#1 Edited by YoungJustice (6379 posts) - - Show Bio

1 Hour Before Somalia

Government agents escorted Sabertooth to the interrogation room at the Team X facility, their guns were practically in their hands, they had no intention in letting Sabertooth rip them apart with his bare hands.

Stryker waited in the interrogation room, when Sabertooth crept in, he stood up, “Mr. Creed, how do you do?”

Sabertooth growled, “My name isn’t Creed..”

Stryker laughed, “Sure, those memories were implanted. Yet you seem to like to use the implanted memories than the real ones. I mean, you went through so much trouble to break out of here after you found out they where fake to find a telepath to cure you. Your memories are back, but the question is: Why do you still call Wolverine your brother?”

Sabertooth relaxed himself, “Logan is a good person, he wouldn’t kill a fly when he first joined this program, remember? He came in as a scientist in training, but...but you had that…that b *tch Silver Fox brainwash him! Just like you did me! Admit it, you fear mutants!”

Stryker looked at Sabertooth for a second, then sat down, “You didn’t answer my question Mr. Creed.”

Sabertooth looked down, “Because he helped me escape.”

30 Minuets Before Somalia

Wolverine suited up, he packed awfully light, a small knife was the only weapon in his arsenal. As if she was his opposite, Silver Fox walked in with her wide array of weaponry, ranging from throwing knives to laser pistols, due to this, she laughed at Wolverine “This isn’t a field trip ya know.”

Wolverine raised his eyebrow, “What?”

Silver Fox sat down on his bed, “We have to capture down Gregory Bishop. He is the richest mutant in this dimension right now. Not to mention his kill count.”

Wolverine looked oddly disturbed, “What kind of mad man counts the amount of people someone killed?”

Silver Fox grinned, then left the room, closing the door behind her.

Gregory Bishop’s Mansion, Somalia

“I’m here. Bishop just got in. Approximately 20 guards at the front. I’ll notify you when things are clear. Agent Zero out “ Agent Zero grabbed his pistols from his back pocket, he steadied his breathing. Suddenly, like a bat out of hell, he leaped down onto the ground, the guards saw him and instantly pointed there weapons at him. Zero did nothing but smirk, then added a comment to add insult to injury, “Nice guns.”

Zero jumped onto the wall behind the guards, making sure to shoot a few of them before they saw him.

As if he was invisible, Zero appeared in the middle of them all, his pistols gone, he strangled a man with a piece of carbon fiber. The guards instantly shot, but Zero was gone, and they ended up shooting each other.

Only a quarter of them where left, one after another, each of them threw their guns away and begged for mercy.

Zero dropped down from the sky, “No strings attached. Not a personal thing for the record.” Zero shot them each in the head, then went up to the humongous door. He placed a mini keypad on the lock, which turned into a literal keypad, the keypad turned into the shape of a key. Zero grinned, “Gotta love Weapon X tech.” He inserted the key in the door, when he got inside, it was pitch black, but you could see a light up the spiraling steps. Zero contacted his team on his com-link, “Continue on.”

Kestrel, or as his friends called him, the black cowboy, put his cigarette out and vanished in the air. He re-appeared at the mansion, he looked around the corner, only 2 guards stood watch at Bishop’s bedroom, quickly, Kestrel vanished and was only seen again with his ankles around a guards neck, he flipped backwards, making the guards neck snap beyond comprehension.

The other guard shook in fear, Kestrel connected his com-link to the rest of Team X and pointed his revolver at the guard.

BANG!

“All clear.”

Silver Fox and Wolverine made their move, rushing into the field. Silver Fox leaped and jumped up the gigantic wall as if she wasn’t having any trouble. Wolverine on the other hand had to use a grapple to get up.

Bishop walked out his bathroom, and surprisingly to both Silver Fox and Wolverine, a little girl walked up to Bishop, tugging on his pants as she held her teddy bear.

Silver Fox took out a grenade from her backpack, as she prepared to throw it, Wolverine knocked it away.

“What the hell! You were going to kill the girl!”

Silver Fox looked at Wolverine in fury, “It’s a smoke grenade dumb@ss! The girl wont be hurt while we can take Bishop.” Silver Fox prepared another smoke grenade.

Once again, Wolverine knocked it out her hand, “No!”

Silver Fox started to get extremely angry, she pointed a shotgun at his head, “You’re a liability anyway.” Before she could pull the trigger, Wolverine head butted her, then kicked her in her gut, making her fall the edge of the building.

He looked in the patio window, and Bishop looked at him in terror, Wolverine jumped on top of the roof and leaped into the woods, making sure to take his com-link out his ear. They’d be on the hunt for him now.

#2 Posted by TheCannon (16077 posts) - - Show Bio

@YoungJustice: Amazing.

#3 Posted by YoungJustice (6379 posts) - - Show Bio

Bump.

Thoughts?

#4 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

TOO MUCH AWESOME FOR ME HANDLE! [collapses face first into keyboard] gduydnjfmhbkdj

#5 Posted by YoungJustice (6379 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

TOO MUCH AWESOME FOR ME HANDLE! [collapses face first into keyboard] gduydnjfmhbkdj

LOL, thanks.

#6 Posted by batkevin74 (9750 posts) - - Show Bio

@YoungJustice said:

1 Hour Before, Somalia

Okay (and this is just me), but numbers are for maths! So One hour before. Also needs a comma or semi colon because setting the scene one hour before Somalia doesn't make sense...actually I think I'm being overly picky for no real reason, probably tired.

@YoungJustice said:

Government agents escorted Sabertooth to the interrogation room at the Team X facility, their guns were practically in their hands, they had no intention in letting Sabertooth rip them apart with his bare hands.

Stryker waited in the interrogation room, when Sabertooth crept in, he stood up, “Mr. Creed, how do you do?”

Sabertooth growled, “My name isn’t Creed..”

Sabertooth is escorted in and the Sabertooth crept in? You've got two conflicting actions

@YoungJustice said:

“What kind of mad man counts the amount of people someone killed?”

Ha ha ha very funny!

Pretty good overall