Marvel Knights #3 - (Script)

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PREVIOUSLY: Marvel Knights #2 - (Script)

"Carnage Rules" - Rated M

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Page 1

1/ Splash Page/ Close up on Hybrid. Doppleganger is right in front of his face, his mouth open, and Hybrid has both his purple hands on him. One hand on his upper jaw, and one on the lower jaw, keeping Doppleganger’s mouth open, the touch visibly burning the skin.

SFX: SSSSSS
DOPPLEGANGER: GGRRARRRR!!!
CAPTION: SCOTT: Come on… come on…

Page 2

1/ Same shot, Doppleganger leaning in, ignoring the burning.

SFX: SSSSSS
DOPPLEGANGER: MMMUUHHHH
HYBRID: GRGGHH-
DOPPLEGANGER: MUUHHHHRRRRRHHH

2/ Doppleganger’s mouth right in front of Hybrid’s face, an intense struggle.

DOPPLEGANGER: MUUUHHHRRRRRRRRRDDDDEERRRRRR!!!!!
HYBRID: GNNH

3/ Hybrid snapping Doppleganger’s jaw, his lower jaw snapping downward unnaturally.

HYBRID: GRAGGH!!
SFX: CRKK
CAPTION: SCOTT: OH-OH-I- I DIDN’T--

Page 3

1/ Hybrid punching Doppleganger down to the ground.

SFX: WHAK
HYBRID: S-sorry!
CAPTION: MIKE: Sorry!?
CAPTION: SCOTT: I SNAPPED HIS JAW, FOR GOD’S SAKE!!!

2/ Deadpool looking at his arm as it’s sliced off by Carnage’s claws.

SFX: GSHHK
DEADPOOL: AGHTHATSTINGS
CARNAGE: HAHAHAA!

3/ Doppleganger looking up at Hybrid, his lower jaw hanging.

DOPPLEGANGER: Hggnng…
CAPTION: SCOTT: Oh god, he’s whining. L-like a dog. Oh god.
CAPTION: MIKE: HE WAS TRYING TO BITE OUR FACE OFF!
CAPTION: TYLER: MIKE! Relax! Scott- listen, you didn’t mean to-

4/ Close up on Hybrid, his eyes wide.

CAPTION: SCOTT: AGH!!
CAPTION: MIKE: You feel that too?
CAPTION: TYLER: Almost like—like- a TINGLING in our head!

Page 4

1/ Hybrid looking behind him.

CAPTION: AGONY: The original symbiotes that we came from had a short range second sight, a sense. We thought we had lost it in the changes, but it’s come back.
CAPTION: AGONY: Whatever’s setting it off must be a big thre--

2/ Punisher standing on his van, firing the sonic-microwave emitter, which fires a solid beam of red light.

SFX: REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
CAPTION: PUNISHER: Sounds like nails on a chalkboard and feels like I’m on a barbeque. And that’s the recoil.

3/ Hybrid jumping out of the way of the beam, and onto the front wall of the bar. There are two windows under him, though the hole from Doppleganger is inbetween the windows.

SFX: REEEE
HYBRID: WHOA!!
CAPTION: SCOTT: Are you telling me we can see the future now?
CAPTION: AGONY: We’re telling you that you can sense danger when it’s close to you, now.

4/ Punisher looking up from aiming as the beam is now off.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: Fast.

5/ Punisher aiming the beam up as it fires.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: But in the end, it’s always fish in a barrel.

Page 5

1/ Hybrid hit by the beam, his symbiote freaking out tendril-wise. There’s a small trail of brick smashed inward from where the beam hit, and it didn’t go to any window.

HYBRID: AAAAGGGGHHH!!!
SFX: REEEEEEEEEEEEEE

2/ Hybrid after falling off the wall and smashing into the ground.

SFX: WHUD

3/ Doppleganger raising his head.

DOPPLEGANGER: HNNGGHH…

4/ Carnage looking over from Deadpool, who is now without both arms, and toward the hole in the wall.

CARNAGE: Doggy?
DEADPOOL: Holyf**kmuffins. Thishurts.

Page 6

1/ Carnage jumping out of the bar through the hole in the wall and toward Doppleganger.

