on Bobby, but Dazzler and Ariel were gone.

In front of him, a portal materialized, Nightcrawler, Dazzler, Wolverine, Storm, and Ariel walked out of it.

Wolverine tried not to cry, "Don't make me do this."

Daken smirked, "Goodbye Old Man. Blink!"

A purple skinned peasant appeared from nowhere, she created 2 daggers in her hand and stabbed Daken and herself in the chest, they teleported out of the base.

Wolverine huffed, "Someone pick 'em up, we will meet up at the mansion."

#2 Posted by YoungJustice (6863 posts) - - Show Bio

Thoughts?

#3 Posted by TheCannon (18913 posts) - - Show Bio

@YoungJustice: Cool.

#4 Posted by ekrolo (434 posts) - - Show Bio

@YoungJustice: Very good indeed.

#5 Posted by joshmightbe (24907 posts) - - Show Bio

cool

#6 Posted by batkevin74 (10870 posts) - - Show Bio

@YoungJustice said:

Maryland MRD Base

"Wolverine, down!" Cyclops yelled out to Wolverine as he dodged a blast from a Sentinel, luckily he had gone through extreme training on the field for the last three months since the Sentinel Initiative was started. Wolverine ducked as a missile flew above his head; behind him Storm flew in and grabbed him by his arms, they soared above the Sentinel. Storm threw Wolverine on the head of it, while she gathered thunder. Nightcrawler teleported onto the scene, using his blue smoke to trick the Sentinel's vision, Iceman created a path of ice in front of him as he froze the Sentinel's hand, attempting to stop it from shooting.

All at once, Wolverine slashed the Sentinel's eyes, Iceman froze its hands, Nightcrawler dropped a MRD truck on its feet, Cyclops shot an optic blast at its torso, and Storm finished it off with a thunder strike. The mechanical menace never stood a chance.

They all grounded themselves, and Cyclops came up with their game plan "Wolverine and Storm will guard the facility until given further orders. Iceman, Nightcrawler, and I will infiltrate the base to break Dazzler and Ariel out. Remember, no lethal attacks under any circumstances. MRDies will be on us, watch your back, let’s do this."

Everyone got into their positions.

Seconds after the infiltration team entered the base, MRDies surrounded them. Luckily, they were prepared for this situation.

Nightcrawler teleported with a "BAMPH!" and blue smoke behind him, Cyclops and Iceman easily took the agents down in hand to hand combat, and slowly intimidated them as they interrogated them, after they found the location of their teammates, they rushed to find them, and when they did, only one person guarded them, they weren't in MRD clothing, he wore a suit that closely resembled Wolverine's, and when you looked closer, you could see why.

It was Daken, two months ago, he was expelled from the X-Men because of his various attempt at getting staff and students to sleep with him, but no one expected him to join the ones who want to kill his own kind.

Cyclops, astonished, held back rage.

"How..How DARE YOU!" He shot an optic blast at him that went off course. "We trusted you!" Another optic blast flew at him. "Go to hell!"

He shot one of the most powerful optic blasts he had ever used at his life, Daken was hit, but his skin just regenerated, and he laughed.

"Shut up, god damn crybaby."

Within the blink of an eye, Cyclops was on the ground, knocked out.

Iceman looked around for Daken, but both were too late, Daken used a take-down attack on Bobby, but Dazzler and Ariel were gone.

In front of him, a portal materialized, Nightcrawler, Dazzler, Wolverine, Storm, and Ariel walked out of it.

Wolverine tried not to cry, "Don't make me do this."

Daken smirked, "Goodbye Old Man. Blink!"

A purple skinned peasant appeared from nowhere, she created two daggers in her hand and stabbed Daken and herself in the chest, they teleported out of the base.

Wolverine huffed, "Someone pick 'em up, we will meet up at the mansion."

The stuff in bold is minor grammatical errors I corrected (like capital S for Sentinel) or a minor edit (me being editorial and changing some things), or me being pedantic and changing 2 to TWO

It's good but H2H, I know what it means but you really should write hand to hand.

C+ for you today, not quite a B but nearly :) Keep up the adventure

#7 Posted by Pyrogram (39471 posts) - - Show Bio

@YoungJustice: Lol Daken being kicked out for that, Short and good.

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#8 Posted by Mediumflyer7 (296 posts) - - Show Bio

Very cool. Did Kitty die?

#9 Posted by YoungJustice (6863 posts) - - Show Bio

@Mediumflyer7 said:

Very cool. Did Kitty die?

Yes.

#10 Posted by Mediumflyer7 (296 posts) - - Show Bio

@YoungJustice: @batkevin74: @joshmightbe: @ekrolo: Hello to everyone who read Marvel Re-Imagined: X-Men.

Marvel Re-Imagined: X-men #10 is posted and it continues from #9 but is new reader friendly so please check it out.

Thank you