#1 Posted by BaneStrokeLoboGrundyBatArrow (1456 posts) - - Show Bio

Heres another Punisher story and if your not familiar with it then heres the link for the second issue. http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/marvel-mayhem-punisher-2-1459969/#3

The Hunt CONCLUSION

"Welcome to my paradise..."

That's all I let him say I whipped out my M-16 towards him and pressed the grenade launchers trigger.

*FOOMP*

The gernade hit target and an explosion was next.

"That ought to have taken care of that tree-hugging baster...."

*BAM*

Another sniper bullet pelted my chest again I was lucky to have body armor but I couldn't take much more of this.

Kraven called out,

"HA! You really think a simple grenade can take out the mighty Kraven! I am the hunter! I am...."

"Shut up."

I squeezed the trigger of my M-16 and hoped it hit. The guy was agile I'll give him that. He sprang up dropping his sniper as he did so and twisted and turned in the air dodging the bullets.

"Stand still freak!"

Finally a stray bullet hit him. Idiot was wearing only a weird a** vest so there was no doubt that he was bleeding out from his wound. He fell to the ground and I dropped my gun and pulled out a knife. I charged towards him and tackled him to the ground. I held the knife to his throat.

"Tell me everything."

He smiled (of course) and said, '

"Too late its already done!" My creation is finished."

"Creation?"

I felt a sharp pain as I was thrown off of Kraven by an unknown force. I hit a tree and tried to stare what was before me. Kraven got up and said,

"This,

I looked at what he was talking about and felt sick. Kraven explained to me what that THING was.

"A lion-tiger humanoid hybrid one of my finer works!"

He looked at me with a crazy smile and laughed,

"Looks like I won't have to kill you after all!"

He snapped his fingers and said,

"But this will."

"RARRRRRRRRR!'

The hybrids roar pierced my ears, and I saw it was getting ready to charge.

"Well Kraven this explains everything, the stealing from the zoo the hired druggys, and the missing body builder, you used all of the kidnappings to make this. Damn..."

I was out of time all I had was a Glock and a bowie knife. Dammit Frank you just had to drop your hardware! I looked back and saw my M-16 some several yards feet away. I spun around and started to run for it. Then that thing charged with me.

"GRAAAAAAAAA!"

I kept running until I was a few feet away from my M-16 that's when I was stopped by the monster.

*THWAK!*

I was hurled across the fake jungle and skidded to a stop. I got up only to be picked up by the monster. Its hot and mouth were very close to my face. In an attempt to to get out I closed my eyes and thrusted out my knife. I heard a squishy sound and noticed my knife had punched the monster in the head. Kraken looked very surprised I might add. The monster crumpled to the ground and I walked to pick up my M-16 to check if their was any damage.

"No! I made it to perfection! It can't die from a knife wound!"

I dropped the M-16 I don't need a gun to hurt this bastard, besides bullets would come later.

"Well Kraven looks like you should of gave it harder skin. Oh and I believe this is long overdue."

Kraven smiled pulling out a knife he said,

"Your defenseless without your gun!"

He yelled at me screaming and I gave him a good elbow to the face. I disarmed him and threw him to the ground.

I picked up the M-16 as he began to stand up,

"I don't think so Kraven."

*BRAP BRAP BRAP BRAP BRAP BRAP*

I turned around leaving that sack of sh** to rot. I heard a gasp,

"FRANK! YOU WILL DIE I SWEAR! THE HUNT IS ON!" *COUGH!* I WILL *COUGH!* KILL you..."

"Sure thing."

I looked at his body and walked away, I have to say, job well done Frank, job well done........

Epilogue

"Your positive thats his body?"

The huge man smiled at his partner,

"Of course its his body, who else would be wearing some funky a** clothes. AHAHAHHAHAHAHA!"

He bellowed with laughter as he swung the dead body over his shoulder

"C'mon we got some resurrecting to do AHAHAHAHAHHAHAAH!"

END OF THE HUNT.....

#2 Posted by batkevin74 (12111 posts) - - Show Bio

@banestrokelobogrundybatarrow: I really liked this! It flowed well, especially with the pictures; nice pacing and a bit of weird voodoo stuff at the end of the story.

Some minor format/grammar stuff like "Your positive thats his body?" should be You're positive that's his body? When in doubt go the long way then shorten it...You are positive that is his body...You're positive that's his body? Or just do what I do, type it on a word doc, hit spellcheck and it does 90% of the work for you, then post it up here :)

#3 Posted by BaneStrokeLoboGrundyBatArrow (1456 posts) - - Show Bio
#4 Posted by TommytheHitman (3951 posts) - - Show Bio

Great stuff! This need's more comments. Honestly who DOESN'T love the Punisher?

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#5 Posted by batkevin74 (12111 posts) - - Show Bio

Great stuff! This need's more comments. Honestly who DOESN'T love the Punisher?

Jigsaw, Kingpin, Bullseye, Ma Gnucci

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#7 Posted by jatoe48er (225 posts) - - Show Bio

Great story dude, flowed well and I enjoyed it!

#8 Edited by BaneStrokeLoboGrundyBatArrow (1456 posts) - - Show Bio
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#10 Edited by ImpurestCheese (7147 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74: Me, what Marvel Now has done to the Thunderbolts is unforgivable (opinion). It's become an excuse to draw the film fans in with characters they know rather then focusing on what made the skerries great. Villains being forced to play the hero and making them more then baddies of the week by giving them character.

#11 Edited by ekrolo (488 posts) - - Show Bio

I really like that Franks the one whose narrating the story and the way you use pictures is just fantastic, I also like that this was a short and sweet two issue story, I cant stand it when a story arc is dragged out for like 10 issues.

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#13 Posted by ekrolo (488 posts) - - Show Bio

@tommythehitman: I actually like Lobdells Superman, I meant something more along the lines of AvX

#14 Posted by TommytheHitman (3951 posts) - - Show Bio

@ekrolo: I was talking about Teen Titans. Also another good example is... "shudder" Age of Ultron...

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#15 Posted by ekrolo (488 posts) - - Show Bio

@tommythehitman: Hell yea it is, if that thing didn't come out weekly......

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#17 Posted by ekrolo (488 posts) - - Show Bio

@tommythehitman: I meant the pace of that fucking thing was already so slow if it didn't come out weekly it would eve even more unbearable to read.

#18 Posted by TommytheHitman (3951 posts) - - Show Bio

@ekrolo: That whole event was just a cluster fu$k.

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