CARNAGE: DOGGY!
CARNAGE: THE HELL HAPPENED?

2/ Carnage standing over Doppleganger.

CARNAGE: Thought you had it handled boy
DOPPLEGANGER: Hgnn…

3/ Carnage looking over at Hybrid, who’s twitching on the ground.

CARNAGE: You kicked the hell outta me when my legs were on the fritz
CARNAGE: Till I wrapped em round with my blood again and learned to walk
CARNAGE: And now ya kick my dog?
HYBRID: Nghh…
CAPTION: SCOTT: Oh god, he’s gonna-he’s gonna kill us…
CAPTION: MIKE: Screw that!

4/ Punisher looking at the gun, while crouching behind his van.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: Two minute re-load time.
CAPTION: PUNISHER: Move to a new position.

Page 7

1/ Deadpool looking at his arms on the floor

DEADPOOL: Boy, this is awkward.
WEASEL: Hey, I’m back.
DEADPOOL: WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN?

2/ Weasel sitting in his control chair.

WEASEL: Burning your Spidey plushies. I told you.
DEADPOOL: YOU BETTER NOT HAVE!
WEASEL: Only kidding.
WEASEL: (Maybe.)
DEADPOOL: Dude, I’m in a bit of a situation here.
WEASEL: Really? Do tell.
DEADPOOL: Well, it all started when I met a new friend.

3/ Hybrid looking up at Carnage standing over him, Carnage forming a big axe by pushing both his arms together.

CARNAGE: Heh heh
CARNAGE: I’d ask fer last words but that’s stupid ta do

4/ Carnage swinging his arms down.

CARNAGE: MURDER AIN’T ABOUT LAST WORDS

5/ The barrel of Punisher’s gun, firing.

SFX: REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Page 8

1/ Carnage hit by the beam, raising his arms up as his symbiote freaks out.

CARNAGE: GGYAAGHH
SFX: REEEEEEE

2/ Hybrid in his Phage form, yellow spikes forming over his foot as he raises it.

CAPTION: MIKE: I’ll get us out of this.

3/ Hybrid kicking his spike-plated foot into Carnage’s chest.

SFX: WHUD
HYBRID: NGH!!

4/ Deadpool walking out of the bar with both his arms, though the arms are attached to the wrong sides, and toward Hybrid. Hybrid’s symbiote is just calming down.

DEADPOOL: I heard a noise--
DEADPOOL: Were you HIT?!
HYBRID: Yeah-I think it’s THE PUNISHER!

5/ Carnage knocked over on his back, his symbiote freaking out, Deadpool looking past him and toward the street, where Punisher’s van is. Punisher isn’t visible.

DEADPOOL: THAT LITTLE SNIPER SUMB*TCH!!!
WEASEL: You gonna tell me the rest of the story? Because before you miraculously improv’d your arms back on, you kinda just said “It all started when I met a new friend” and cut me off from asking more.
HYBRID: He isn’t firing again.
DEADPOOL: His weapon must have a recharge time.
WEASEL: I’m chopped liver. Hi there.

Page 9

1/ Deadpool with both katanas out, holding them awkwardly.

DEADPOOL: LET’S GO KICK HIS ASS!!

2/ Deadpool running from Hybrid toward the street, Hybrid going after, but looking behind at the same time.

HYBRID: We’re just LEAVING them?
DEADPOOL: NO TIME! He’ll recharge and then attack you again if we bother with ‘em!
DEADPOOL: NO ONE SHOOTS MY BUDDIES AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!

3/ Hybrid running after Deadpool.

CAPTION: TYLER: This could be a huge mistake, just leaving them--
CAPTION: MIKE: No! He has a point!

4/ Punisher in the driver’s seat, hands on the wheel.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: No time for the recharge. Move.

Page 10

1/ Scream sprawled out on the ground, Jenna’s face partially visible, her symbiote splattered about her, blood coming out from her side, a large wound, but the symbiote seems to be healing it at the same time. She has a few crescent darts in her as well.

SCREAM: Ghhk…

2/ The Moon Knights standing over her. Moon Knight Grant has the axe in both hands, ready for another go. Moon Knight Lockley has two more crescent darts ready.

