#1 Edited by Mediumflyer7 (296 posts) - - Show Bio

Being re-written. Sorry :/

#2 Posted by TheCannon (19215 posts) - - Show Bio

@Mediumflyer7:

#3 Posted by Mediumflyer7 (296 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: Thanks!

#4 Posted by Pyrogram (41246 posts) - - Show Bio

This was another superb piece of writing!

#5 Posted by YoungJustice (6887 posts) - - Show Bio

Amazing!

#6 Posted by ekrolo (436 posts) - - Show Bio

Im a bit sick of the Jean/Cyclops pairing as its been overused, but overall a pretty solid if a little short issue.

#7 Posted by Mediumflyer7 (296 posts) - - Show Bio

@ekrolo: Ok, thank you for the feedback. I will try work n making my issues filled with more detail and length I future issues. I would agree with the Jean/Cyclops comment but what I will say is, things will change for them in upcoming issues. The main question I would like answered is, was it entertaining and if so, what about it was? (Or wasn't)

#8 Posted by ekrolo (436 posts) - - Show Bio

@Mediumflyer7: It came off as a chessy Jean/Cyclops situation of OH MY GOD JEAN!!!! YOU ARE GOING TO DIE!!! WHAT ABOUT OUR DREAMS OF HAVING PSYCHIC/PLANET KILLING/LAZUR EYED BABIES!!! I know im exagarating my description of the conversation, but it felt like very.... generic. I cant honestly blame you for this but lately im getting so goddamn sick of cliches in fiction and when I see a cliche conversation like that I just wanna blow up a hospital, why a hospital? Why not I say!