MOON KNIGHT GRANT: I suppose I lied about us being quick. Besides, we have a full twenty minutes before the Anti-Venom webbing wears off. We’ll just speed things up near the end.
MOON KNIGHT LOCKLEY: Make the b*tch suffer and moan as long as possible.

3/ Moon Knight Grant with the axe above his head.

MOON KNIGHT GRANT: Time for another round!

4/ Moon Knight Lockley’s hand tossing out a crescent dart.

SFX: GHSK

Page 11

1/ Deadpool jumping at the back of Punisher’s van, his katanas in hand so they point down.

2/ Close up of the katanas managing to pierce the back of the van’s roof.

SFX: SHK
DEADPOOL: BINGO!

3/ Deadpool looking up to see Hybrid in mid-jump over him.

DEADPOOL: (Whoa.)

4/ Hybrid reaching his hand out to Deadpool.

HYBRID: Come on!

5/ Deadpool grabbing Hybrid’s hand.

DEADPOOL: EPIC team-up moment!
DEADPOOL: (Insert theme song!)

Page 12

1/ The van turning onto a different street, Hybrid has visibly shoved one of his hand-blades into the van for support and is holding onto Deadpool to make sure he doesn’t fall off.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: Resort to fancy driving. Throw them off.

2/ Carnage starting to get up, his symbiote recovering.

CARNAGE: Yowza
DOPPLEGANGER: HRRRRRRR

3/ Carnage looking over toward Doppleganger. Doppleganger is on fire, roasting in a roaring blaze.

CARNAGE: DOGGY?!

Page 13

1/ Ghost Rider walking in view, from behind Carnage.

GHOST RIDER: CLETUS KASADY.

2/ Carnage looking over.

CARNAGE: The hell’re you s’posed to be?
CARNAGE: AND DID YOU DO THAT?

3/ Ghost Rider grabbing Carnage by the throat.

GHOST RIDER: Your sin is … second best.
CARNAGE: GHK

4/ Doppleganger, visibly MELTING, reaching his hand out for Carnage.

DOPPLEGANGER: Hnngg…

5/ Doppleganger’s body simply collapses into molten ash.

SFX: SSHHH

Page 14

1/ Carnage looking over at Doppleganger’s molten ashes.

CARNAGE: HEY!
CARNAGE: HE WAS GOOD AT KILLING!

2/ Ghost Rider glaring into Carnage’s face.

GHOST RIDER: Your sin is second best.
GHOST RIDER: The perfect sin is here.
GHOST RIDER: I will have it.

3/ Carnage’s symbiote boiling and sizzling, tendrils freaking out.

GHOST RIDER: You and all those like you will help me.
CARNAGE: GGGRHHHH

Page 15

1/ Hybrid fully cutting open a hole in Punisher’s roof.

SFX: CHRK
HYBRID: GOTCHA!
DEADPOOL: BANZAI!
PUNISHER: Dammit.

2/ Punisher grabbing a pistol from a holster.

3/ Punisher aiming up at Deapool and firing.

SFX: BLAM

4/ Deadpool falling off the van, his head bleeding. Hybrid looking back.

HYBRID: NO!!
CAPTION: PUNISHER: One down.

Page 16

1/ Hybrid’s hand grabbing the barrel of Punisher’s pistol.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: Strong.

2/ Punisher’s hand on the wheel, losing grip.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: Losing my--

3/ The van flipping over sideways over a curb.

Page 17

1/ The axe’s head grabbed by Scream’s hands.

MOON KNIGHT GRANT: What-

2/ Scream’s face, a boiling mass of symbiotic tendrils.

SCREAM: SSSSIIIIINNNNNN

3/ Moon Knight Lockley looking over at Moon Knight Grant.

MOON KNIGHT LOCKLEY: IT’S HAPPENING!
MOON KNIGHT GRANT: WHAT?!
MOON KNIGHT LOCKLEY: THE GHOST RIDER MUST BE HERE!

4/ Scream standing up, fully healed, her face a mass of tendrils.

SCREAM: GET OUT
SCREAM: OF OUR
SCREAM: WAY

Page 18

1/ Anti-Venom on a rooftop, his head in his hands.

ANTI-VENOM: NGH--!
ANTI-VENOM: S-SUH--

2/ Anti-Venom’s face.

ANTI-VENOM: SSS

3/ Anti-Venom’s face is now a distorted mass of tendrils.

ANTI-VENOM: SIIINNNNNN!!!

Page 19

1/ Anti-Venom and Scream webslinging near each other.

ANTI-VENOM: SIIIINNN
SCREAM: MUST GET IT

2/ Carnage walking toward the van.

CARNAGE: SSIIIIIIINNNN

3/ The van’s door kicked open.

4/ Punisher crawling over the open door.

CAPTION: PUNISHER: Two broken ribs.

5/ Ghost Rider standing on the street, looking at the van’s crash site. Carnage is walking toward it.

Page 20

1/ Splash Page/ Punisher looking outward. Hybrid is on the top of the toppled van, his face a mass of tendrils as well. Anti-Venom and Scream are crawling on a wall and looking down at the scene.

GHOST RIDER: Frank Castle.
GHOST RIDER: The Punisher.
GHOST RIDER: Who kills as he breathes.
GHOST RIDER: Who sheds blood as sweat.
GHOST RIDER: YOUR SIN… IS PERFECT…

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NEXT TIME: VALLEY FORGE

I DO NOT OWN ANY MARVEL CHARACTER.

THE NEXT PART OF THE STORY: Marvel Knights #4 (FINALE) - (Script)

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#1  Edited By _Marco_Smith_

Whoa... Was not expecting it to be Punisher.

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#2  Edited By KisserNe

OMG!!!

I had to read this right as I saw it posted!

Totally digged it! I can't wait to see what happens next!

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#3  Edited By InnerVenom123

@_Marco_Smith_ said:

Whoa... Was not expecting it to be Punisher.

You thought it would be Carnage?

@KisserNe said:

OMG!!!

I had to read this right as I saw it posted!

Totally digged it! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks so much! :D I hope you stick around with reading my stuff after this story! I've got bunches more planned.

Also, I'll go dig into your blog-fics when I have time ^_^ I've just gotta read Impersonator's Iron Man story first haha.

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@InnerVenom123:

First of all, I was thrown in a loop for who it would be! O-O

Second of all, you are quite welcome and I definitely plan on sticking through the rest of this series as well as anything else you post! I have to get to your other works and.... I wish you good luck with Impersonator's Iron Man because I am working on it too (actually, I just started it, the other night.) It's very, very good but long and there are so many! But, I look forward to his, yours and seeing what you think of mine <(^ - ^)>

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@KisserNe said:

@InnerVenom123:

First of all, I was thrown in a loop for who it would be! O-O

Second of all, you are quite welcome and I definitely plan on sticking through the rest of this series as well as anything else you post! I have to get to your other works and.... I wish you good luck with Impersonator's Iron Man because I am working on it too (actually, I just started it, the other night.) It's very, very good but long and there are so many! But, I look forward to his, yours and seeing what you think of mine <(^ - ^)>

Thanks! I hinted at two characters being it, so that was the intent. :P

Awesome! Glad you wanna check out my other stuff. As for his stuff, it's all good, so who cares if its long? Haha. ^_^ Can't wait to read yours when I'm done.

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#6  Edited By _Marco_Smith_

@InnerVenom123: At first. Then I thought it was going to be Scream at the end of the 2nd. You sly dog :P

Also, Deadpool team-up theme.

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#7  Edited By InnerVenom123

@_Marco_Smith_: :P

And I love that theme.

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#8  Edited By The Impersonator

Great chapter! The art covers are awesome!

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#9  Edited By The Impersonator

@KisserNe: How come I didn't notice this comment before? I must have been scrolling down at a quick pace after reading Marvel Knights. :P

Anyways, thanks for the compliment. :)

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#10  Edited By InnerVenom123

@_Marco_Smith_: @KisserNe: @The Impersonator: Once again, thanks!

Here's something for the finale to keep you guessing.

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#11  Edited By The Impersonator

@InnerVenom123: You're welcome!

Oh man, I surrender. Could you tell me what's gonna happen next? I really want to know. :P

Nah! just kidding. I can wait. xP

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@InnerVenom123: AH! Excited!

@The Impersonator: Oh and you are quite welcome, bud!